The Adventures of Jackie Chan: I Am the Brother of the Holy Lord!

666, that's awesome, I can't even figure out the name, but I'm still writing, the Holy Lord is called Shendu, and the name is Holy Lord.

I'm not criticizing the author, I'm criticizing the work. There are a few poisonous spots 1. The protagonist is not strong enough, and is a small level weaker than the Eight Demons. However, the protagonist is the elder brother of the Holy Lord, and his qualifications should be similar to the Holy Lord. Considering that Ximu is the younger brother of the Holy Lord, and is the strongest, it seems that the protagonist Shen Tian must be as strong as the Eight Demons (after turning into a stone statue, he has 12 spells, more than the Holy Lord, so he should be stronger than the Holy Lord) 2. It can be seen that the author wants to give the protagonist a harem, but not to mention that the protagonist is a demon, he spared no effort to the human-demon hybrid Qingmei who blocked the way, saved her and even taught him magic. Just because one of the protagonist's harem, Fu Wen, was killed by the inconspicuous Bo at the time. Xun laid an ambush, and when I saw that, I thought this foreshadowing was pretty good, but I thought that when Fu Wen would escape and find the protagonist to kill Bo Xun, the author directly killed Fu Wen and gave up his second life. Maybe this is the reason why I can't write novels. 3. I didn't want to watch the part where the protagonist was taken away by the little dragon and the talisman was taken away. The protagonist was tricked by Jackie Chan before. I can understand that Jackie Chan's passive skills were 100% accurate, but he fought the demon dragon twice and won. I didn't even think about killing him. What about uncle and nephew, uncle and nephew? Xiaolong was created by the Holy Lord with magic. (And this magic was originally used by the Holy Lord to create high-level demon generals on a large scale (the setting of this article).) Even if it is said, the protagonist is a demon. He has lived in a world ruled by demons for a long time. He knows how to be ruthless. When he beat a demon couple (?), He would just pull off his arm for a day, and then he would be let go. 4 Is a suggestion. Those who come to QReading prefer to read cool novels. One cannot, or at least should not, read such a frustrating novel (when I saw the protagonist petrify himself, I thought he was complete enough to be modern. He had to stress his strength to lose four spells and couldn't protect his wife. I wanted to give up three times in just a few dozen pages). The subject matter of this novel is still great. This is why I insisted on giving up until the third time, but I really don't want to read it anymore. I wish the author Jun a hundred chapters. I hope the author Jun can see some of my suggestions and make some changes. I also hope that I can use this theme to see this novel on the monthly ticket list.

It gets worse as you go to the back. The protagonist is like an idiot. He doesn't have enough spells and doesn't look for them. The shadow warrior doesn't care if he feels there is a problem. He leaks air everywhere and even slaps him.

The theme of Jackie Chan's Adventures is rare, but there are many problems in the setting. The protagonist knows the setting of the balance of yin and yang, but does not consider how to break this rule, but wants to seal himself until the main time. Isn't this a sign of illness? Why does the protagonist think that after breaking the seal during the peak period of righteousness, he will not be sealed again? Now is the peak period of black energy. Instead of honestly considering how to integrate into the world, he wants to linger until the peak period of righteousness. Main character Where does the confidence come from? It's like an emperor doesn't consider saving the dynasty before it is destroyed, but wants to rebel after the new dynasty establishes stability in the world. Isn't it pure stupidity? The setting of twins is actually quite interesting. It is better to split the throne according to the setting of the Dragon Clan novel, which will not break the gossip pattern. As far as the animation itself is concerned, the Holy Lord still cares about family affection. He can share his anger with the little dragon, so it is okay to have a weak brother.

Don't scold me, I'm afraid...

It looked okay from the beginning, but it was wrong when Qingmei came out. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, you don't have to write them. It looks like the crazy fantasy of a lonely fat kid.

This novel is very well written. It can be regarded as the fulfillment of my childhood dream of Jackie Chan's Adventures. And he writes different characters from different perspectives, which I like very much. I also hope that the author can finish this novel well. I believe, and everyone believes that he will be popular.

The writing was good at the beginning, but it gets worse and worse later on.

It's a very good fanfic among Jackie Chan. But the author is really good at paragraphing and always breaks off at exciting points.

Very good, very energetic. I give you 5 stars as the author.