Mortal: Chuan Xin Ruyin? Backhand to Seize Qi Yunxiao's Body

Travel through Xin Ruyin and capture the sky. . . You probably wrote this after drinking fake wine!

1. The name is not chosen well, Qi Daozu. The name is too big and makes people unable to substitute it. 2. Although it is understandable to seize one's body, mortals can only seize one's body once. It is best to have an explanation here. After all, you may have already taken one's body. 3. The reason why I gave up the book is that you, a person who seizes the body, dare to go to the big sect. Even if you can't find it in the foundation building stage, can't you find it in the pill forming stage? You can't find it in the Dan-Jie stage, but in the Nascent Soul stage, there should at least be some heart-felt tests when joining the sect.

As a master of weapon refining and formations, you are actually afraid of running out of money? No resources? Choose an ordinary skill to prepare the elixir and then change it to a more powerful one. Why is it called foundation building? Just because it counts as the foundation, step by step, it is to widen the meridians and increase the upper limit of mana. It will be more obvious in the later period. It is equivalent to the foundation of a building made of C15 concrete. When the building reaches the 5th floor, it is found that it cannot bear the weight of the main structure, so it can only be demolished. But if you use C100 concrete as the foundation, you can build 100 floors. If you want to add more later, there is no problem. It is really a matter of choosing sesame seeds and throwing watermelon. Even if you choose a powerful skill in the Dan Formation stage, the result will be It's okay to change the elixir to other powerful techniques of the same attribute. Just like a mage, other people's golden elixir period mana is 1000, and yours is 600. If you don't have any mana after two hits, you are just waiting to die. Even if you have a formation, you still have to have some time. Time preparation, the enemy is not a fool, write a novel by yourself, reasonable chance skills, the original book only talks about a few skills, a Dayan Jue, Qingyuan Sword Technique, Yuanci Divine Light, Xuanyin Jue, Brahma Saint's True Demonic Technique, are there no others? There are so many multi-dimensional infant stages, and there are no powerful skills, let alone the transformation of gods. Alas, people who watch it are confused and don't want to watch it. Withdraw......

I won't rate it, because after all, I don't even have the desire to read it, and writing a review is just to give the author a suggestion. When I saw the synopsis, I didn't want to read it. A man transformed into a woman and traveled through time to become Xin Ruyin, and then took over Qi Yunxiao. Don't you think it's superfluous? This is a bit baffling. Wouldn't it be better if you just take over Qi Yunxiao? Why do we have to do this so much?

You can use magic weapons at the early stage of foundation building. I have read hundreds of mortal fanfics and this is the first time I have seen it?

There are only a few points when watching fan videos for men. The most important thing is to make up for regrets and accept girls. This book will not mention the first point, but the latter point will not work with Nangong Wan. It is okay not to accept it, as long as you don't write it (don't enter the forbidden area, opening the forbidden area is briefly mentioned), but what does it mean to enter the forbidden area and not accept it and let it out? (Some people say that accepting Nangong Wan is not interesting, but it is a big deal to accept a female fan in a male channel. Some people talk about the cause and effect of the Taoist ancestors in the immortal world, but how many years have passed between the original mortal work and the fairy world chapter? The original work does not have much description of the fairy world, and there are a few mortal fans who will write the fairy world chapter. Basically, they want to rely on the fairy world chapter and just mention the cause and effect of the Taoist ancestors and so on. ) I won't talk about the authors of fanfics, after all, they have to make money, but I can't figure it out when looking at the readers of fanfics. They always mention the big cause and effect behind the original protagonist being so awesome in the later period. I don't even think about this being a fanfic. Don't worry about how awesome the original protagonist is. If there is a new protagonist here, then the new protagonist is the best. Since the fanfic protagonist is destined to reach the top, isn't there a big cause and effect behind the new protagonist? No matter what others say, this place is a poisonous point for me. If others want to criticize, they can comment freely. Anyway, I give it two stars.

Even if you write a female protagonist, or a female version of Han Lidu, the two lovers who will never change their lives in the original work will come to you to directly fight for their lives? Even if you change your gender, why don't you just write about two people who haven't met each other yet and don't fall in love? Just write a female version of Han Li? Or bringing some lily is not unacceptable.

The protagonist has to do everything with Han Li. Han Li is everywhere. Don't you think it's awkward? Han Li's personality won't always deal with you.

I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.

You've already established your foundation, but you still don't intend to make a good Kung Fu book, so you're just trying to fish out, you idiot!