
The Person is Destroyed in the Pillar, and the Treatment at the Beginning is Uneventful
by Mengbi Tower
About This Novel
Heian era. The night is dark and windy, in an ancient Japanese house. A young man wearing loose brown robes, with a pair of dead fish eyes hanging from his front, sat in front of a pale and weak child with a stiff smile. "Ubuyashiki-sama." The young man called the child in front of him. The child, who has long hair and a pale and sickly complexion, and is known as "Obashiki" looks at the young man with a ferocious face. The moonlight shines into the house through the courtyard, illuminating the child's eyes that are gradually becoming more and more demonic, like red Higanbana flowers. Although the young man in brown robe turned a blind eye and looked calm. But his hands, which were hidden under his sleeves and couldn't stop shaking, exposed his thoughts. Cold sweat broke out on the young man's back. Something is wrong in this peaceful era! ! --The new book "Demon Slayer: The Return of Kamado Tanjuro from Sekiro" has been released
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Official(66)Scraped 11d ago
Well written, but the setting is problematic (400-word book review)
Anyone who has watched the first season of Demon Slayer should know that the breathing method, a special element belonging to the Demon Slayer world, is a way to gain powerful power in their world. It is a simple and crude technique that can increase your strength by just exercising your lung capacity and inhaling a large amount of air at one time. Later, when your physical fitness improves, every daily breath can be transformed into the kind of inhalation of large amounts of air at one time. By measuring the air and blowing up the gourd, the whole person can become a "little superman". Therefore, the protagonist is set to travel a thousand years before the beginning of the plot, when Muzan was still very weak. Even if Muzan ran away, relying on the understanding of the plot, he can also be given the breathing method in advance to form a ghost killing team. Muzan has no possibility of survival at all, unless he hides until the end of the world. . . Therefore, there is a problem with the setting. It seems too deliberate to have the protagonist deliberately ignore the breathing method. Unless it is changed, the protagonist is set to be a person who has never watched Demon Slayer anime and does not know that Demon Slayer anime exists. However, if such a change is made, the entire plot will have to be changed, and it will definitely be impossible to change. . . It's a pity, the writing is pretty good, and it would be great if there were no problems with the settings! You can increase the amplitude by taking a deep breath. The greater your lung capacity, the more abnormal the increase. I personally like Demon Slayer World with such a setting, so although there are problems with the setting, I still give it a five-star rating! Come on!
Another idea for development (400 words to share)
For the people of the motherland who traveled through the Heian Era of the Demon Slayer World, they clearly knew what the Breathing Technique was, but since it was published, the human camp was immediately unparalleled, and there was no way to write about it. I had no choice but to pretend to be confused and just write about it. Here I propose a new development path. First of all, the foresighted people of the motherland released the breathing method and opened the unparalleled mode for mankind. In fact, it cannot be collapsed. There is still content to write, that is, to be a co-leader of the good guys and the bad guys! It doesn't matter if Mukai dies, the protagonist will play the second Muzan, training the Demon Slayers and the ghosts at the same time. In the eyes of the Demon Slayers, the protagonist is the light of mankind and a savior of justice. In the eyes of the ghosts, the protagonist is a big devil who spurs them to continuously improve their development capabilities. As the co-master of both parties, he wanders between the two camps, just to create a fantasy world with a higher combat power system. When the breathing method evolved into body refining and gas gathering After forming the pill, when the ghost technique evolved into the Ninpo Escape Technique, a civilization in which cultivators and magicians collided was successfully launched. The plot officially started. Referring to the anime plot, you can arrange a series of famous fighting scenes in which cultivation and magic compete for beauty. The ending certainly represents the victory of human cultivation and the failure of the Ninpo Escape Technique of the ghost clan. It also represents the victory of the Demon Killing Team (Eastern cultivators) VS ghosts (little devil ninjas)! 😘😘😘How about it? I wonder if such an outline is acceptable? For reference only, seek common ground while reserving differences.
What the author wrote is still okay. No big problem
But after 70 to 80, there are some problems. First of all, it is the setting of strength, although the author follows the division of strength levels in the original text. But when I wrote it, I wrote it very vaguely. I wrote, "A ghost with strong strength?" The division of strength existed 600 years ago. This time, there is a logical problem. After the protagonist fell asleep, Mao, as the strongest combat power, was directly blown up by Misai, so why not join the Demon Slayer Team? Misai, he is not such a timid guy, and he is also a vengeful guy. And if you think about the tragedy at this time, more than two-thirds of the soul was cut off by the protagonist. Even if it has been ten years, it is impossible to recover so quickly. Finally, it is a question of strength logic. 600 Years after the protagonist wakes up, the strength of "Pillar" is too weak. Even a ghost that had just been transformed by Kai and had just eaten a human was tortured to this point, and it was still two pillars. This is too weak. How did it survive these 600 years?
Created a group, group number 554974648
As in the title as in the title as in the title as in the title
Didn't Rihu already have Leihu?
Does Sun Breathing give rise to other breathing techniques? Why was there thunder in the early stage? After reading the first few chapters, I gave it a five-star rating.
It's okay. It's considered the best among Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba. If you are interested, you can check it out.
The timeline is too confusing. Various other characters appeared before Ji Guoyuan was released.
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Official(66)Scraped 11d ago
Well written, but the setting is problematic (400-word book review)
