
Rubbish Games Are Ruining My Life
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[Newbie Task: Kiss anyone of the opposite sex for more than one minute] Mo Ming looked at this newbie task and fell into deep thought.
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Official(83)Scraped 13d ago
The male protagonist used to fight all the time when he was a child. Even if you behave better now, your combat effectiveness won't be so bad, right? For people who always fought when they were young, even if they become better behaved as they get older, their fighting ability will not be so bad and they will become so willing (cowardly). It is set according to the male protagonist who always fought when he was a child. On the contrary, the male protagonist will be more stable and ruthless when fighting. The content of this book is actually pretty good, but the character of the main character is a bit broken, and I hope to work hard to improve it.
Support the author By the way, I would like to give some suggestions. The protagonist can have two abilities. One is the ability that the system tells the protagonist, and the other is a hidden ability that can only be awakened under specific circumstances. After all, it takes twice as long for the protagonist to awaken the ability as others. Then the protagonist's ability can be centered around the demonic energy that the woman mentioned when the protagonist was in the mysterious world and was dissected in the previous chapters, and then the hidden ability can be written around the "bad guy". For example, the superpower that the protagonist knows is that he can use magic energy to strengthen himself, use magic energy to condense weapons and use magic energy to inject into the corpse, and then become the protagonist's puppet and be controlled by the protagonist. As the protagonist's level rises, the protagonist can control more and more puppets, and the puppets will become stronger and stronger. Then you can also write about the side effects of the protagonist's use of magic energy. For example, the more times the protagonist uses magic energy, the greater the risk that the protagonist will become black. Then the protagonist's friends come together to find a solution, etc. Then the hidden ability can be written to be activated when the protagonist is about to die, unable to fight or run away, and then the ability of the hidden ability is for the "bad guy" to control the protagonist's body and bring out the original strength of the "bad guy". The side effect is that the time is short, and it will also erode the protagonist's body and then find a solution. The above are my suggestions. I hope the author will adopt them. Thank you.
The male protagonist's character is really weak in the early stages.
Let's change it. The character of the male protagonist is really too weak, especially when he is not the only one who has the system, but others are also in trouble. This kind of character makes him even more cowardly. Even if he fights a kid in front of him, he is so cowardly. Generally speaking, men shouldn't be so cowardly even if they really can't defeat the system.
Five stars for encouragement
The writing is good, although it is a bit watery The character of the protagonist is not very likable. A person who has loved fighting since he was a child is in a daze and trembles when fighting. He is too cowardly and has been in the game for so many days. Even after getting hints, I still didn't understand that this world was about to become a world where people cannibalize people. The protagonist's combat power is deliberately lowered. Regardless of whether he entered the game earlier or later, as long as his personal combat power is higher than the protagonist's, he has no independent opinion at all. He can't survive three chapters without Tang Xi. He relies entirely on his girlfriend to give him experience and equipment. According to this character design, I don't know how you should write the first monster the protagonist fights. Moreover, if you write about this kind of disaster, your relatives will become poisonous if your writing is not good. If there is no twist at the end to make the protagonist mature and cruel, the book will be useless, and I can't say it is useless. It's a bit like a little virgin, and it's all up to the girlfriend to carry the book when something goes wrong. It's not likable, and readers won't like it. Also, the protagonist, Yazi, doesn't look very smart.
good
Pig's trotters are too weak. They should be as decisive in killing as Tang Xi. Also, if I were a pig's trotters, I would kill her long ago if there was someone beside me who could not predict the future and could not be controlled by me.
Rubbish novels ruined my life! ! ! ! !
Big brother will enter the palace so soon
Well, is this a bad result?
I beg the author to reply to me Tell me, what happened to my sister Xi in the end?
Hurry up and kill the pig's trotters and the whole family. It will be easier to write. All kinds of changes.
I hope Tang Xi can be with the protagonist. I really like this yandere. Come on, author. (ง •̀_•́)ง.
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Official(83)Scraped 13d ago
The male protagonist used to fight all the time when he was a child. Even if you behave better now, your combat effectiveness won't be so bad, right? For people who always fought when they were young, even if they become better behaved as they get older, their fighting ability will not be so bad and they will become so willing (cowardly). It is set according to the male protagonist who always fought when he was a child. On the contrary, the male protagonist will be more stable and ruthless when fighting. The content of this book is actually pretty good, but the character of the main character is a bit broken, and I hope to work hard to improve it.
Support the author By the way, I would like to give some suggestions. The protagonist can have two abilities. One is the ability that the system tells the protagonist, and the other is a hidden ability that can only be awakened under specific circumstances. After all, it takes twice as long for the protagonist to awaken the ability as others. Then the protagonist's ability can be centered around the demonic energy that the woman mentioned when the protagonist was in the mysterious world and was dissected in the previous chapters, and then the hidden ability can be written around the "bad guy". For example, the superpower that the protagonist knows is that he can use magic energy to strengthen himself, use magic energy to condense weapons and use magic energy to inject into the corpse, and then become the protagonist's puppet and be controlled by the protagonist. As the protagonist's level rises, the protagonist can control more and more puppets, and the puppets will become stronger and stronger. Then you can also write about the side effects of the protagonist's use of magic energy. For example, the more times the protagonist uses magic energy, the greater the risk that the protagonist will become black. Then the protagonist's friends come together to find a solution, etc. Then the hidden ability can be written to be activated when the protagonist is about to die, unable to fight or run away, and then the ability of the hidden ability is for the "bad guy" to control the protagonist's body and bring out the original strength of the "bad guy". The side effect is that the time is short, and it will also erode the protagonist's body and then find a solution. The above are my suggestions. I hope the author will adopt them. Thank you.
The male protagonist's character is really weak in the early stages.
Let's change it. The character of the male protagonist is really too weak, especially when he is not the only one who has the system, but others are also in trouble. This kind of character makes him even more cowardly. Even if he fights a kid in front of him, he is so cowardly. Generally speaking, men shouldn't be so cowardly even if they really can't defeat the system.
Five stars for encouragement
The writing is good, although it is a bit watery The character of the protagonist is not very likable. A person who has loved fighting since he was a child is in a daze and trembles when fighting. He is too cowardly and has been in the game for so many days. Even after getting hints, I still didn't understand that this world was about to become a world where people cannibalize people. The protagonist's combat power is deliberately lowered. Regardless of whether he entered the game earlier or later, as long as his personal combat power is higher than the protagonist's, he has no independent opinion at all. He can't survive three chapters without Tang Xi. He relies entirely on his girlfriend to give him experience and equipment. According to this character design, I don't know how you should write the first monster the protagonist fights. Moreover, if you write about this kind of disaster, your relatives will become poisonous if your writing is not good. If there is no twist at the end to make the protagonist mature and cruel, the book will be useless, and I can't say it is useless. It's a bit like a little virgin, and it's all up to the girlfriend to carry the book when something goes wrong. It's not likable, and readers won't like it. Also, the protagonist, Yazi, doesn't look very smart.
good
Pig's trotters are too weak. They should be as decisive in killing as Tang Xi. Also, if I were a pig's trotters, I would kill her long ago if there was someone beside me who could not predict the future and could not be controlled by me.
Rubbish novels ruined my life! ! ! ! !
Big brother will enter the palace so soon
Well, is this a bad result?
I beg the author to reply to me Tell me, what happened to my sister Xi in the end?
Hurry up and kill the pig's trotters and the whole family. It will be easier to write. All kinds of changes.
I hope Tang Xi can be with the protagonist. I really like this yandere. Come on, author. (ง •̀_•́)ง.









