Advent to the Heavens: Brother, Something Seems Wrong with You

The first chapter starts with a lot of nonsense. What can be explained clearly in a few sentences can be nonsense for hundreds of words. It is all nonsense encyclopedia and nonsense introduction. More than half of it is nonsense.

A modern time traveler in the 21st century has been completely assimilated by the feudal thoughts of another world. It's scary to think about it! What about the protagonist's reserves for reading novels in modern times? After many years of life experience in another world, the protagonist's companions at the same time are still so silly and sweet? Traveling to other worlds is popular in this world. Is there no science fiction world?

I gave a talent with an unknown function and then debuffed the protagonist. I don't understand the meaning of this writing. I feel uncomfortable reading cool articles, but I don't have the ability to write something meaningful.

Overall, this book is actually pretty good. It has a fast pace and an invincible flow. In fact, there should be a lot more content that can be written later. There are some poisonous points, but they are not major poisonous points that seriously affect reading. The first is the problem of nonsense introductions and nonsense encyclopedias. This is not a problem of nonsense, but a problem of the author's technique. In fact, it is not popular nowadays to integrate introductions and encyclopedias into the plot and let readers extract them by themselves. Instead, it is written directly so that readers can know directly. Next is talent and panel. These two points are clearly written in the author's introduction. It can be seen that the proportion of these two points in the author's original idea is quite acceptable. The early panels in the book and the frequency of talent appearances can also reflect the author's ideas. But in the later stage, the panel and talent appearance rate were not very high. It may be because the author saw the comments about nonsense and changed its appearance frequency. But as mentioned above, the focus should not be on nonsense. There are also "inexplicable" and "talent with unknown effect" in the comment area, which shows that some readers do not know what the author is writing. Therefore, the focus is not on streamlining the nonsense, but on extracting it separately so that people can see more clearly what he wants to say. Then there is the problem of character growth and physical disability. The problem of character growth can be regarded as a common problem in many novels, but as long as it is not very crooked, it is not a big problem. Physical disability is not a problem. Physical disability should be regarded as a feature and highlight of this book, just like the popular transformation and eunuch novels. The performance of this book may not be very satisfactory, but in fact, the writing is not bad, and the poisonous points are not so serious that it will affect people's reading.

It's a bit baffling, why is the protagonist always disabled? Where are the golden finger plus comprehension plus, there is no reflection.

It's wrong to change the situation

It's well written. The only two comments are a bit pitiful. It seems that they are here to deliberately write bad reviews to suppress people. If you have seen it, don't be misled by those two comments. You have to read everything for yourself. I personally think it is very good. If you have time, you can read two chapters and see for yourself.

This book abuses the author, and it doesn't feel like a cool book. Forget about being reincarnated as a eunuch, there is also a person who is born with a disability. How many people are watching from behind?

It's a bit shameless. I changed the name of the person in "The Deer and the Cauldron" and changed the background before using it. It's better to just use it without changing it.

It's such a fast book, no, it's such a fast-paced book. The Grand Master is invincible.