Start Playing with Earth Ol from Naruto
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The new book "Did I do anything wrong when playing games in another world?", Please help me invest.
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Official(14)Scraped 20d ago
Before I knew it, it was three o'clock.
I'll go to bed after posting this set of pictures.
Please, the author, please stop writing extra chapters.
The extra story is too distracting. Can the author's writing be better? The description of the fighting scenes is not detailed enough. There is also an extra story at the end of the film that seems to jump out of the scene.
Author, you don't feel that what you write always goes off topic, and it goes on for several chapters.
Can you please briefly mention those things that have nothing to do with the protagonist or are currently out of reach? If you write several chapters like this, it still has little to do with the protagonist, at least something that is currently out of reach. The water should not be so watery. I am a full subscriber. Don't make me feel that it is not worth mentioning.
I feel so miserable for the author
I read more than 200 chapters and didn't even get a rating.
The main character's abilities are huge
It took me so long to finish writing Naruto, the pace is so slow, and the world view is not enough to accommodate the perfect world view, so don't mention it in the article. The expectation is in vain. Generally speaking, the writing is good, but sometimes it is a bit poisonous, personal opinion.
. . . . .
Give it a 5-star rating to test the water, hahaha, let's see if it looks good.
Caught a little author~
I really admire you. Although not many people read it, you actually updated so many chapters. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง
Please tell me more about this chapter.
There is no chapter saying that I am about to die_(:з∠)_
You can just mention the people or things that the author has nothing to do with the protagonist. You don't have to write for so long, otherwise it will feel like the progress is too slow. If you remove these, the progress will probably be very fast.
Feeling a little depressed
The first is that the paper is rejected, which is basically equivalent to starting over from scratch. The pressure increases dramatically and the headache is huge. Secondly, the old books were harmonized and the new books had to be put on the shelves, which was exhausting both physically and mentally. Go to sleep first, then wake up and see how to deal with it(ﾟoﾟ;
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Official(14)Scraped 20d ago
Before I knew it, it was three o'clock.
I'll go to bed after posting this set of pictures.
Please, the author, please stop writing extra chapters.
The extra story is too distracting. Can the author's writing be better? The description of the fighting scenes is not detailed enough. There is also an extra story at the end of the film that seems to jump out of the scene.
Author, you don't feel that what you write always goes off topic, and it goes on for several chapters.
Can you please briefly mention those things that have nothing to do with the protagonist or are currently out of reach? If you write several chapters like this, it still has little to do with the protagonist, at least something that is currently out of reach. The water should not be so watery. I am a full subscriber. Don't make me feel that it is not worth mentioning.
I feel so miserable for the author
I read more than 200 chapters and didn't even get a rating.
The main character's abilities are huge
It took me so long to finish writing Naruto, the pace is so slow, and the world view is not enough to accommodate the perfect world view, so don't mention it in the article. The expectation is in vain. Generally speaking, the writing is good, but sometimes it is a bit poisonous, personal opinion.
. . . . .
Give it a 5-star rating to test the water, hahaha, let's see if it looks good.
Caught a little author~
I really admire you. Although not many people read it, you actually updated so many chapters. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง
Please tell me more about this chapter.
There is no chapter saying that I am about to die_(:з∠)_
You can just mention the people or things that the author has nothing to do with the protagonist. You don't have to write for so long, otherwise it will feel like the progress is too slow. If you remove these, the progress will probably be very fast.
Feeling a little depressed
The first is that the paper is rejected, which is basically equivalent to starting over from scratch. The pressure increases dramatically and the headache is huge. Secondly, the old books were harmonized and the new books had to be put on the shelves, which was exhausting both physically and mentally. Go to sleep first, then wake up and see how to deal with it(ﾟoﾟ;
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