
The Great Swordsman of One Piece
by Yu Junru
About This Novel
Captain Roger dreams of overturning the world, while the vice-captain is confused and abducted onto a pirate ship; Mr. Swordsman strives for the supreme glory of the swordsman, and the sniper is burdened with the dreams of a ship of people; the mechanic wants to witness the truth of the world with his own eyes, and the chef is looking for the legendary place; the monkey Jin is chasing the unbelievable legend of his ancestors, but the ship doctor is just for the longing in his heart. Oh, there is also a fishman sailor. At first, he just looked forward to returning to his hometown... Ps: Modify Roger's age at sea and slightly adjust the timeline. Ps: Let's add a group number: 634097699. I hope all book friends will join the group. Thank you for your support~~
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Official(132)Scraped 29d ago
The protagonist is too good! Rubbish
I feel like the main character you wrote is Roger.
How did you manage to write the protagonist as a peripheral character? ? ? ? ? ? ?
Modifying the timeline is nondescript. If you want to write about Roger but also want to write a plot, age is an issue. . Judging by their appearance, Roger went to sea around 20 years old, Execution went to sea around 40 years ago, and Luffy went to sea 20 years later. . He's at least 60 years old, what's going on with the protagonist? ? Haven't you noticed that all the contemporaries have gray hair? ? Unless you practice more in other systems, such as immortality or other two-dimensional systems, and then become immortal, it's almost enough. . It's not good to go out for fun when you're old. .
The title was eaten by me
I have to say that Luffy really looks like Roger
The author wrote about the war on top, and it had to be written like this: Hawkeye was not about to chop Luffy, and then you suddenly blocked Hawkeye's slash with a slash from outside the surrounding wall, and then everyone was surprised. Also, on the Shampoo Islands, Bear must shoot all Luffy's friends away for training. And Whitebeard's death would be a bigger blow to Ace. Let Ace and Luffy train together. Bit went to help Whitebeard guard the territory until Ace finished training, and Bit's mission was completed.
The writing is just okay
But the ages of the characters in the timeline are too confusing
I feel like there's something wrong with the age of the characters in One Piece
Rayleigh was already 76 when he first appeared on the scene. He shouldn't have been a young man 25 years ago? However, when he appeared in the original work, he appeared as a young man with blond hair. How could a middle-aged man in his 50s follow Roger out?
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Official(132)Scraped 29d ago
The protagonist is too good! Rubbish
I feel like the main character you wrote is Roger.
How did you manage to write the protagonist as a peripheral character? ? ? ? ? ? ?
Modifying the timeline is nondescript. If you want to write about Roger but also want to write a plot, age is an issue. . Judging by their appearance, Roger went to sea around 20 years old, Execution went to sea around 40 years ago, and Luffy went to sea 20 years later. . He's at least 60 years old, what's going on with the protagonist? ? Haven't you noticed that all the contemporaries have gray hair? ? Unless you practice more in other systems, such as immortality or other two-dimensional systems, and then become immortal, it's almost enough. . It's not good to go out for fun when you're old. .
The title was eaten by me
I have to say that Luffy really looks like Roger
The author wrote about the war on top, and it had to be written like this: Hawkeye was not about to chop Luffy, and then you suddenly blocked Hawkeye's slash with a slash from outside the surrounding wall, and then everyone was surprised. Also, on the Shampoo Islands, Bear must shoot all Luffy's friends away for training. And Whitebeard's death would be a bigger blow to Ace. Let Ace and Luffy train together. Bit went to help Whitebeard guard the territory until Ace finished training, and Bit's mission was completed.
The writing is just okay
But the ages of the characters in the timeline are too confusing
I feel like there's something wrong with the age of the characters in One Piece
Rayleigh was already 76 when he first appeared on the scene. He shouldn't have been a young man 25 years ago? However, when he appeared in the original work, he appeared as a young man with blond hair. How could a middle-aged man in his 50s follow Roger out?
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