Quit the Team and Then Pick up the Beautiful Girl with the Problem

Yesterday, there was also a limited-edition free game. It was a mixed team of all men and all women. They all agreed that the protagonist's lung mist should be optimized. But it turned out that I regretted it after I went out, which was so painful. Is this a male channel that can be watched?

One of the great things about quitting the band is seeing the miserable life of the former members. I read this book briefly, but I didn't feel it. Instead, I felt like I just left. It doesn't make any difference whether the former band has a protagonist or not. There is no sense of revenge. Instead, like toilet paper, you live a good life after leaving. So this beginning is unnecessary.

At the beginning, I felt frustrated because I quit the team. After meeting the heroine, I started to describe the psychology of literary youth for more than ten chapters, such as she still doesn't know anything and I can't selfishly interfere. The characterization is bad among bad, the level is not enough, the vocabulary and the literary skills are mixed together, the combat description, I really can't believe that in these years, I dare to post a lot of unfamiliar vocabulary and an unclear framework for turn-based combat, and most of the description content is data comparison. Let's talk about the name, stuffed with a bunch of Western names, which appear repeatedly and in various ways during the battle. In the same chapter, characters who appear for the first time, confused characters appear, extremely funny battle descriptions, plus descriptions of all the stomachache essays, what I can't respond to xxx, or you have forgotten xxx, plus the classic female xxx under family coercion. Sky Knight is not as hypocritical as you said, and the superficial setting and world view are really disgusting.

To be honest, the author's writing is good, but the beginning is very stupid. Team leader, you let people clean up and leave the house. What an idiot this group is. Not to mention how powerful he is, he has learned so many team secrets in ten years. Who is the core of the team? What equipment does the team leader have and what skills does he have? If he wants to sell these secrets, he can make a lot of money. Besides, you optimized him and let people leave naked in front of everyone. Are you going to recruit people in the future? Is this what you've been able to do after being a team leader for three years? This is still a big group to reach the summit. No one with any sense would dare to do this. The author simply tortures for the sake of torture. Cutely silly.

According to readers' suggestions, since the journey in the book involves different islands, and each of them has a different natural environment and customs, constructing specific details can easily increase the sense of substitution. The author agrees with this point of view. The author himself is not a full-time writer. He mainly focuses on advancing the story every day, so it is often difficult to deliberately add details. Generally you can only rely on inspiration. Therefore, if any readers are interested or have already thought of some detailed settings, they can leave a message and the author will choose the appropriate ones to use. The categories of detailed supplementary settings are not limited to special diet, clothing, dressing, speaking methods, daily entertainment, etc. Based on the natural environment, customs, and living habits of each island. Examples of islands that I will visit in the future Mengze Island: Rich water environment and lush vegetation. There are waterfalls, streams, rapids, swamps, dense forests, and tall trees. Lupus Island Country: Island in the sea, volcanic activity, plantations, fishing industry, lava destruction civilization Thousand Tower City: There are many towers, modern and ancient life are intertwined, magic is used in life, prosperous, there are many readers, and the cultural atmosphere is strong Makena Island Country: Rich in minerals, an important industrial town, patrolled by magical mechanical creations City of Ships: There are many shipyards, mainly workers, and the docks and residential streets in between form a city. Trade capital: prosperous, a model of a modern city, with developed commercial streets, similar to Earth's modern business districts, and also has ports and markets where commerce is concentrated. Santo Vitasik: There are some types of cities in the above islands. High-end powerful people gather, high style, high level, and you can see the top level scenery in the world. The above is an example Thank you for your continued support. Orders are slowly increasing. If you have any other ideas about the book, you can chat with us.

The third chapter of Poison, Poison, Poison Golden is really poisonous, and the fourth chapter will be even more poisonous if you read it later.

World view, full marks. I don't know if there is a reference game, but I know Sky Island. The three elements of matter, magic, and spirituality are very gorgeous. The power system setting is complex and self-consistent, fresh and mysterious, simple but not simple. Full marks for characterization. It's a rare piece of writing that doesn't bring down wisdom. Being thoughtful doesn't mean that there are no vulgar plots, but that the characters have clear motivations and are logically consistent. The heroine does address the topic, and all of them are problem girls, but it is not a superficial label. It is really the three views and thoughts of some people in reality, or everyone at a certain time. Plot, good. The early pace was too slow, and a lot of ink was spent on character details and world view, resulting in a weak plot, insufficient suspense, and weak driving force. There aren't many slap-in-the-face plots, which makes it a little less exciting. Impatient and younger readers may find it boring. This is not a template article about chasing a wife in the crematorium, and quitting the team is just an explanation of the experienced character of the male protagonist. The focus is still on the beautiful girl with problems. Suitable for light novel lovers who like harem scenes.

The author looks like he hasn't graduated from elementary school, and the heroine's character is completely disgusting for a Xiaohongshu user.

The plot always progresses inexplicably and passively, with one branch plot after another without ending. I don't even know what the author wants to write. The character plot is confusing and looks like it was written by AI.

It's a bit similar to the first series, "I Lived a Slow Life After Being Expelled from the Team" by Long Aotian in Another World