Immortality Starts from the Source Pile of All Things

You are awesome in the early stage and you are here in the mid stage. You are still a fool. You have already broken through to heaven. You are afraid of this and that. You are afraid of everything. You are a warrior. Warriors keep moving forward without fear. You are a warrior in the mirror of heaven. You are afraid of a martial saint. You don't dare to challenge beyond the boundaries. I am speechless. Then what kind of leapfrog challenge are you doing in front of you? You dare to engage in cross-level challenges, but you don't dare to come here behind me. Aren't you a waste? Or do you think you are a waste? If you only dare to use half of your ability by shrinking back, you have lost the heart of a strong person. A strong person, at least you don't have to be afraid of these things. If you are afraid of everything, you will be afraid of you to death. There is nothing left to cultivate. Just stop practicing. Only trash is afraid of death. Only trash is afraid of these and that.

To be honest, when I saw this, "all the powerful martial saints decided to strip the spiritual energy from the spiritual energy"! ! ! ! Suddenly I no longer had the desire to read any more! ! ! Total nonsense! ! ! Xia Jiba is talking nonsense! ! ! Just like all the software in a computer unite to delete a certain software in the computer! ! ! Do you have this ability? ? ? Only those who control computers have this ability! ! ! ! You haven't jumped out of this world, but you want to strip the spiritual energy from your aura. What are you thinking about? Want to **? ? ?

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you wait for the second update, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is taken more seriously. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you finish the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are 20 years old, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updating may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of the problems come from insufficient updating.

Age does not match Taoism. Martial arts pays attention to the root and bone. An 11-year-old has a fart's root and can bring back the dead. You are really nb, a heavenly being can do it.

The beginning is okay, but the further the plot goes, the more it leans towards the family sect style. It was originally a fun story, but several of the climax plots turned out to be boring and boring at all. Then there was the spiritual energy recovery sequence, and then it went to other facades. You might as well write about Gao Wu all the way to the end, and then you want to imitate the story of mortals cultivating immortals. Writing multiple worlds is boring. There is no intention, to be honest, if the plot of Mortal is put now, it will definitely overturn, because the first person to eat crabs is the real innovation, and everyone who learned it later will be different. Also, the protagonist has no experience like the NPC, and there is no emotional drama. I really don't understand that you have arranged peerless beauties for the supporting characters, but you don't arrange it for the protagonist. Isn't it funny? Either you don't write about a woman at all, and if you do write it, you deliberately disgust the readers, as well as 6

It was fine at the beginning, but after more than 160 chapters when I sneaked into the headquarters of the Demon Sect, I felt that my combat power suddenly collapsed... It was clear that not long after the protagonist broke through the Celestial Being, he was able to kill the Sword Demon instantly with just the Gang Qi clone. However, after a period of training and a series of enhancements, he has the combat power of a martial saint. To defeat the great elder who is right next to you, you still have to pretend to look for opportunities to sneak attack. . . And after one operation, you can't even sneak attack a person right in front of you... You don't know where your combat power has gone. . . Instantly I lost the desire to look down. . .

After reading the first 40 chapters, why is this book so much like a script? In the early stage, we had a happy and heartwarming growth and learning. Some foreshadowing began to be interspersed in the middle. Then there was a party, which we agreed to hold every year. Finally, there was the parting, ice-breaking and immersion, right? ! 😥

Your parents are dead at the beginning of the chapter. Do you have any deep hatred between you and your parents?

To be honest, this book is really more ridiculous than many system texts. As a plug-in, there is a limiter for the Ten Directions Martial Saint's Ordinary Transformation Pearl. Apart from being able to break through the realm, it cannot do anything else. Many system texts seem to be able to achieve it by adding points, but they all have various prerequisites, such as requiring points and energy, and various restrictions! But this book specifically gives an invincible setting, even compared to the system panel, Deep Blue Simulator and other messy plug-ins, are they just by the wayside in this book? You don't have any restrictions or conditions. Anyway, you are invincible and brainless. You are too useless.

Starting from Chapter 160, no matter how you offend someone and not die, it is still a bad criticism. I will give you a six-star review and it is a waste of money.