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Official(2)Scraped 8d ago
Why do I feel like the chapters are a bit messy? I can't get it right.
Overall it's okay, but it doesn't seem to fit in with the previous and following chapters.
What a mess, the above part doesn't follow the next part, so it's hard to write it down
Catching rubbish, it breaks down directly. One second, he is ready to fight, and the next second, he is overturned, and then he gets into a mess.
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Community(0)
Official(2)Scraped 8d ago
Why do I feel like the chapters are a bit messy? I can't get it right.
Overall it's okay, but it doesn't seem to fit in with the previous and following chapters.
What a mess, the above part doesn't follow the next part, so it's hard to write it down
Catching rubbish, it breaks down directly. One second, he is ready to fight, and the next second, he is overturned, and then he gets into a mess.









