Refining Qi Starts from Repairing the Panel

You have a golden finger, but you still have to stay and be used as a dog. The others are about to be exterminated, but you are still there and don't run away (you just came through the time, you were a slave, you almost starved to death, let alone being a slave). It's very confusing to write about women at the beginning. I hope there won't be any intersection later (it would be best if they don't show up, and don't start licking her if they do).

There is nothing wrong with the character or the environment, but together they are not the protagonists and would have been dead long ago.

The problem is that this technique can be practiced by all things. This is how monsters are born. If you are in a bad mood, this technique can be practiced by cannibalizing people. Kung Fu that doesn't depend on qualifications is so perverted. So everything has its faults and advantages.

Seeing Chapter 85, the protagonist is only at the first level of cultivation, the enemies are all 5th and 6th level bosses, and the troubles he causes are all at the Holy Land level. Is it appropriate to involve such a small amount of cultivation in a big event?

I have read less than 300 chapters, and to sum up, if you just read the outline, it is very interesting, but when it comes to the details, it seems that the author is inexperienced and has completely ignored the characterization of the characters. The biggest problem is that the author has no idea at all about the setting of the protagonist. The plot requires the protagonist to have as much IQ as possible, which makes the protagonist very awkward. Another problem is that he just does what others say, and there is no independent thinking at all. Why do I say the outline is okay? There is no problem with the overall design. Chu Zheng starts the game by refining energy to seize the luck of heaven and earth, raising immortal bones, practicing immortality to feed back refining energy, and uses the Xianghuo Sect to spread the name of Zhengchu to nourish the soul and promote immortality and refining Qi. However, after arriving at the Xianghuo Sect, the protagonist begins to wander into other worlds. The protagonist's IQ rises and falls with the advancement of the plot, which leads to repeated readings in this part and serious inconsistencies. Then let's talk about the group portrait issue. At present, all the characters revolve around the protagonist. It can also be said that everyone revolves around the plot, resulting in the character having no soul. The outline is good, but the author is obviously a novice and fails to establish the character's personality well. This is already a taboo in novels. However, it seems that QQ reading does not pay attention to this aspect, so the score is slightly higher, and I won't talk about the rest.

After reading almost 100 chapters, it turns out that the main character is a psychopath. The author also mentioned in several chapters that the protagonist is mentally ill. I thought it was a joke, but I found out later that it was true

The author's writing style is very good in all three aspects, but the plot is too tight. As soon as he starts practicing, he encounters a situation where his family is about to be exterminated. As soon as this matter is solved, another thing comes one after another. It's so compact that I can't breathe, it's so uncomfortable. I read books to relax and entertain myself

What are you writing about? Suddenly and out of nowhere, sisters become jealous of each other? Are we going to open a harem of sisters that violates ethics? When I see this kind of inexplicable thing, I feel like I don't want to read it. The more I write, the more garbage I write.

I've been reading this book for a long time, so I just got a ticket to read it when it was finished. When I turned to the front and read more than 30 chapters, I started to pay. I said where did so many unbought chapters come from? Si Ma Platform

To be honest, the author's writing at the beginning was too bad. The calamity of the Song Mansion was really speechless. First of all, he knew that the Song Mansion was in trouble, and now that he had the strength, why didn't he run away? Then there was the second lady of the Song Mansion, who was the true successor of the sect. As a result, the Song Mansion was destroyed. If people in the world of immortality all attack mortals, then there would be no mortals. You are still so blatant. The second lady of the Song Mansion is not dead yet. When your cultivation level is high, I will not destroy you. Manmen, does that make sense? So, author, please don't write nonsense. If everything were as you wrote, the royal family of the Great Zhou Dynasty would have been destroyed long ago. Why can you survive until now? Just allow others to do this. You can't do it. Author, you deliberately created disaster for the protagonist, but the arrangement of the disaster in Song Mansion was too rigid. Every world has rules. If it were like this, the world would be destroyed!