
Dimensional Heaven Wall
by This Way And The Other Side
About This Novel
A good day, why does it turn into this? I thought helplessly at the end of the weekend. The story takes place on such a day.
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Advice to the author
You haven't put it on the shelves until now because the logic you wrote is too messy and the plot is too messy. In the early stage, you don't know what the protagonist is doing. He only knows to manage the balance of the world, but he doesn't manage it well. After he quit being an administrator, he chatted with people in the guild. The purpose of the guild is to help everyone, but he didn't write it down. So he wrote that the guild can travel through dungeons and exclusive worlds. The protagonist mentioned the will of the world in the guild and didn't explain to the guild members what the will of the world is. And he helped Nine-Tails escape from human beings? I haven't even written 2 pages and suddenly, regardless of whether I was chatting with people in the guild or not, I still haven't explained how to get Kyuubi to escape and survive.
The author's writing style in this book is so childish.
Very nice
This book is very interesting for those who understand it, but it will be very uncomfortable for those who don't understand it.
The protagonist's cheats are so awesome!
How awesome would it be if the protagonist got the plug-in used in the opening scene?
Chapter content is too confusing
I feel like the main character is a lunatic. I know a netizen who is an origin. I help her manage the world. In the end, I don't get any benefits. After defecting, he will be as good as a ****. Will his body be able to keep up with the knowledge that is forcibly instilled? It will hurt to death. I traveled to the pirates to help Nami. The emergency help has not come yet because the goddess **** has cheated me. After being cheated, I turned off the time-travel function without explaining what world consciousness is. Then when you write, you might as well not write that the guild has a time-travel function.
mess
The author abandons the book and starts over again. Although I can understand your thinking, the logic in the book basically has no connecting points.
Bad review
At first it was killing time travellers, then it became a daily routine in a chat group, then it became about dominating the multiverse, and then it became a daily routine in a chat group. A novel with this level of chaos is awesome.
This title reminds me of Wang Xiaoming's World Wall
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Official(9)Scraped 1mo ago
Advice to the author
You haven't put it on the shelves until now because the logic you wrote is too messy and the plot is too messy. In the early stage, you don't know what the protagonist is doing. He only knows to manage the balance of the world, but he doesn't manage it well. After he quit being an administrator, he chatted with people in the guild. The purpose of the guild is to help everyone, but he didn't write it down. So he wrote that the guild can travel through dungeons and exclusive worlds. The protagonist mentioned the will of the world in the guild and didn't explain to the guild members what the will of the world is. And he helped Nine-Tails escape from human beings? I haven't even written 2 pages and suddenly, regardless of whether I was chatting with people in the guild or not, I still haven't explained how to get Kyuubi to escape and survive.
The author's writing style in this book is so childish.
Very nice
This book is very interesting for those who understand it, but it will be very uncomfortable for those who don't understand it.
The protagonist's cheats are so awesome!
How awesome would it be if the protagonist got the plug-in used in the opening scene?
Chapter content is too confusing
I feel like the main character is a lunatic. I know a netizen who is an origin. I help her manage the world. In the end, I don't get any benefits. After defecting, he will be as good as a ****. Will his body be able to keep up with the knowledge that is forcibly instilled? It will hurt to death. I traveled to the pirates to help Nami. The emergency help has not come yet because the goddess **** has cheated me. After being cheated, I turned off the time-travel function without explaining what world consciousness is. Then when you write, you might as well not write that the guild has a time-travel function.
mess
The author abandons the book and starts over again. Although I can understand your thinking, the logic in the book basically has no connecting points.
Bad review
At first it was killing time travellers, then it became a daily routine in a chat group, then it became about dominating the multiverse, and then it became a daily routine in a chat group. A novel with this level of chaos is awesome.
This title reminds me of Wang Xiaoming's World Wall
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