
Swordsman in the World of Heavens
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A sword is not only a weapon, but also a spirit. His swordsmanship is the best in the world. His sword is immortal. His sword penetrated all heavens and realms.
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Official(31)Scraped 17d ago
Is the method of cultivating the mind really that magical?
In the materialistic real world, one cannot practice martial arts and become immortal, but one can cultivate one's mind and constantly improve one's mental model through practice, making oneself more perfect and evolving towards the direction of a sage. People with a high spiritual realm are also highly intelligent and can be at the top no matter what field they are engaged in.
That's weird
Why does it feel like an assembly line? I don't know how to cross it. . .
In the first chapter, the author deliberately wrote that the protagonist had a broken leg
Later, I will write that it has not been cured, which looks particularly awkward.
The content is okay, but every time you finish writing this world and want to travel to the next world, just add a few points... And that's it, it's the content of the next world. It didn't say how he traveled through it. You have to connect the content.
Tasteless. boring
Read thirty chapters. It feels like you're about to throw yourself into the street. How to say it? Reading your book now feels like a waste. I've seen a lot of Jin Yong's fans. Not to mention the issue of aesthetic fatigue. Each of your worlds will be over after a dozen chapters. Every world is a fleeting experience. The protagonist setting is too Long Aotian. Each world is basically pushed horizontally. No ups and downs. It seems boring. Especially the Condor Volume. Just make up an identity and make Huang Rong believe it! Do you think Huang Rong is a silly girl?
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How to say it?
I don't understand. What exactly is written? Is it time travel?
Well written eunuch
The writing is wonderful and the writing style is good, but the updates are too slow and easy to read.
Are you and him the same person?
Mo Yuyunshan, are you and I the same author of Paiyunzhang? Why do you two like writing Once Upon a Time in every novel you write?
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Official(31)Scraped 17d ago
Is the method of cultivating the mind really that magical?
In the materialistic real world, one cannot practice martial arts and become immortal, but one can cultivate one's mind and constantly improve one's mental model through practice, making oneself more perfect and evolving towards the direction of a sage. People with a high spiritual realm are also highly intelligent and can be at the top no matter what field they are engaged in.
That's weird
Why does it feel like an assembly line? I don't know how to cross it. . .
In the first chapter, the author deliberately wrote that the protagonist had a broken leg
Later, I will write that it has not been cured, which looks particularly awkward.
The content is okay, but every time you finish writing this world and want to travel to the next world, just add a few points... And that's it, it's the content of the next world. It didn't say how he traveled through it. You have to connect the content.
Tasteless. boring
Read thirty chapters. It feels like you're about to throw yourself into the street. How to say it? Reading your book now feels like a waste. I've seen a lot of Jin Yong's fans. Not to mention the issue of aesthetic fatigue. Each of your worlds will be over after a dozen chapters. Every world is a fleeting experience. The protagonist setting is too Long Aotian. Each world is basically pushed horizontally. No ups and downs. It seems boring. Especially the Condor Volume. Just make up an identity and make Huang Rong believe it! Do you think Huang Rong is a silly girl?
Check out the comments
How to say it?
I don't understand. What exactly is written? Is it time travel?
Well written eunuch
The writing is wonderful and the writing style is good, but the updates are too slow and easy to read.
Are you and him the same person?
Mo Yuyunshan, are you and I the same author of Paiyunzhang? Why do you two like writing Once Upon a Time in every novel you write?












