A Copy of the Heavens Starting from Journey to the West

At the beginning, it was Zhutian, and then it was silent cultivation, and then it was suspense, and conspiracy theory, but the writing was poor and made people dizzy. When I returned to the city, I didn't see the change of the protagonist's temperament. I felt a little nervous. How many normal people around me were there?

I've seen fifty or sixty pictures. Don't know what he wrote? I never understood what this book was about.

Just write and let yourself go. Worrying about this and that is useless even if you are not considered an ant. Do you think you are an onion?

There is some literary talent in selling sheep's heads and selling dog meat. The title is used to attract others to read, but the actual content is a bit different.

I have read more than 40 chapters, and the pace is too slow. You may call it astronomical, but the structure is not at all. Just like the outline I wrote before, I just added a background gimmick about the heavens at the beginning, and then the content has nothing to do with it.

Personally, I feel that the author wrote the protagonist too deeply, without the vision of a time traveler, especially after going out for a run from Xianyue Sanxing Cave, did he forget that it was a one-year copy? All kinds of internal friction, nervousness, the future or a year from now, no matter what, what does the monstrous flood have to do with me? Just remember to become stronger or think about tasks in the limited time. Think so much, you monster! On the contrary, he has no idea about the connection between the monk and his senior brother? It's normal to want to run away, right?

The author wanted the protagonist to cheat but didn't dare to write a systematic story, so he ended up writing something completely different. The first 50 chapters were all about refining the spirit, which was extremely slow, and then the realm suddenly started to take off, without any logic. This author probably didn't have an outline at all and just wrote it blindly.

It writes the flavor of Journey to the West, unlike other novels about cultivating immortals that involve fighting monsters and upgrading.

So the comments on the homepage are all trolls, right? Except for those few comments, they are all negative. Fortunately, I didn't read them.

The first hundred chapters of the original variant cover things around the Sanxing Cave (either Journey to the West, or some interactions between the protagonist and his brothers), explain some backgrounds (mainly that many powerful people want to progress, such as the Emperor of Heaven and so on. The legend requires the spirituality of heaven and the root of earth), and improve the protagonist Big (the spirituality of heaven, compared with the Western Emperor of Heaven, corresponding to the monkey's root of earth). Then, the protagonist becomes something more delicious than Tang Monk's meat (Tang Monk's meat is just a glutton for some little monsters, and the monsters with a background are just a show off. The protagonist is greedy by a bunch of powerful people, and there are all the heavens in the opponent's reincarnation space. The monkey is almost out of taste~). In this case, the author arranged a spiritual treasure to cover himself, and the master rescued him. It's okay up to here, but then it's okay to return to the real world... Can you directly use the name Ruchen Taoist in the dungeon on the ranking list that can be renamed at will? (The great ones who were able to drag him into the dungeon arranged it so that he would be eaten like the boneless relics of Buddha Ruchen. Can you not know your dungeon's Taoist ID? Not to mention that there is only one protagonist in the rankings! If this is not a direct lock, it will be blind and miserable.) Did you also reply to the forum to popularize the knowledge of cultivating immortals? Just pretend that you can't be found online (the article is directly speculated by the official to be the general area)... In reality, company apprentices, colleagues, superiors, and bosses are all chosen by God? (1.8 Million out of 1.8 Billion, a company with 300 people is really full of talents~) Just think of it as a plot promotion, but the subsequent plot is really speechless. A foreign girl sent an evil spirit thousands of miles away to kill the protagonist (the protagonist took the initiative to mix it up), but this is still the case in the country where everyone is practicing martial arts and cannot kill such things (the front foot leaves after the front foot is finished, and the official rear foot arrives. In the article, the official clearly stated that it cannot be killed, and can only be sealed). Then he revealed his identity to his beautiful apprentice, and then asked her to check the real-life information of his senior brother? After seeing this, I really am not in the mood to continue reading, so I will just pretend that the protagonist is dead, otherwise it will affect my IQ. Did the protagonist dance like this just after he came back? The reality on the Internet is double-jumping, what's the use of that Lingbao like this? Need someone to hide it? I'm afraid I didn't mean to say this, don't affect my pretense! The protagonist is a tonic in the eyes of the great powers! Still the kind that is greedy both inside and outside! If you are discovered, you will be eaten! In this situation, you don't want to hide yourself, but are you afraid that others won't know how special you are? How different? There is so much exposed, the logical chain is clear, and you can kill me in a matter of minutes! Ranking list exposes ID→_→ID speech exposes region→_→region handles evil spirits and exposes identity. In this case, the protagonist cannot be found and killed, which is in vain. After all, the protagonist has self-destructed multiple times, but he still can't catch the tail? It doesn't require any calculation ability, okay , you can find the person directly with a little attention... In the previous article, I also talked about the protagonist's state of mind and peace... Haha~ He is the only one who cultivates immortality. He doesn't want to hide himself and expose himself to be different everywhere. He was still used as a tonic by many powerful people. With the help of his masters and seniors, he temporarily escaped from disaster. Knowing what kind of situation he was in... He was so stupid! This book is destined to be deleted due to evaluation, but I'm not happy about it!