Strange Mountains and Rivers

The story has been written down. During the competition, there were a lot of outstanding rookies under the age of 50 who were famous in the competition. Now the protagonist has a lot of them around him.

In a harem story, the protagonist is old and has very poor qualifications. After more than 100 chapters, he is still at the second level of Qi training. He doesn't want to become stronger and always has a relationship with a few senior sisters. What kind of cultivation is this? What a waste of time I spent reading over a hundred chapters! Depend on! If you like no heroine or single heroine, watch it carefully!

It's long-winded, and I'm stuck on word count every day, and my memory is bad, and my levels fluctuate, and one person dies seven or eight times. Ghostwriting shouldn't be such a scam to cheat people out of manuscript fees, right?

You want to write well, but you push too hard. The writing is basically up to standard, but there is too much nonsense, the psychological descriptions and narrations are too frequent and lengthy, the plot is advanced too slowly, and the focus and climax are not prominent. . . Oh, let's just watch it, fast forward, fast forward. . .

Lao Rui is still like this. His writing is very slow and uninteresting. He really likes to write inner narration, but it is not nutritious. I will not follow your book anymore. I have read several books and it is always written in this way. It is a waste of time and money.

Too much nonsense I have read almost a hundred books and I feel very disappointed. It does not look like a book written by an old author. There are two main disadvantages 1. There is too much nonsense. I talk about the same thing over and over again. I don't know whether I am trying to reduce the number of words or because I am afraid that readers will not understand. 2. During dialogue and battle, there are long paragraphs of psychological description, which will be very dramatic, right?

It's dry and incomprehensible, with less than 5% of the effective content in one chapter and the rest is all rubbish, all based on the same routines from 20 years ago. It was probably an old antique from 20 years ago who ran out of money and made some money. He commented in one sentence: not as good as AI.

He drifted off when he was open and looked down on his benefactor and sect. Others are giving you timely help.

The author has been obviously absent-minded recently, and has forgotten everything he wrote before. He is very verbose and clumsy.

Regan wanted to write a fairy novel as an official novel, but he couldn't even follow the most basic logic and ended up with piles of SB😘. It's not surprising, Genrui is already an old man, and he still wants to act young when he is old. That's it, it looks funny. 😑