Awakening from the Devouring Starry Sky

Not bad A man has worked outside the home for 20 years. Finally going home, The boss asked him: Do you want 20 years' salary or 3 pieces of advice? The man said I will go on the road tomorrow and give you the answer tomorrow morning, okay? The boss said yes. The man didn't sleep that night morning, He said to his boss: I want three pieces of advice. So the boss gave him 3 sentences. 1. Don't try to find impossible shortcuts. Nothing is cheap in the world. The best way is to be down-to-earth no matter what you do. 2. Don't be overly curious about things that you know are not a good thing. You may die because of it. 3. Don't make any decisions impulsively, otherwise this decision may become a lifelong regret for you. After speaking, the boss gave the man some money and three loaves of bread, and told him: The biggest loaf can only be eaten after he gets home. The man went on the road and walked for several days Half of the first piece of bread was eaten, and soon he came across an intersection. He asked: Which way is the closest to **? Passerby A: Take the small road, it's closer. Passerby B: Take the main road, it's safe. He was impatient to meet his wife, so he took a side road. Not long after walking, I heard a passerby say that there were bandits nearby. So he remembered the boss's first advice: Don't try to find shortcuts. So he turned back and took the main road. After walking for a few more days, part of the second loaf of bread was eaten, and he found a very cheap inn to stay. He heard a woman crying in the middle of the night and couldn't sleep. So I decided to go out and have a look. At this time he thought of the second piece of advice: Don't be overly curious about things that you know are not a good thing. So he fell asleep again. When we set off on the second day, the store owner was surprised and said: Are you still alive?! He was puzzled and asked why. The shop owner said that he had a crazy daughter who would lure people out with her cries when she was sick and then kill her. Of the guests who stayed last night, you were the only one alive. The man sighed: Ah After walking for a few more days, when the second piece of bread was finished, he was not far from home. He became even more excited. Not long after it got dark, he walked to his village. When he got home, he was about to knock on the door when he heard a man's voice inside. He was so angry that he picked up a woodcutter and prepared to rush into the house and kill the man. But then he thought of the third piece of advice: Don't make any decisions impulsively, as this decision may make you regret it for the rest of your life. So he calmed down and sat outside the house all night. He knocked on the door very early the next morning. His wife was very happy to see him back. But he was very indifferent: Who is that man? His wife smiled and said: That is our son. At this time, he discovered that this young man looked very similar to himself. Father and son met for the first time, hugged each other and cried After a moment of concern, the man took out the third piece of bread and prepared to share it with his wife and son. After cutting it open, I found that all 20 years of salary were inside, as well as a note. It says: You are so easy to deceive and you have actually finished reading it.

I don't know what to think? An orphan has to write a lot of bullshit relatives

After reading a little bit, I found that the setting is obviously that he is an orphan, and there are so many relatives and friends in the plot, but the writing is sloppy. Moreover, the hook is too small and does not fit in with the introduction. You are writing a fan novel. The original work is originally a genius flow. If you don't open the hook bigger, it will look boring. It has been ten years in advance and you can't beat a golden-horned monster in seconds. It is too good.

Many of the settings in this book are not found in the original work, and were added randomly by the author himself. Not only does it take away from the settings, but the plot is too far from reality, too idealistic, and too fake. Like the devoured cheap dad who was set up to be ruthless and indifferent to his children in the first part, but later set up to avenge his children and love his father like a mountain, this character is capricious and has no sense of reality.

Because the charging situation and unsatisfactory reviews and collections will dissuade many people, most people will like free novels, and will only pay to read them unless they are very good.

The protagonist is neither evil nor righteous. He is neither kingly nor heroic. He is both loyal and selfish.

There are too many half-siblings.

I think it's okay but a bit verbose. If it's more than 100, it's still the Devouring the Earth chapter. I'm afraid that if I can't see the wild snow eagle, I will rush to the street.

The author is really a genius, just like the protagonist ...

The second soul cannot practice physical training with gods and demons