
Mortal: Chuan Xin Ruyin? Backhand to Seize Qi Yunxiao's Body
About This Novel
Qi Daozu opened his eyes and became Xin Ruyin, an important female supporting character in the early stage of "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation to Immortality". The problem of changing from male to female and having the body of a dragon roaring. In order not to die young, he had no choice but to take Qi Yunxiao's body. Fortunately, he has Taishang Laojun's Bagua furnace, which can not only help him refine magic weapons, magic weapons and ammunition, but also deduce magic weapons and elixir formulas. Legendary treasures appeared in his hands one after another, such as the jade purification bottle, the human race bag, the exquisite tower, the diamond carving, the human emperor banner, the immortal-killing flying knife...
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Official(14)Scraped 4d ago
Mind a little
1. The name is not chosen well, Qi Daozu. The name is too big and makes people unable to substitute it. 2. Although it is understandable to seize one's body, mortals can only seize one's body once. It is best to have an explanation here. After all, you may have already taken one's body. 3. The reason why I gave up the book is that you, a person who seizes the body, dare to go to the big sect. Even if you can't find it in the foundation building stage, can't you find it in the pill forming stage? You can't find it in the Dan-Jie stage, but in the Nascent Soul stage, there should at least be some heart-felt tests when joining the sect.
Travel through Xin Ruyin and capture the sky. . . You probably wrote this after drinking fake wine!
Title Introduction Persuading Resignation
Even if you write a female protagonist, or a female version of Han Lidu, the two lovers who will never change their lives in the original work will come to you to directly fight for their lives? Even if you change your gender, why don't you just write about two people who haven't met each other yet and don't fall in love? Just write a female version of Han Li? Or bringing some lily is not unacceptable.
The choice of exercises was a failure.
As a master of weapon refining and formations, you are actually afraid of running out of money? No resources? Choose an ordinary skill to prepare the elixir and then change it to a more powerful one. Why is it called foundation building? Just because it counts as the foundation, step by step, it is to widen the meridians and increase the upper limit of mana. It will be more obvious in the later period. It is equivalent to the foundation of a building made of C15 concrete. When the building reaches the 5th floor, it is found that it cannot bear the weight of the main structure, so it can only be demolished. But if you use C100 concrete as the foundation, you can build 100 floors. If you want to add more later, there is no problem. It is really a matter of choosing sesame seeds and throwing watermelon. Even if you choose a powerful skill in the Dan Formation stage, the result will be It's okay to change the elixir to other powerful techniques of the same attribute. Just like a mage, other people's golden elixir period mana is 1000, and yours is 600. If you don't have any mana after two hits, you are just waiting to die. Even if you have a formation, you still have to have some time. Time preparation, the enemy is not a fool, write a novel by yourself, reasonable chance skills, the original book only talks about a few skills, a Dayan Jue, Qingyuan Sword Technique, Yuanci Divine Light, Xuanyin Jue, Brahma Saint's True Demonic Technique, are there no others? There are so many multi-dimensional infant stages, and there are no powerful skills, let alone the transformation of gods. Alas, people who watch it are confused and don't want to watch it. Withdraw......
There is no system that I like, it must be given a five-star rating
I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.
You can use magic weapons at the early stage of foundation building. I have read hundreds of mortal fanfics and this is the first time I have seen it?
When you refine the magic weapon, you only need to shape it and not embed it into the magic circle? 😌
The plot is reasonable and not trivial
The plot is reasonable, it is not a Long Aotian plot, novices should be careful!
I haven't read the book yet. I'll go and there are always people saying that the body of the Dragon Roar is in the soul, reincarnation and the body-taking. That's fine, just take the man's body directly. No matter whether the Dragon's Body is still there or not, it's successful and you can't die.
If you have never eaten shit, come in and give it a try. Ten words.
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Official(14)Scraped 4d ago
Mind a little
1. The name is not chosen well, Qi Daozu. The name is too big and makes people unable to substitute it. 2. Although it is understandable to seize one's body, mortals can only seize one's body once. It is best to have an explanation here. After all, you may have already taken one's body. 3. The reason why I gave up the book is that you, a person who seizes the body, dare to go to the big sect. Even if you can't find it in the foundation building stage, can't you find it in the pill forming stage? You can't find it in the Dan-Jie stage, but in the Nascent Soul stage, there should at least be some heart-felt tests when joining the sect.
Travel through Xin Ruyin and capture the sky. . . You probably wrote this after drinking fake wine!
Title Introduction Persuading Resignation
Even if you write a female protagonist, or a female version of Han Lidu, the two lovers who will never change their lives in the original work will come to you to directly fight for their lives? Even if you change your gender, why don't you just write about two people who haven't met each other yet and don't fall in love? Just write a female version of Han Li? Or bringing some lily is not unacceptable.
The choice of exercises was a failure.
As a master of weapon refining and formations, you are actually afraid of running out of money? No resources? Choose an ordinary skill to prepare the elixir and then change it to a more powerful one. Why is it called foundation building? Just because it counts as the foundation, step by step, it is to widen the meridians and increase the upper limit of mana. It will be more obvious in the later period. It is equivalent to the foundation of a building made of C15 concrete. When the building reaches the 5th floor, it is found that it cannot bear the weight of the main structure, so it can only be demolished. But if you use C100 concrete as the foundation, you can build 100 floors. If you want to add more later, there is no problem. It is really a matter of choosing sesame seeds and throwing watermelon. Even if you choose a powerful skill in the Dan Formation stage, the result will be It's okay to change the elixir to other powerful techniques of the same attribute. Just like a mage, other people's golden elixir period mana is 1000, and yours is 600. If you don't have any mana after two hits, you are just waiting to die. Even if you have a formation, you still have to have some time. Time preparation, the enemy is not a fool, write a novel by yourself, reasonable chance skills, the original book only talks about a few skills, a Dayan Jue, Qingyuan Sword Technique, Yuanci Divine Light, Xuanyin Jue, Brahma Saint's True Demonic Technique, are there no others? There are so many multi-dimensional infant stages, and there are no powerful skills, let alone the transformation of gods. Alas, people who watch it are confused and don't want to watch it. Withdraw......
There is no system that I like, it must be given a five-star rating
I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.
You can use magic weapons at the early stage of foundation building. I have read hundreds of mortal fanfics and this is the first time I have seen it?
When you refine the magic weapon, you only need to shape it and not embed it into the magic circle? 😌
The plot is reasonable and not trivial
The plot is reasonable, it is not a Long Aotian plot, novices should be careful!
I haven't read the book yet. I'll go and there are always people saying that the body of the Dragon Roar is in the soul, reincarnation and the body-taking. That's fine, just take the man's body directly. No matter whether the Dragon's Body is still there or not, it's successful and you can't die.
If you have never eaten shit, come in and give it a try. Ten words.









