
Ordinary Mortals Cultivating Immortals
by Yaluo
About This Novel
A senior Jiao guy accidentally came to the world where mortals cultivate immortality. Looking around, he saw murderous intent everywhere around him. One wrong step and your body and soul are gone. It is really difficult to survive in this kind of world. "Why don't we find the protagonist first?" Someone thought. However... "If I remember correctly, the protagonist's surname seems to be Han, and he looks a bit like Song Xiaobao, and then... What else is there?"... The new book has been released, "The Thief of Journey to the West", please support it.
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Official(87)Scraped 6d ago
Seeing you write about Han Li, I might as well read the original work
Anyone who has read the original novel knows what kind of person Han Li is. Why is he called Old Demon Han? Did you get this title for nothing? Well, if the author writes with his own unique opinions, then I have nothing to say. I happen to be someone other than your unique opinions, so I'm sorry, I hope you don't delete it, it depends on how many people are the same.
The author is completely proud of himself
Have you actually read the original work? If you say that the main character has only read the beginning, then you still write a Hammer fanfic, it's really funny. The main character is completely insane, so you might as well write a mental hospital.
I can't stand it. This kind of technological mecha-style cultivator is really too inconsistent, nondescript, and too exaggerated to break away from the original background.
A little bit poisonous.
If the protagonist is too kind or nosy, it is really not suitable to be in the mortal world of immortality. Or write something else that is more realistic. If you want to rise in the mortal world, who is not a scheming guy or a kind-faced and dark-hearted guy?
As a gift to my daughter, you are the strongest
What the hell? It doesn't matter if you have a good relationship with Mr. Han, but you still give him a daughter. I don't understand it. This is a mysterious operation. (Isn't it possible for the author to do this in real life? He has to rely on his brothers.) And there is the Holy Mother. In this world of killing, you are such a Holy Mother.
It's really rubbish, it's so helpless, we came to see the Legend of Immortality, but it's like a **, disorganized, schizophrenic, and a fool
Blaming Han Li for no reason
The original author's settings cannot be broken, which is boring. In addition, Han Li can rewrite the past at will. There is no way to change the settings that are more awesome than him. He can change them. No twists and turns, no fun
The protagonist is too useless
More than 60 chapters and no foundation building yet, no need to write about spirit-gathering body, pseudo-spiritual roots are faster than you
The main character is a psychopath
I was suffocated by the arsenic in 1982
Idiot, in a world where people eat people, you actually talk to me about civilized morality! No wonder you were called crazy. What are you thinking about? What are the three views now? If you work 11 hours a day, if something goes wrong, you will take the blame! How many months is your salary owed? The purpose of keeping you alive is to squeeze more of your labor force! Why prevent people from hurting each other? That's because you hurt his property and he was very uncomfortable. The moment you were born, your life didn't belong to you, but to his property!
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Official(87)Scraped 6d ago
Seeing you write about Han Li, I might as well read the original work
Anyone who has read the original novel knows what kind of person Han Li is. Why is he called Old Demon Han? Did you get this title for nothing? Well, if the author writes with his own unique opinions, then I have nothing to say. I happen to be someone other than your unique opinions, so I'm sorry, I hope you don't delete it, it depends on how many people are the same.
The author is completely proud of himself
Have you actually read the original work? If you say that the main character has only read the beginning, then you still write a Hammer fanfic, it's really funny. The main character is completely insane, so you might as well write a mental hospital.
I can't stand it. This kind of technological mecha-style cultivator is really too inconsistent, nondescript, and too exaggerated to break away from the original background.
A little bit poisonous.
If the protagonist is too kind or nosy, it is really not suitable to be in the mortal world of immortality. Or write something else that is more realistic. If you want to rise in the mortal world, who is not a scheming guy or a kind-faced and dark-hearted guy?
As a gift to my daughter, you are the strongest
What the hell? It doesn't matter if you have a good relationship with Mr. Han, but you still give him a daughter. I don't understand it. This is a mysterious operation. (Isn't it possible for the author to do this in real life? He has to rely on his brothers.) And there is the Holy Mother. In this world of killing, you are such a Holy Mother.
It's really rubbish, it's so helpless, we came to see the Legend of Immortality, but it's like a **, disorganized, schizophrenic, and a fool
Blaming Han Li for no reason
The original author's settings cannot be broken, which is boring. In addition, Han Li can rewrite the past at will. There is no way to change the settings that are more awesome than him. He can change them. No twists and turns, no fun
The protagonist is too useless
More than 60 chapters and no foundation building yet, no need to write about spirit-gathering body, pseudo-spiritual roots are faster than you
The main character is a psychopath
I was suffocated by the arsenic in 1982
Idiot, in a world where people eat people, you actually talk to me about civilized morality! No wonder you were called crazy. What are you thinking about? What are the three views now? If you work 11 hours a day, if something goes wrong, you will take the blame! How many months is your salary owed? The purpose of keeping you alive is to squeeze more of your labor force! Why prevent people from hurting each other? That's because you hurt his property and he was very uncomfortable. The moment you were born, your life didn't belong to you, but to his property!












