Pirate Family

How to put it this way, you have basically no training, you can fight with generals, operate with jailbreak honey, all your subordinates are made up, and you don't know what you want to do from the beginning to the end.

Well, I'll give it five stars first. . . . . . . .

It's so rubbish. I thought I drew One Piece myself. This type of One Piece is originally a youthful novel. People who want to read are basically real plots. Will readers waste their time reading your water characters? It's better to read other novels and comics

With the inexplicable fruit power and the mysterious self-confidence, who gave you the courage to say that you didn't want the Charlotte family to be rescued, Liang Jingru?

No more than 5 people in total will read your book. Is it interesting for you to write it?

Isn't Sand Crocodile a gentleman? ? ? Shocked

Do you know why your book has so few reviews? It's not that you're not good at writing, your writing is actually not bad, but you're too verbose. You can write dozens of chapters for the transitional plot in the early stage. Not many people will be so patient to read so many. Reading novels is just a pleasure. If you want to read so much nonsense, who will read it?

He had a fight with Sengoku, and during the fight he said that he was almost as powerful as the top fighters. As a result, Sengoku was injured and was not unconscious, but the protagonist was in a coma for more than a month. And then in this month, the author wrote a hundred chapters of nonsense, just to let the heroine grow? The youngest Yonko, please stop being ridiculous! Which strong man can be in a coma for a month? Even the heroine's one-on-one fight with two navy admirals is nothing, but the protagonist can be comatose for so long? There is also a protagonist whose strength is comparable to that of the Four Emperors. What is his strength? Physical skills? Fruit? What kind of perception fruit did you get, and the result was seeing, hearing, color and domineering? Later, he awakens to the state of death, which is Sun Wukong's Ultimate Intention Kung Fu. This Ultimate Intention Kung Fu requires a strong body, and the protagonist's physical skills now have the strength of a general? It's written in a silly way, and I can't understand what the protagonist's strength is at all?

It doesn't matter if you have a harem, as long as you have the intention, please reply to the author

What this fruit can do, you can also do it with the knowledge and color. This is a bit useless!