
Everlasting Immortality
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An ordinary mortal was reborn into the mysterious world of immortal cultivation and became a monk in a small family. Due to the ardent hopes of the elders, the family is struggling. Faced with various unfavorable situations, Zhang Zhixuan struggled step by step, went upstream, developed his family, and wrote his dream-like and magnificent life. Group number: 316174275v group 815445730 (you can add fans if you have more than 2000 followers)
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Official(846)Scraped 23d ago
Okay, it's a good book about farming and cultivating immortals, it's family-style, and there's almost no intrigue. I stayed up late watching it for a long time. The content is a bit heavy and wordy, but not too much. Just update more chapters and it will be over. It is not easy to have a good book.
The book is good, very graphic, much better than those books about upgrading monsters and changing maps.
Previous books on cultivating immortals were all about one person leveling up, fighting monsters, and showing off all kinds of adventures. After reading it, he forgot about it. It was not as graphic as this book. Also, I felt that a person cultivating immortals would not have a family or a power to collect resources. How could he do whatever he wanted?
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I wrote the image of my family in my heart. The family is the most united group. Unlike in the past, writing a novel was not about family fighting, and it was a life-and-death type. How many years can such a family exist?
In the current situation where fantasy and Xianxia book areas (System, Great Wilderness, Journey to the West) are flying all over the world, it can be regarded as a breath of fresh air. I'm tired of pretending to be slapped in the face. Plain and simple is true. This is a top-notch review. It would be better if the suspense level could be easily enhanced.
The author is great
You have a very serious and strict shortcoming, that is, if you want to become a monk, you must have spiritual veins. Without spiritual veins and cultivation, you will retire and become a mortal. The monks in your book rely too much on spiritual veins and caves. If you write like this, it will turn the world of cultivating immortals into a world of cultivating immortals. In the world of family and sects, how do casual cultivators survive? I can only write about family, and religion cannot be written about casual cultivators. If I insist on writing about casual cultivators, the strongest state of cultivation is Qi refining. If it is too high, it can only mean that casual cultivators have many resources. If you have resources, why be a casual cultivator! So you are trying to replace the casual cultivators who are unable to integrate the foundation building and above into the families and sects everywhere.
Why is it that cultivating immortals always follows the same old routine? . .
After only a dozen chapters, a girl with a dead father appeared, and I felt like I was suffering. Sure enough, the protagonist knows how to accept the old tricks, and sure enough, the girl has the unique talent. . . By the way, can we stop doing this old routine? . . Just write that girl to death. The most troublesome thing about cultivating immortals is women. What's more, the protagonist is also carrying a secret. It is necessary to be on guard against others. If you are not afraid of 10,000, just be afraid of what happens.
The writing is poor and the protagonist is selfish.
I won't say much more about the writing, it's barely bearable to say what everyone knows. The most disgusting thing is that the protagonist is selfish. First, the protagonist's uncle is a third-level formation mage, and he missed his path to avoid joining the sect for the sake of his family. As a result, as for the protagonist, his family finally trained him into a second-level alchemist, but because of a little obsession, he ignored his family and went to the Southern Wilderness. I know that my family is in a difficult situation right now, and there is a shortage of talents. As a result, I don't have to wait for someone to inherit the family's alchemy inheritance to start to resolve the obsession. The clan leader has said that if he goes to the Southern Wilderness, he will survive a narrow escape. The protagonist does not consider what will happen if he dies in the Southern Wilderness and there is no one in the family to make alchemy. Second, the protagonist killed Er Wu to avenge his father, not to mention burst into tears, not even a little bit of psychological fluctuation. What's the difference between this and Hu Peiyu, who took away his body and resolved his obsession for his own path? After looking at it for a long time, it turned out that it was not the relationship between father and son, but just for practice. Third, based on the above two points, the protagonist only cares about his own practice and does not consider his family. He has no feelings for his father who has raised him for more than ten years. Such a selfish person told me that he is the protagonist of a family story. It is really ridiculous and disgusting.
I haven't saved the manuscript, so I can only update it at night.
I haven't saved the manuscript, so I can only update it at night.
The setting is too toxic and the logic is contradictory
The author emphasizes the genius of the protagonist. According to the setting, the genius only cultivates and does not need to deal with chores, but the family arranges for the protagonist to go down the mountain, saying that the family is short of people. Although he is young, he still goes down early, and apologizes in various ways for delaying the genius' training. It is so disgusting. The family cannot function without one person at the sixth level of Qi training? ? ? The most poisonous thing is that without spiritual energy, your cultivation will regress, fall into decline, and become numb. Just like those big guys said, did you see those two mortals fighting? I was still a Mahayana monk a year ago, but now I have been fighting for a year, and my cultivation level has dropped to the mortal level.
Good Mother behind you
The elixir that matures once every 300 years and the prepared elixir are not enough for my own family, but they are given to others for free.
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Official(846)Scraped 23d ago
Okay, it's a good book about farming and cultivating immortals, it's family-style, and there's almost no intrigue. I stayed up late watching it for a long time. The content is a bit heavy and wordy, but not too much. Just update more chapters and it will be over. It is not easy to have a good book.
