Descend to the Heavens

All styles are available, If it's too cliche, don't use it. Something a little more innovative.

I have to say that the protagonist you wrote is just a collection of weaklings and children, who just got an adventure. A truly strong person will not care about other people's opinions and will not be affected by other people's comments. Why do I feel uncomfortable when I see the protagonist crying because of the comments of others in the class? The protagonist is an adult's soul who has traveled through time, so unbearable? Are you moved by a comment from the head teacher? Haha, such a mentality is not worthy of being a strong man. If it weren't for the protagonist's halo, he would be like that. Moreover, the protagonist has adventures in the world, and in the past, every time he actually had adventures, wouldn't he tell others that he has a big secret? The main character is really as uninteresting as a child, really uninteresting.

I came here to visit out of boredom.

I read Chapter 49, and it's full of poisonous points. The most important thing is that a pig's foot has lived for two lives and he doesn't know that the world is hot and cold. If you force others to praise you, you will suffer if you are weak. They have been the most useless for 18 years. How can a pig's foot live two lives as a dog? You blame others for taking advantage of you. If I were a pig's trotters, I would clearly mark the price. In exchange for the reward points, I would block the knife for you. It's not really dead anyway. After two or three worlds, I will redeem some martial arts. If you don't have a golden finger, you won't be weak like a dog. There are many ways to become stronger. At least you don't have to talk about why the golden finger hasn't come yet. You've been waiting for 18 years for 18 years. It hasn't come for 100 years. You still have to wait for 100 years, right?

Trash novel, another novel about a woman who can't walk

Why does the protagonist, as soon as he cultivates his body, have to let others punch him and chop him a few times before starting to beat others every time he fights? If the other person has a magical weapon or some special skill, wouldn't he be defeated? I hope the author will not waste on the word count and make the protagonist strike first, which is more comfortable to watch. He has to be beaten first before hitting anyone every time.

The protagonist of this book has an IQ lower than that of a sixth-grade child

Showing off as a reborn person has a bad attitude. In a country where there are so many strong people, they are looking for death.

The length of each world is too long, and the so-called ten thousand years later is just a gimmick! The first world can be tolerated, after all, the first time is always the time to accumulate capital! But the second world is still long and smelly. I wanted to follow the example of the first world and jump through ten or twenty chapters, but it ended up being released... In fact, the writing is not that bad, but it is too long! A lot of unnecessary content... In the first world, I upgraded the protagonist from one star to two stars! I don't feel sick at all. Finally: I personally feel that the focus of this book is completely wrong. Ten thousand years from now should be ten thousand years from now! Instead of just killing in the dungeon, level up! Kill again, upgrade again... The so-called universal time travel, the 100-gigabyte human planet mentioned earlier is not about letting the protagonist pretend to compete in front of a few people at a time! But a struggle, a struggle for all! You have your advantages and others also have their shortcomings... No matter how big the page is, you don't have a corresponding plot! It gives people a greater sense of gap, and violent upgrades can! But since we have chosen a time point and a grand world, we should reduce the proportion of time travel... It sounds ugly: selling sheep over dogs, isn't it? There is a personal reason for writing so much! Accept comments, do not accept abuse, online articles, have a good time together and have a good time together... Come on!

I've only read a dozen chapters, and there are a lot of bugs, just to name a few obvious ones. 1: At the beginning, it was said that the activity was organized by the teacher, so how did you get in touch with me? 2: Advent is random, how do you determine the identity? 3: I just saw that I bought ten secret books with 3,000 taels and a sword with 1,000 taels. According to the current calculation, one tael is equal to 50 grams, which is 200,000 grams or 200 kilograms. How did you bring it back, clothes? [Emot=default,04/]