Daqin Town Tiansi

I saw 50 pictures and couldn't follow them. The first part was very good, but it's a pity that the later content was delayed and trivial. The trivial things in the yamen were unappetizing. Either you take war as the main line, and you basically like to read war articles. If you can read it, that's fine. Or you take martial arts progress as the main line, and like it. You can also read the fantasy of martial arts and the like. Your novel started to write about war, brother Pao Ze, and the progress of martial arts. The writing was quite good. After retirement, it was about small things like the yamen. The martial arts stagnated, and there was no war. I changed my career to espionage, and the pattern became smaller and smaller.

Now that you are a Grandmaster, what is the difference between killing an innate and forcefully suppressing your combat power? You have to lead people to charge in whatever you do! The same goes for killing a half-step innate. That's ridiculous. Otherwise, don't write him as a grandmaster and just let him be an innate.

Just read the introduction and you will know that the old plot of pretending to be a sheep and selling dog meat, pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger is meaningless at first glance.

Everyone is so loyal to Da Qin, okay, fine, but why? The author's portrayal of this part is unconvincing. It seems that the only portrayal is that he likes to shout slogans, "I am from Daqin." This point, In addition, what is particularly worrying is that the author seems to be crazy about suppressing the protagonist's combat power, always putting the protagonist in a very difficult situation. The protagonist obviously has a skill, but in the book, we don't see the protagonist fully using his skill. The protagonist is in such a difficult situation, but we find that the protagonist is not in a hurry to improve himself. This makes people look speechless and anxious. Can the last system be directly changed to a panel? What kind of battleship? . It's very dramatic, isn't it? . . How about you give the protagonist an AK?

Even if it lasts for a hundred thousand years, you are still born the day after tomorrow. Grandmaster, you are not a fantasy person. How can you live for that long?

Two updates a day is too little, not enough to watch

Looking at the name, I thought he was a time traveler, and then he got a system similar to that of a Jidao demon. He killed monsters and then upgraded. What turned out was a flying fleet, a flying fleet, a ravioli, a brain, and a coffin of more than 90,000 meters. Goldfinger is a machine brain, and the writing is messy. Why don't you write a system? Read two chapters

The author's setting is self-contradictory. Only the weak should be stubborn. Now that he is a master, he still likes to be a dog and doesn't care about his own interests. How stupid is this?

Very beautiful, guaranteed with 20 years of book age

I feel that the background writing is awkward. I want to write about the combination of present and ancient times, but I can't write it. It's better to just travel through time and bring a system or something. Do you understand why I blame this on chaos? The writing is not particularly good. I feel that the score should not be so high. Did you find someone to brush it up?