American Comics Superman: Beginning with the Black Robe

I have read Chapter 16 so far, and I don't know what the author thinks about the raven issue. If you want to accept her in the first place, don't write that the protagonist's adoptive parents were killed because of her fault. The protagonist's early cosmic crisis was because Raven wanted to ask Superman for help to open a portal, but ended up opening it to the protagonist's house. At that time, Raven was fighting against her brother. The aftermath killed the protagonist's adoptive parents from the soul level, causing the protagonist to go berserk. Raven cast a spell to divert the protagonist's attention to her brother who came from across the world, causing the protagonist to kill his brother. As a result, the power of San Gong was left in this universe, making this universe targeted by San Gong. It can be said that the whole incident was started by Raven. Every time the protagonist sees Raven, he wants to kill her, but every time he returns, Raven backtracks and teaches the protagonist how to be a true superman. At the end of Chapter 16, the protagonist plans to join forces with Raven to solve the crisis in the Three Houses. It feels like the protagonist here is just a chess piece in the hands of Raven. If he becomes a chess piece, where is the hatred of Guan Jian's parents? It's not like I haven't seen the protagonist team up with the enemy who killed his parents in order to survive the crisis, but you wrote about Superman.

Generally speaking, the first 5 chapters are very discouraging, a dummy wearing a Superman template. The next 10 words are added to the number of words

It's not unreasonable to have such a low rating

It's a mess, not only is the writing very confusing, but the character design of the main character is also a mess, almost comparable to the original Superman, and he is a complete and uncanny person. Whose brain was used to create this Madonna character? Below? The timeline is chaotic, and the Black Robe Patrol has not made much progress. The protagonist is just frantically traveling through the world, and only a short section of each world has been traveled.

The writing of each universe is too confusing. I don't know what to write about the main plot. I know every character and connect the plot together. I don't know what to write?

Are you sure this is not an abusive article? Every time the protagonist is about to succeed, various accidents will happen to put pressure on the protagonist. Often the problem is only half solved, and other problems will arise on the other side to put pressure on the protagonist. The protagonist's father, Jor-El, is even more outrageous, just like DC's hilarious reincarnation. Since his debut until the latest chapter, he has been using various operations to manipulate the protagonist at his fingertips. Moreover, in order to increase his sense of oppression, the author sometimes forcibly instills intelligence into the protagonist. For example, in the latest chapters, Jor-El had all the Kryptonian Star Destroyer weapons jump to the vicinity of the Earth. The protagonist did not fly nearby in time to stop it, so he just watched on the Earth as the Star Destroyer weapons destroyed Gomo... I even suspect that the author wrote the plot for the protagonist's father based on the performance of DC's father, the Laughing Bat, in the comics.

I'm convinced. Someone killed your parents, but you still humbly asked them for advice. Can't you not be such a holy mother?

There's too much bragging involved, and it's always pushing stars to destroy planets. As a result, it takes several rounds to fight against street heroes.

Come on, it looks good, update quickly, and I can't sleep at night.

It doesn't look good. It's poisonous at the beginning. It's disgusting.