Studying at Hogwarts

The book is very interesting, but the pace is too slow, and it feels a bit daily. But the author, you are writing Harry Potter. You have written more than a hundred chapters without even the protagonist appearing, and the content is indeed a bit boring, so I hope the author can speed up the progress.

The emotional scenes made me crazy. While Isobel kept others from thinking about her boyfriend, she had a heated relationship with the women who had bad intentions. She even took the initiative to lead them to the male protagonist. She would also ask the male protagonist from time to time if he was interested in her, and conduct various tests. There is also my own sister, who clearly knows that her sister likes her boyfriend, but still refuses to cut the knot quickly, saying that she is afraid that her sister will be sad, so she keeps putting it off. What's even more outrageous is the task. You started making lamps when you were in school, but you haven't finished it for five years. You just put your foot in everything, and then just ignored it. There's nothing more to go on. It's a huge departure!

Also, I feel that the author is not candid, and so are the characters. It is obviously because of what other people have done that hinders you. You hate to dislike them, but you still have to beat around the bush and say other people are bad. It would be more straightforward to be more direct. The more I read, the more I feel that Pigfoot is a villain who shirks responsibility and never looks for reasons in himself.

At present, the pacing is still the same as before Harry entered the school, which is a little delayed. Maybe the author is afraid that the pacing will collapse when Harry joins the school, so he is still adjusting the main plot. So far, the development is good. It is recommended that the protagonist finish the plot of the fifth Order of the Phoenix first, and solve most of the Horcruxes in the first half of the seventh book. When Harry enters the school, he will focus on the Philosopher's Stone, Lost and Azkaban. Prisoner, the Goblet of Fire directly intervened to destroy it (to be honest, Harry's level is not worthy of participating in the Goblet of Fire), and finally the boss was killed in the second half of the seventh part. The focus is on post-war recovery and the thinking change of the veteran magic aristocrats. After all, it has been laid for so long. Killing Voldemort is a small matter, but reversing the abnormal development of the British wizarding world is a big deal. I hope the author can give Snape a good ending. After all, this tragic character is portrayed so well that people can't help but focus on his ending. However, if the tragic ending is normal, after all, Snape's fateful tragedy caused by the general environment is difficult to break.

Do you have any recommendations for novels with Hao Min as the heroine? It doesn't matter if there are just one or many.

I think this book is very well written, and I have my own understanding of various things in the original work. Just like the encounter between Harry and the Demon King in the Philosopher's Stone was not an accident caused by Harry's bravery but an inevitable result of the principal's wisdom. I think some parts are very good. In addition, the life scenes are also well written, and they feel very close to the original work. It also pays great attention to love and does not care about ambiguity. It is a very good book. But the shortcoming is the lack of unknowns and adventures: the characteristics of the original work are the unknown, reversal, and the three Harrys using their bravery and wisdom to peel back the fog layer by layer in adventures with unexpected results and finally find the final truth. This is the most attractive part of the original work, and it is also the climax of the original work. . . But this is almost a common problem in time-travel novels. In this article, when the protagonist and heroine were fighting against the failed heir of the previous generation, I saw the shadow of adventure and unknown, but it disappeared later. Maybe it's the cultural differences between China and foreign countries, but I still feel that if there are more situations in the story that are not under the control of the protagonist, but the protagonist handles unknown or unexpected situations again and again through bravery, thinking, and the help of his companions, the book will be better. As for how to do it, you can dig deeper into the original work. Just like how Harry saved himself from danger time and time again is not just visible to me, but also his own bravery and the efforts of invisible people like the principal. The protagonist of this book can imitate the principal and write out those things that the original book did not make it to the stage. But in addition to the principal, Harry is also the protagonist of this book who secretly helps Harry. These contents did not appear in the original work, but they did create the plot of the original work, and this process also made the protagonist understand that he is both a bystander and a deliberate creator of the story. Or add other imaginations, Harry dealt with the devil, but the devil's men also had to deal with it. If one of the devil's men intervened in the entire intentional line, the protagonist also believed that the story might change if he didn't do something. In order to keep the story developing according to the original work, the protagonist began a story of battle of wits and courage with these big troublemakers who had not had much contact with Harry in the original work. Furthermore, one person has already traveled through time, so it's not a big deal for a second one to come. But as the saying goes, there is no room for two tigers in one mountain, or the second person's character in the original world is not very good. What's worse, he and Ben are scoundrels. He has never read the original work and does not know the consequences of changing the original work (or knows the consequences, does not know the plot, or does not bother to maintain it), but he must not be stupid. As a result, the relationship between the two time-travelers deteriorated through repeated contacts and incidents, and the protagonist fought between them again. . . . Of course, these are my personal thoughts. For now, this book is already very good, and it suits the author's more relaxed writing style. After typing the above, I actually regretted it, because if I really did it, it would be extremely solid, but looking at the more than 900 words I typed, I couldn't bear to delete it, so I had no choice but to send it out.

If you really can't accept this character, waste will gather in groups, and the strong only need to be vassals

The author's literary talent is extraordinary, Li Bai, Tang Bohu, Du Fu, Tagore, if you read this article in this world, you will definitely be defeated and shameless. Our admiration for the author is like the endless stream of the river. The author's article is like flowing clouds and flowing water, and it is written in one go. After reading it, I felt like I was enlightened and enlightened. The novel of literature is thought-provoking and touching; the wonder of literature makes people fascinated; the essence of literature is all in vain if the sentences are deleted; the truth of literature touches stone hearts with passion. The author's article has a clear theme and rich writing. It deeply touches people's hearts and resonates. The warm sunshine falls gently, I brew a pot of fragrant tea, gently stretch the writing in the freshness, caress the words on it, and let the beating rhymes lead me to the promised land everywhere, and an indescribable comfort spreads in my heart. Once the speed of thought is released, even light cannot run as fast as it; but reading and books are like the most perfect black hole, which can always lead thoughts to it, accumulate in it, and prepare for the most magnificent explosion. The clouds and moons of the eight thousand miles journey all entered the depths of my soul while reading. The extraordinary literary skills are shown in the ordinary, and every word is precious. The diction is gorgeous to create the atmosphere, the idea is novel, the subject matter is original, and the plot is ups and downs and gripping the hearts of the people. There are two lines of love, light and dark, one bright and one dark. The author's wonderful strokes show different brilliance, which is eye-catching. This can be said to be a classic among classics and a model for us.

The front part is okay, but the middle part and the back part are not good. If you really don't know how to write emotional articles, you can write about a close friend.

Zhang Zhangshui The progress is slow, one chapter of two to three thousand words If I had written this from my starting point five years ago, I would have been scolded for being handicapped. Why don't you let me tell you? You can ban me