The book is good, very graphic, much better than those books about upgrading monsters and changing maps.
Previous books on cultivating immortals were all about one person leveling up, fighting monsters, and showing off all kinds of adventures. After reading it, he forgot about it. It was not as graphic as this book. Also, I felt that a person cultivating immortals would not have a family or a power to collect resources. How could he do whatever he wanted?
Support the author
I wrote the image of my family in my heart. The family is the most united group. Unlike in the past, writing a novel was not about family fighting, and it was a life-and-death type. How many years can such a family exist?
In the current situation where fantasy and Xianxia book areas (System, Great Wilderness, Journey to the West) are flying all over the world, it can be regarded as a breath of fresh air. I'm tired of pretending to be slapped in the face. Plain and simple is true. This is a top-notch review. It would be better if the suspense level could be easily enhanced.
The author is great
You have a very serious and strict shortcoming, that is, if you want to become a monk, you must have spiritual veins. Without spiritual veins and cultivation, you will retire and become a mortal. The monks in your book rely too much on spiritual veins and caves. If you write like this, it will turn the world of cultivating immortals into a world of cultivating immortals. In the world of family and sects, how do casual cultivators survive? I can only write about family, and religion cannot be written about casual cultivators. If I insist on writing about casual cultivators, the strongest state of cultivation is Qi refining. If it is too high, it can only mean that casual cultivators have many resources. If you have resources, why be a casual cultivator! So you are trying to replace the casual cultivators who are unable to integrate the foundation building and above into the families and sects everywhere.
Why is it that cultivating immortals always follows the same old routine? . .
After only a dozen chapters, a girl with a dead father appeared, and I felt like I was suffering. Sure enough, the protagonist knows how to accept the old tricks, and sure enough, the girl has the unique talent. . . By the way, can we stop doing this old routine? . . Just write that girl to death. The most troublesome thing about cultivating immortals is women. What's more, the protagonist is also carrying a secret. It is necessary to be on guard against others. If you are not afraid of 10,000, just be afraid of what happens.
The writing is poor and the protagonist is selfish.
I won't say much more about the writing, it's barely bearable to say what everyone knows. The most disgusting thing is that the protagonist is selfish. First, the protagonist's uncle is a third-level formation mage, and he missed his path to avoid joining the sect for the sake of his family. As a result, as for the protagonist, his family finally trained him into a second-level alchemist, but because of a little obsession, he ignored his family and went to the Southern Wilderness. I know that my family is in a difficult situation right now, and there is a shortage of talents. As a result, I don't have to wait for someone to inherit the family's alchemy inheritance to start to resolve the obsession. The clan leader has said that if he goes to the Southern Wilderness, he will survive a narrow escape. The protagonist does not consider what will happen if he dies in the Southern Wilderness and there is no one in the family to make alchemy. Second, the protagonist killed Er Wu to avenge his father, not to mention burst into tears, not even a little bit of psychological fluctuation. What's the difference between this and Hu Peiyu, who took away his body and resolved his obsession for his own path? After looking at it for a long time, it turned out that it was not the relationship between father and son, but just for practice. Third, based on the above two points, the protagonist only cares about his own practice and does not consider his family. He has no feelings for his father who has raised him for more than ten years. Such a selfish person told me that he is the protagonist of a family story. It is really ridiculous and disgusting.
I haven't saved the manuscript, so I can only update it at night.
I haven't saved the manuscript, so I can only update it at night.
The setting is too toxic and the logic is contradictory
The author emphasizes the genius of the protagonist. According to the setting, the genius only cultivates and does not need to deal with chores, but the family arranges for the protagonist to go down the mountain, saying that the family is short of people. Although he is young, he still goes down early, and apologizes in various ways for delaying the genius' training. It is so disgusting. The family cannot function without one person at the sixth level of Qi training? ? ? The most poisonous thing is that without spiritual energy, your cultivation will regress, fall into decline, and become numb. Just like those big guys said, did you see those two mortals fighting? I was still a Mahayana monk a year ago, but now I have been fighting for a year, and my cultivation level has dropped to the mortal level.
Good Mother behind you
The elixir that matures once every 300 years and the prepared elixir are not enough for my own family, but they are given to others for free.
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Male protagonist ★★★ Couple√『Prosperity Period』 It's a cultivation novel. The male protagonist comes from a small family. Although his parents have died, he is not a loser. A few chapters into the book, I picked up a little girl named Tian Linggen, who was probably the heroine.




There are a lot of bugs, the details are often inconsistent, and there are a lot of chatter about the wheels. So why is it recommended? This book has an aura that is different from other books about cultivating immortals. It's not immortal energy. If you want to find something similar, it's Qi Kexiu's path as a master of cultivation. Evaluation: Liangcao-, if the author can refine it, it can reach Liangcao+. The story foundation is still very good.




Old wine in an old bottle, only routines can win people's hearts. Disadvantages: Moves, treasures, and techniques are all poorly named.













