My Family Cultivates Immortality, My Mobile Phone Has Traveled Through Time

It's too real, it's too cruel, the huge difference between people without qualifications and those with qualifications, a world full of all kinds of calculations, full of "cannibalism" and the supremacy of interests! So well written!

The author doesn't need to read what those trolls say, I fully support it.

The details are too detailed, only a general introduction is enough, and there is too much missing to make it more enjoyable. The character description is so solid that when watching it for a long time, it feels like watching someone else's story without any sense of representation. It gives people the feeling that there is not a strong desire to catch up on updates, and it feels like you can watch it or not watch it, as it will become boring after a long time! After all, the novel is still mainly about being fun and funny. It is too detailed and boring after reading it for a long time. There are also descriptions of realms, which feel like matryoshka dolls, layered one inside another. I feel like the ten major sects appeared a bit late and don't quite follow the logic. I prefer descriptions like that, such as which major forces are in the east and which major forces are in the west? Just like in some Xianxia novels, the Northern Demon goes to the West from the Buddhist Gate to the Holy Land in the Southern Dynasty. This description will give us a very satisfying feeling of defeating monsters and upgrading whether it is running a business or joining other major forces. Otherwise, like the big power settings in this book, there will always be a strong sense of dissonance, and it feels like a patch, giving the race a feeling that was not well conceived in the early stages! It's like a special soldier who stood in the most awesome place in the world and returned to a country and was beaten up by a local gangster. Then he kept taking revenge, kept upgrading the map, and kept learning about new maps. It felt like he was a fake standing at the top of the world before, and he himself was still stupid. The first is that the conception of the various forces on the map is not standard enough! Full of many flaws. There are still many pitfalls that feel like they have been filled in hard, the expanded map is too wide, the description of the main world you are in is vague, the details are drawn too carefully, and there are not many laughs! Then the protagonist just feels like he has no special features. He feels like he is an all-round master. In fact, if he is too versatile, he is mediocre. The character is too stable and does not describe a style that leads an era. It's not crazy enough, not wild enough, and lacks the excitement of adventure. If it has a wild and wild character, I think it would be very good. Generally speaking, the characters in it didn't give me a very amazing feeling.

I'm going to give it four stars for the time being. What's wrong with Goldfinger that hasn't come up yet? You can change the technique, but it turned out that it was only used once in decades. Since you have a golden finger, don't press it all the time. If you want to be ordinary, don't use it. Goldfinger writes such a great review. The protagonist is over thirty years old, and there is still a golden finger who is still practicing Qi? Not to mention the invincible and refreshing novel, there is no need to press Golden Finger like this. Finally, readers, handsome guys, read the novel first and then comment on me. Thank you.

This book feels too depressing. You want to write a real-life story since the beginning of the mortal story, but the protagonist feels a bit like a holy mother. This won't work and that won't work. Since you wrote the character Ye Feixue and later married someone from another family, it feels like although the protagonist doesn't want to marry, she has to marry for the sake of the family. Before that, the Jindan Patriarch accepted disciples and gave him exercises, but Pig's Feet refused again and again for his own freedom. Why add a reason for the marriage because the family has no money? Why did Pig's Feet refuse to become a disciple in the first place? Why was Master Jindan not as good as the son-in-law of the Zifu family? I won't use the excuse that I'm afraid of being found out by the golden elixir ancestor. I have read more than a hundred chapters of this book now, which is not too much. To sum up, I feel that this book is neither earthy nor foreign. Just like at first, I thought it was a single-female novel, but later I realized it wasn't a harem novel.

My cell phone hangs up and my practice is so slow. Also genocide. Isn't it a family story?

First of all, plug-in: after seeing more than 80 chapters, I can't even understand any of the three functions. Secondly, the bottom line has been broken again and again, so what about the time travellers? What rubbish.

There are always some people who regard cultivation as building a house. After all, this idea is niche. First, five people use five kinds of materials to build a house, and the driver who transports the materials is annoyed. There are five ways to build a house, and there are only so many fixed routes for transporting bricks at the same time. Who should use it? The road is just that wide, and the materials used by one person to build a house are used by five people. The house built has legs in the east and west. Those who know it are building a house, but those who don't know think you are making art. Second, five people built a building. They fought and got angry and tore down the load-bearing wall. How could you cry? Third, the purpose of building a house is to live in it. You can't let five people live together. Brothers are still having conflicts. Fourth, after the house is built, you have to find a job and marry a wife. How do you come up with the matching exercises, so that each of the five people can have a wife? You have enough time to hold five kinds of weddings, and then start a family. What about your support problem? The more brothers you have, the more difficult it is to solve the support problem. When the time comes, a collective strike will not take care of you. Fifth, is it easy to marry a wife at the same time? It requires money and choosing a date, the process is very troublesome, and then it will take another year to have a child, which means there will be results. In the world of cultivating immortals, you have just given birth to a baby, and someone else has already given birth to a grandson. Then you are as old as their grandson, and when their son hits you, he is hitting the baby, just like playing.

In a family novel, the characters are too ordinary and have no sense of existence.

To be honest, the character and ability of the protagonist are useless. It is the same as without Golden Finger. It doesn't look like a cultivator at all. It feels like he is practicing martial arts, which is too lame.