Douluo: Coming Out of the Extreme North, I Am a Bit Invincible

1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9 characters, that's enough for ten characters! ! ! !

This is Shen Liuyu. Are you sure this is it?

Bingbing, Snow Girl, don't leave it to Huo Yuhao to make others seem to owe him something. A big explosion in Mingdu killed millions of people and made them sick and vomited like the Yakuza.

Many book friends asked me why this book is not free for members on QRead. I don't know about this. The editor never told me about the charging issue here. In other words, I am not familiar with these at all because I am the first publisher. I didn't notice it until QRead came out after a long time. . . For giving me one star for this question, I'm really speechless. To be honest, the bonus coins you get when you sign up for membership are enough every month After I put it on the shelves, apart from daily updating the background and looking at the data, I discussed the plot with everyone in the group. I rarely read the comments. Perhaps it can be said that except for some specific comments that I asked for opinions, I basically never read the others. . . Of course, this doesn't mean that I write single-player games. There are quite a few brothers in the group who urge me to update and criticize me every day Many times I am ready to take a rest for the day, but then I am persuaded to come back and continue updating. . . I really thank them for this! [Emot=default,56/] Thank you all for your likes. I would like to say here that I will not stop updating and eunuch. Even if I occasionally ask for leave, I will definitely inform the time in advance. I seem to have seen some book friends asking me what genre I plan to write next. . I guess I'm still a fan of Douluo. After writing two more books to improve my writing style, I may move into original works... Of course, I haven't read any of the original books. . While writing, I am cramming in common sense and so on. . .

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First of all, after reading the first chapter of this book, I found that the author's writing style was not good. I also read the author's explanations in the previous chapters. It was a first book for a newcomer, so I read it with a tolerant heart as it seemed to have some flavor. Most of all the problems revolve around the problem of writing, which is really fatal. Let me talk about the few fights at the beginning. There is not much description of the gap between the enemy and ourselves. Many things about level comparison are because they cannot be written. Directly writing about the effects makes people feel empty. Moreover, in terms of skills, the soul skills of the gun are just like the magic bullets and firecrackers played during the New Year. The tip of the gun releases energy to attack. It can't cut this or that. The readers who read it are very confused. They can't infer anything from what he wrote, so they can only say what he wrote. The second ring of the year before the start and the fourth ring of ten thousand years. I want to say that it is possible to eat whale glue in the second ring. How can you deal with the spiritual power of the soul king in the fourth ring? Although Tang San is a control type, there is no quasi-soul sect who can kill the ten thousand year underground magic bead alone. If he comes up to hunt down ten thousand years alone, he can escape from the fifty thousand year spirit beast. It is a top-level soul beast. If the author has restraint in certain aspects of his ability, at least he can say nothing about it. The result is that there is no word. Let readers think about this controversial thing. This martial soul is a top-level weapon. The martial soul's appearance attribute is not even the ultimate ice. Then this martial soul comes with armor sundering? Heavy? The results were achieved without writing anything. The 11-year-old Soul Sect, the 13-year-old Soul King, the 14-year-old Soul Emperor, the 15-year-old Soul Douluo, and the second martial soul Ice and Fire Dragon King were achieved. Did you find that the writing was traceless and messed up everything you wrote. You couldn't write anything except cheating. You still have to write a soul bone skill similar to the evil soul master. How lacking in soul power level is it? Then there was the chaos between tasks. When she was 5 years old, she wanted to turn Shui Bing'er into a child bride. After letting her know that it was wrong, she then took advantage of the loopholes and kept doing it. There are too many such things in this book. She doesn't want to trust others, and she doesn't know how to trust people (shouldn't say this, because the author didn't write it out). In the end, she still gave away all the soul bones and vanilla. Dugu Bo was also very strange. He went to find Dugu Bo and deliberately made the conversation between the two people mysterious and mysterious, and then there was no logic. They have already taken a lot of opportunities. Million-year-old soul beasts have been sacrificed to Tianmeng Ice Silkworms, two sets of god-level soul bones, god-level martial arts, super high combat power, and they have already taken the original chance fairy grass. There is no motive to covet those three melons and two dates. They also want the piece of Ah Yin's 100,000-year-old soul bone. With such a character, he is worthy of being at the bottom of society. He has to compete for the top. Proving the truth is not something that this kind of person can do. I suggest the author to be more logical in his writing. From a performance point of view, it is good to get a contract for the first book, but from a work point of view, there is still a long way to go and there are many problems. Otherwise, the author's writing level will not be greatly improved, which is the peak after his debut.

My baby is about to be born, so don't even think about it.

It hurts my whole heart, it's so overwhelming. As far as the protagonist's configuration is concerned, even if you hit him with a single move, he will be able to withstand beatings. You really don't know how powerful it is to have extreme attributes and a few ferocious beast soul rings.

Someone posted that the main character's sister is P, this one is

Is this protagonist a waste, or what should I say? The quasi-soul sect dares to fight top-level soul beasts. The top-level soul beasts of ten thousand years are already equivalent to Soul Saint Soul Douluo. Why are you so awesome? You are so awesome, but you can't beat Sword Douluo at level 94. You are such a waste. What do you think? Absorbing a 10,000-year-old soul bone is the same as having a 100,000-year-old soul bone in your body since you have already absorbed Dou Er's soul beast. Why would you want to absorb a 10,000-year-old soul bone? Even if he is a top-level soul beast, is his hundred thousand-year-old soul bone no better than his?