Douluo: Fusion of Twin Martial Souls to Create a Supreme Sword Body

The author doesn't need to make God Shura a villain. He can write him as a person who wants to spread his identity. Tang San is just a person he values ​​​​very much. He is not necessarily the future God Shura. It also depends on his future. The protagonist can defeat him and finally win the throne of Shura. It is best to help Gu Yuena become the Dragon God. Humans do not need to hunt soul beasts and create a new cultivation method.

Huo Yuhao said that he wanted to be reborn in the past and resurrect Qiu'er, and he also wanted to resurrect his teacher Mr. Mu. If he didn't resurrect his relatives, friends, teachers and lovers, he would resurrect a friend from the Sun and Moon Continent. What was he trying to do? Doesn't the main character in the picture take a shower?

Why are you helping that Dai Mubai? You know he abandoned his fiancée, but you still help him?

The five stars are for Ji Juechen. The author looks like a newbie, but it's good to read the comment section. I really like the character Sword Chi, but there are very few books written about him

It's very good. The protagonist is decisive, smart, perseverant and refuses to give up. He is also affectionate and has a very charming personality. Generally speaking, the article is very stable and does not have many shortcomings. In fact, I think that for this type of protagonist, a charismatic villain can better highlight the protagonist's demeanor and charm. A character with real intelligence and perseverance, both on the same frequency, and able to bring out each other's strengths still needs to be perfected. (Purely personal opinion, with strong subjectivity, treated rationally). After all, the writing style of the exciting game between protagonists with brains is very practical. But as for the second book or the first one, it is already very good among all the same books. I just don't know why the rating is low. Let's treat it rationally.

It's obvious that Dou Yi traveled from Dou Er to Dou Yi, but Xiaoxiao still used Xiaoxiao's method of destroying the twin martial arts souls, and kept going back and forth. It was the first time he wrote a novel and the number of words was awesome.

This author really knows how to think nonsense. Dugu Bo doesn't know about fairy grass at all. When Ji Juechen mentioned the fairy grass, Dugu Bo immediately knew the function of fairy grass. It was also speechless. He commented wherever he saw it.

The idea is good and the structure is good, but I want to know why so many novels nowadays are not vivid at all? It's just like writing a journal, but you still charge for this? If you have a skill, please describe it. Is it the sky splitting open or a ten-mile radius turning into nothingness? What move should you use? Just shout it out. Just like when watching anime, it's like two people slashing at each other without making a sound. Is it interesting? There are also rumbles, clicks, and screams. Are these words not as comfortable to you as yourself? Vivid? Are you really lazy or just incompetent? Don't write novels if you are lazy, and don't write novels if you don't know how!

The front part is actually pretty good. The main character is much better than most Douluo fanfics. It's just a pity that after the introduction of the three major hidden forces, the changes in Douluo's situation were not well written. As a result, the whole body was affected by one move in the later period, and the progress of the situation could not be stopped at all. It is really a pity.

When I saw Dai Mubai helping Dai Mubai, I lost all interest at all.