Anyone who has watched the first season of Demon Slayer should know that the breathing method, a special element belonging to the Demon Slayer world, is a way to gain powerful power in their world. It is a simple and crude technique that can increase your strength by just exercising your lung capacity and inhaling a large amount of air at one time. Later, when your physical fitness improves, every daily breath can be transformed into the kind of inhalation of large amounts of air at one time. By measuring the air and blowing up the gourd, the whole person can become a "little superman". Therefore, the protagonist is set to travel a thousand years before the beginning of the plot, when Muzan was still very weak. Even if Muzan ran away, relying on the understanding of the plot, he can also be given the breathing method in advance to form a ghost killing team. Muzan has no possibility of survival at all, unless he hides until the end of the world. . . Therefore, there is a problem with the setting. It seems too deliberate to have the protagonist deliberately ignore the breathing method. Unless it is changed, the protagonist is set to be a person who has never watched Demon Slayer anime and does not know that Demon Slayer anime exists. However, if such a change is made, the entire plot will have to be changed, and it will definitely be impossible to change. . . It's a pity, the writing is pretty good, and it would be great if there were no problems with the settings! You can increase the amplitude by taking a deep breath. The greater your lung capacity, the more abnormal the increase. I personally like Demon Slayer World with such a setting, so although there are problems with the setting, I still give it a five-star rating! Come on!
Another idea for development (400 words to share)
For the people of the motherland who traveled through the Heian Era of the Demon Slayer World, they clearly knew what the Breathing Technique was, but since it was published, the human camp was immediately unparalleled, and there was no way to write about it. I had no choice but to pretend to be confused and just write about it. Here I propose a new development path. First of all, the foresighted people of the motherland released the breathing method and opened the unparalleled mode for mankind. In fact, it cannot be collapsed. There is still content to write, that is, to be a co-leader of the good guys and the bad guys! It doesn't matter if Mukai dies, the protagonist will play the second Muzan, training the Demon Slayers and the ghosts at the same time. In the eyes of the Demon Slayers, the protagonist is the light of mankind and a savior of justice. In the eyes of the ghosts, the protagonist is a big devil who spurs them to continuously improve their development capabilities. As the co-master of both parties, he wanders between the two camps, just to create a fantasy world with a higher combat power system. When the breathing method evolved into body refining and gas gathering After forming the pill, when the ghost technique evolved into the Ninpo Escape Technique, a civilization in which cultivators and magicians collided was successfully launched. The plot officially started. Referring to the anime plot, you can arrange a series of famous fighting scenes in which cultivation and magic compete for beauty. The ending certainly represents the victory of human cultivation and the failure of the Ninpo Escape Technique of the ghost clan. It also represents the victory of the Demon Killing Team (Eastern cultivators) VS ghosts (little devil ninjas)! 😘😘😘How about it? I wonder if such an outline is acceptable? For reference only, seek common ground while reserving differences.
What the author wrote is still okay. No big problem
But after 70 to 80, there are some problems. First of all, it is the setting of strength, although the author follows the division of strength levels in the original text. But when I wrote it, I wrote it very vaguely. I wrote, "A ghost with strong strength?" The division of strength existed 600 years ago. This time, there is a logical problem. After the protagonist fell asleep, Mao, as the strongest combat power, was directly blown up by Misai, so why not join the Demon Slayer Team? Misai, he is not such a timid guy, and he is also a vengeful guy. And if you think about the tragedy at this time, more than two-thirds of the soul was cut off by the protagonist. Even if it has been ten years, it is impossible to recover so quickly. Finally, it is a question of strength logic. 600 Years after the protagonist wakes up, the strength of "Pillar" is too weak. Even a ghost that had just been transformed by Kai and had just eaten a human was tortured to this point, and it was still two pillars. This is too weak. How did it survive these 600 years?
Created a group, group number 554974648
As in the title as in the title as in the title as in the title
Didn't Rihu already have Leihu?
Does Sun Breathing give rise to other breathing techniques? Why was there thunder in the early stage? After reading the first few chapters, I gave it a five-star rating.
It's okay. It's considered the best among Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba. If you are interested, you can check it out.
The timeline is too confusing. Various other characters appeared before Ji Guoyuan was released.
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Demon Slayer is a short comic, so there are very few fanfics, and there are basically none that are well written. I can only say that compared with the selected ones, this one can be considered as food. It is assumed that the protagonist knows the plot and travels to become a doctor who treats Muzan. The opening scene is the night when Muzan becomes a ghost. He drinks Muzan's blood and becomes a ghost more powerful than him. He can see the soul and survives by eating evil ghost souls (Muzan's blood ~ Wuzan's soul). He has been chasing Muzan and then establishes a ghost killing team. Since the plot started early, it was assumed that after the protagonist established the Demon Slayer Corps, he fell into a deep sleep because he had swallowed too many evil souls of Muzan and needed to be digested. He later woke up in Enichi's era (a routine operation for jumping the timeline of short comic novels) and destroyed Muzan. After that, he wrote a follow-up character story as a side story. Overall, it is a Wudi novel. Wuxian keeps avoiding the protagonist, but it looks good. Most of the tragedies in the original work have been saved. Complete, easy to read, single heroine, invincible, no system, highly recommended. Ps. This book looks really good. Isn't it fun to write it easily?




The protagonist traveled through time and became a doctor who treated Wu Mei. At the beginning of Wu Mei's ghost transformation night, he drank Wu Mei's blood and turned into a powerful ghost... Saw it a few years ago



Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba fan: Travel through time and become Muzan's doctor, then from now on, Muzan's nemesis will be me ⸜(๑'ᵕ'๑)⸝⋆*




I finished watching Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba a while ago, and the anime plot has just reached the middle stage, so I searched for fanfics on Qidian. Then I discovered that there are really very few Demon Slayer fans in Qidian, and this one is at the forefront of them so far. The protagonist traveled through time and became a doctor who turned Wu Mei into a ghost, and became a ghost king body that was more perfect than Wu Mei. As soon as he became gay friends with Jiguoyuan, and the two of them joined forces, Muzan ended up not surviving to the original timeline. The ending is relatively happy.






























