
Pirate Family
About This Novel
What is the most powerful family in the pirate world? Is it the Charlotte family of the Four Emperors with many children? Is it the three-party forces of the Navy, Pirates and Revolutionary Army that are entangled, and the Monchi family has the fate of the protagonist? Are they the D family that inherited the mysterious will? Or is it the legendary Celestial Dragon who dominates the world? No, only those losers dare to write the evil name of that family in blood when they suddenly wake up from nightmares. Wayne Hill. Don't follow the ship, boss flow, but the hegemony flow wearing pirate skin. It's a bit slow and wordy in the early stages, but I'll try to change it later.
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Official(76)Scraped 29d ago
poisonous
How to put it this way, you have basically no training, you can fight with generals, operate with jailbreak honey, all your subordinates are made up, and you don't know what you want to do from the beginning to the end.
Hydrology, nonsense
It's so rubbish. I thought I drew One Piece myself. This type of One Piece is originally a youthful novel. People who want to read are basically real plots. Will readers waste their time reading your water characters? It's better to read other novels and comics
Poisoned to death. What did you write?
With the inexplicable fruit power and the mysterious self-confidence, who gave you the courage to say that you didn't want the Charlotte family to be rescued, Liang Jingru?
No more than 5 people in total will read your book. Is it interesting for you to write it?
Ms. Sand Crocodile? ? ? ? ?
Isn't Sand Crocodile a gentleman? ? ? Shocked
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Do you know why your book has so few reviews? It's not that you're not good at writing, your writing is actually not bad, but you're too verbose. You can write dozens of chapters for the transitional plot in the early stage. Not many people will be so patient to read so many. Reading novels is just a pleasure. If you want to read so much nonsense, who will read it?
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He had a fight with Sengoku, and during the fight he said that he was almost as powerful as the top fighters. As a result, Sengoku was injured and was not unconscious, but the protagonist was in a coma for more than a month. And then in this month, the author wrote a hundred chapters of nonsense, just to let the heroine grow? The youngest Yonko, please stop being ridiculous! Which strong man can be in a coma for a month? Even the heroine's one-on-one fight with two navy admirals is nothing, but the protagonist can be comatose for so long? There is also a protagonist whose strength is comparable to that of the Four Emperors. What is his strength? Physical skills? Fruit? What kind of perception fruit did you get, and the result was seeing, hearing, color and domineering? Later, he awakens to the state of death, which is Sun Wukong's Ultimate Intention Kung Fu. This Ultimate Intention Kung Fu requires a strong body, and the protagonist's physical skills now have the strength of a general? It's written in a silly way, and I can't understand what the protagonist's strength is at all?
Author, is she a single heroine now or is she a harem?
It doesn't matter if you have a harem, as long as you have the intention, please reply to the author
The fruit ability is too weak. . . .
What this fruit can do, you can also do it with the knowledge and color. This is a bit useless!
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Official(76)Scraped 29d ago
poisonous
How to put it this way, you have basically no training, you can fight with generals, operate with jailbreak honey, all your subordinates are made up, and you don't know what you want to do from the beginning to the end.
Hydrology, nonsense
It's so rubbish. I thought I drew One Piece myself. This type of One Piece is originally a youthful novel. People who want to read are basically real plots. Will readers waste their time reading your water characters? It's better to read other novels and comics
Poisoned to death. What did you write?
With the inexplicable fruit power and the mysterious self-confidence, who gave you the courage to say that you didn't want the Charlotte family to be rescued, Liang Jingru?
No more than 5 people in total will read your book. Is it interesting for you to write it?
Ms. Sand Crocodile? ? ? ? ?
Isn't Sand Crocodile a gentleman? ? ? Shocked
Sign in!
Do you know why your book has so few reviews? It's not that you're not good at writing, your writing is actually not bad, but you're too verbose. You can write dozens of chapters for the transitional plot in the early stage. Not many people will be so patient to read so many. Reading novels is just a pleasure. If you want to read so much nonsense, who will read it?
. . . .
He had a fight with Sengoku, and during the fight he said that he was almost as powerful as the top fighters. As a result, Sengoku was injured and was not unconscious, but the protagonist was in a coma for more than a month. And then in this month, the author wrote a hundred chapters of nonsense, just to let the heroine grow? The youngest Yonko, please stop being ridiculous! Which strong man can be in a coma for a month? Even the heroine's one-on-one fight with two navy admirals is nothing, but the protagonist can be comatose for so long? There is also a protagonist whose strength is comparable to that of the Four Emperors. What is his strength? Physical skills? Fruit? What kind of perception fruit did you get, and the result was seeing, hearing, color and domineering? Later, he awakens to the state of death, which is Sun Wukong's Ultimate Intention Kung Fu. This Ultimate Intention Kung Fu requires a strong body, and the protagonist's physical skills now have the strength of a general? It's written in a silly way, and I can't understand what the protagonist's strength is at all?
Author, is she a single heroine now or is she a harem?
It doesn't matter if you have a harem, as long as you have the intention, please reply to the author
The fruit ability is too weak. . . .
What this fruit can do, you can also do it with the knowledge and color. This is a bit useless!














