Time Travel Begins with Demon Slayer

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How to put it~ I practiced swordsmanship in the first 10 days, plus thousands of sword swings every day~ This. . . Is it a combination of natural power and unparalleled talent, or what? Not to mention how much a standard samurai sword weighs, it would be unbearable for an adult to wield something weighing several kilograms and swing it thousands of times a day~ let alone a child~ But there are systems to round it all off~ It doesn't matter, anyway, I personally think that if you want to read it well, you need to be smart, otherwise there will be a lot of flaws. Of course, newcomers and new readers can understand~ but high scores will never be given! That is irresponsible to all book friends who read book reviews and irresponsible to the quality of the work. Um. . . . Come on, I'm waiting for your book🔥.

I've only read a few chapters so I won't make too many comments. Let's not talk about the medical treatment. The main character is a young child. What's the injury situation? After ten days of training, without any experience in actual combat, he hacked to death a robber who licked blood from the tip of his knife every day? In order to meet a woman he has never met for the first time, the male protagonist, who has only practiced iai for ten days, plus this woman, challenge the group of robbers who lick the tip of a knife every day. . . . . And if a woman sees a young child, she probably won't let a young child come to save her. She will probably tell the male protagonist to run away. The same goes for killing the five wolves. Although it is written like this to promote the plot, the halo of the protagonist is too heavy. What should I say? The plot is not rigorous, the details are not in place, the weight is not grasped properly, the writing style is slightly poor, and there are too many flaws. The rest I don't know what to use to describe it. Maybe I am not suitable for this kind of thing. This is my personal experience. You can learn from it. The main thing is to experience it for yourself. Then come on, the author, I hope it can become better.

It's pretty good-looking. Although it's a bit toxic, I can bear it.

A few days after the start of the time travel, the host himself was still a child and he accepted another child as his apprentice? The most important thing is that I am still a weakling. If nothing else, it feels like a forced routine when watching it.

It's not a Tang sword, it's uncomfortable

It seems that the background and subject matter are very good, but the characters are so awkwardly written that I can no longer stand it.

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It's really well written, you can read it.

Not bad, you can practice eye skills and defeat the enemy with your will