I'm Working on Amazing Spider-man in American Comics

A time-traveler can live like Spider-Man, but it is best not to live as Spider-Man. The protagonist of this book is equivalent to wearing a layer of time-travel skin, but inside he is still Peter Parker. No other changes can be seen. He is just living the plot as Peter Parker. Why not just watch the Spider-Man series? What kind of fanfiction are you reading? Isn't it just to see different places and different ideas? I came to see the difference between the time traveler as Spider-Man and Peter Parker, not to see Peter Parker live his own story.

Let's talk about it, why don't I go watch the Spider-Man movie to read your novel? The plot is uneventful, too ordinary, completely lackluster and unattractive.

One star is given based on the principle of no killing. It is hard to imagine that the protagonist, such a saintly person, would not choose to kill the villain directly. It is obvious that killing the villain directly can better protect ordinary people, but the result is to send him to the police. Also, the protagonist complained about the lack of police supervision, but in the end, there was a prison break. The first thrilling prison break was already speechless, and then there was another chameleon prison break. I can only say that this kind of plot will make readers feel stupid, but it can only be done. If there is a prison break plot later, then I can only say goodbye. (The above only represents my personal opinion. It is not an insult to the author or this book. It is just a complaint to give other readers a reference)

It looks good, but there are still flaws in some places. Author, let me give you something to discuss: Sentinel Super A-list: Thor, Witch, Jean, Hulk, Guinness Will, Franklin, Nat Gray, Almighty Evil First line: Black King Venom (identified position = beyond the gods), Iron Man, Silver Slippery, Strange, Carol, Hyperion, Lan Qi, Black Bolt, Star Mark, Swarm, Lao Wan, Invisible Woman, Hercules Second line: Nova, Quasar, Spectrum, Adam Warlock, Miracle Man, Red Hulk, Furious She-Hulk, Star-Lord Awakened, Ikaris, Cersei Third line: Thing, Human Torch, Namor, Valkyrie, Drax (Please point out any errors) [Picture] This is about the same as what I found on the forum, but this is a real period, you can use it as a reference, because in the current period, many characters are actually much more powerful than in the past, but it can basically be used as a reference, and in terms of the author's destructive power of the character, you can actually write more boldly, such as Little Spider, and you don't have to always dwell on it. With 25 tons of power, the little spider has many extraordinary performances, and there are also characters who are clearly set to explode in crisis situations and can defeat the planet of destruction. This is about the Flame Emperor, who is the messenger of the planet devourer. Although I feel that using the level of destroying the planet is a bit underestimated, but you can also refer to it.

There is no need to watch it, it's just like not watching it! Just watch the Spider-Man movie yourself, reading this book is a waste of time!

Boring, really, is the protagonist a time traveler?

The book is good, but the biggest flaw is the identity of the time traveler. I didn't see anything that said that you knew the original characters, planned the growth route, and the plan to increase strength. You turned a blind eye to the technology of the Kirita people, you didn't take any of the villain's equipment, and you didn't master other powers. Is your identity as a time traveler not all the same? What is the difference between you and a native?

The introduction is good, but the overall impression is average. The long paragraphs of random thoughts or other things look particularly messy, and the author also feels a little literary, but it's just average.

The plot is well designed, but a time traveler completely takes over and becomes an authentic Spider-Man. Not as good as Spider-Man emotionally.

Now I suspect that the author is not a Chinese but a spy. The protagonist's way of thinking is no different from those barbarians in the West, because the way of thinking of the Holy Mother in our country is quite different from that of the Western Madonna.