Huangquan Yinsi

Here is a suggestion, can you not make the male protagonist so stupid? He has no experience in catching ghosts. He has seen so many times, met so many horrible and ugly ghosts, and still gets scared. He has been plotted and attacked so many times, but he still gets attacked all the time. The male protagonist is stupid from the beginning to the end? Write from child to child, from nothing to nothing. It is recommended to write some details about the environment, fighting, and other people's reactions, otherwise the immersion for the readers will not be that strong. I hope you will get better and better as you write more

To be honest, the male protagonist is too much of a bitch and his IQ is not even online! It looks a bit laborious

I feel that the jade snake seems a bit weird. Just the fact that it is dying makes people wonder why it is dying. In addition, it shook its head quickly at me. Would an ordinary snake be like this?

Poor Qingqing, this male protagonist is so disgusting that he gave up the book

Why was Wang Baochang written to death? I'm still waiting for him and Yang Cheng to carry forward the Sanqing Sect together.

The male protagonist is really disgusting. He can't stand the temptation. He has no principles and no bottom line, so don't say anything about it. It's a normal function of the body. He still likes to show off when he has no ability.

The protagonist is so stupid. He has no strength and no preparation and runs into other people's dens. He is always caught.

How did you do it? More than a thousand chapters and no comments.

Zheng Jun's behavior may be motivated by vanity. No matter how scared he is in his heart, he can't show it, otherwise he may lose his face and title of child king, but this may harm himself.

This is a good suspense novel