Instructor of Wanjie: Military Training Begins with Lu Mingfei

Originally, I thought this novel should be rated at least four stars, and the score should reach 8.2 To 8.5 No matter what. However, after reading the whole novel, I felt that there were two poisonous points that brought down the rating abruptly. One was to sell dogs on sheep's heads. The title clearly said Instructor of All Worlds, and the same was true in the introduction, but in the end, it was written about Instructor of All Realms, but it was still Lu Mingfei, and Lu Mingfei's own role also felt too big, and even emotional scenes were forcibly arranged for him. , The arrangement is also very rigid. The problem is that the protagonist of this book is the Star Cluster. Although the protagonist is positioned as an instructor, he can't go there no matter what. The scenes are almost entirely taken up by supporting characters. If you do this, you might as well just write about the dragons and Ultras, and write about Lu Mingfei traveling through two worlds. The second one is the emotional drama. The author honestly said that your emotional drama is really embarrassing, and your writing skills are not good in this regard. And now there are two people who like Lu Mingfei. Later, there will be Eri Yi, who will create a Shura field in Ultra and open a harem, which will really affect the viewing experience, because this itself is seriously inconsistent with the spirit of Ultra

There is a saying that the identity of instructor Leori was not from the Star Group at first, but from another space person. However, the script was changed to the group, but the character was directly attached to it. This caused the group's character to be a little different from that in Seven TV. That's why I got angry because it was not Severn who was the instructor from the beginning.

Emiya Shirou is also a person with personality defects. He has a strong sense of justice, but he is actually a little twisted. After all, a person who has no self-love can't love others. If no one is watching him, he may become a red A or a black A. I hope that the crutch star can correct his twisted character.

"What's going on with your expression, what's going on with your tears, can your tears save the earth!" [Emot=default,52/]Lu Mingfei, stand up!

Brother, you wrote "Myriad Realms" in the title of your book, but it's almost 300 chapters, and you're still writing about dragons and Ultras. Aren't you just trying to sell someone like a sheep over someone else's head? Although I think what you wrote is okay, I'm getting tired of not opening a new map all the time. When will a new map be released? If you want to keep writing about Ultras and Dragons, you should change the title of your book, and don't sell it like a sheep's head.

For such a serious matter as fighting monsters, the human body might as well choose Chu Zihang! Responsible, responsible and capable

Cane Starman and Jeep Monster are online

Hanging sheep's heads, selling dog meat, there are no worlds, more than three hundred chapters of the pure dragon world are not over yet

Will there be Tiga? Will there be Tiga? Tiga is the most handsome and does not accept refutation.

Brothers, do you have a chat group? Do you have a chat group?