I Open a Welfare Home in the Pokémon World

First of all, the subject matter of this novel is quite good, and it also embodies the family-like bond between people and Pokémon. This is undoubtedly great for a Pokémon fanfic. However, as far as a novel is concerned, although such subject matter and themes destined it to focus on life and plain narrative. But it shouldn't be basically boring and dull as you read it. Some people can say, if you want to be happy, why not read cool articles. What makes it cool is not that the protagonist has to have hands and eyes, and he abuses the scum and slaps him in the face all the way. At least there must be motivation to attract people to continue reading. What makes people feel excited when reading the whole story is that one day there is a snowstorm, and the wild Pokémon trust the protagonist to work together to survive the disaster. In addition, the evolution of the Abandoned Monkey seems to be taken for granted and has no fluctuations for most of the book. In the animation, wild abandoned monkeys can easily evolve into two when fighting in groups. Of course, it can be set in the novel, but the protagonist already knows the conditions for evolution and is still procrastinating. It is better not to write such a plot. In addition, if there is no change of location, the protagonist will stick to this orphanage. The plot behind it is completely guessable. The protagonist picks up or adopts an abandoned Pokémon → upgrades the healing chamber or rescues the Pokémon → is adopted or becomes the protagonist's Pokémon Such a boring and boring story chain really makes it difficult for people to have the motivation to read. Moreover, the protagonist's ability to ignore Pokémon attacks seems very good and very strong, but in fact it has locked up this novel. This means that the protagonist does not need to actively and deliberately improve the strength of his Pokémon or even possess a skill. Such a mediocre protagonist, even if he has the power of Changpan, will not give readers any sense of involvement. Ordinary and terrible, just like our ordinary present. As a novel, such a setting is really difficult to attract people.

There is obviously a system, but there are still so many things that are powerless. The writing is not bad, but I am not very happy to read it.

I can't stand it anymore when I see gambling dogs written about them. Just write about elves. I don't believe that people should change their minds after gambling to death, and it makes people a little disgusting when written like this.

There is no confusion in the timeline and it is easy to understand

It looks good, it looks good, it will be updated soon~~~~The anchor wants to finish it

There is obviously something wrong, but there is still so much powerlessness

, is there a heroine? Who is the heroine? Who is it?

Sure enough, I still can't stand this kind of book that uses Pokémon as food. You can obviously set some Pokémon to shed their flesh as food, but you still have to make the dark wind of eating Pokémon whole. You are writing a warm book like an orphanage. The content is a joke from hell.

Very warm and healing, the writing is very good, but there are some innocuous typos

I feel so embarrassed looking at the names given to the elves.