
I Landed in the World of Immortality
by Become Enlightened Overnight
About This Novel
Su Ze, a senior student at the Cultivation Academy, is practicing hard to prepare to be admitted to a higher Cultivation Institute. Originally, his biggest dream in life was to succeed in building a foundation. It wasn't until he discovered that he could land in the ancient wilderness that his dream changed...
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This prehistoric one looks a bit nondescript. Should it be called the low prehistoric one? Should it be my innate aura? Why is it all spiritual energy? The innate spiritual energy slowly disappears, shouldn't it be after a few catastrophes?
Low profile
The low-profile Honghuang is too low-profile. The ferocious beast is comparable to Nascent Soul? Also classical cultivation...
There are also many novels about this little eunuch
I cultivated a lonely place in the ancient times, and the spiritual energy all over the street. Even the protagonist's place with no shit is several times more than the current world. After staying for so long, he is still at the eighth level of Qi training. Is this world full of geniuses? Why can everyone practice spiritual energy?
At first I thought this novel was good, I might as well read it, but as I went on it became less interesting and I was speechless.
Realm correspondence is a failure. Using the name of the realm of cultivation to correspond to the prehistoric realm is not like comparing an ant to an elephant. The sense of fragmentation is too strong. I would rather use a messy name to represent the realm of your main world than use the name of the realm of cultivation.
The protagonist exchanged magic skills with Lin Suxin. After chatting for a few days, the two fell in love... From the beginning, they expressed that they only thought about cultivation and would not fall in love. As a result... There is another flaw. The protagonist's spiritual power in the prehistoric era is dozens of times that of the real world, and the time ratio is 10 times. Plus there are various spiritual fruits that can enhance a realm. It is equivalent to thousands of times the speed of people in the real world, so here comes the problem. In more than half a year, Lin Suxin has reached perfection from the 7th to the 10th level of Qi training, and the protagonist has also reached perfection from the 6th level to the 10th level of Qi training. 90% Of the protagonist's cultivation is improved by spiritual fruits, while Lin Suxin only cultivates all by herself. Equivalently, Lin Suxin's cultivation speed is about 100,000 times that of the protagonist. The protagonist's spiritual root qualifications are equivalent to double spiritual roots, right? Lin Suxin only has heavenly spiritual roots. How can the gap be so big? Even if the Heavenly Spiritual Root is compared to the 5th Spiritual Root, the gap is only a hundred times. Real
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The Son of the Transformation God is too abstract, I won't read it later, and the utilization rate of Honghuang is too low. My evaluation is that the NT protagonist has no operation at all, so I can't copy the comments. Chapter 150 is only the second level of foundation building. I know I want to write it. There are tenth-level and eleventh-level quasi-sages and saints in the next nine-level Da Luo. After all, there are still five or six hundred chapters. I am not looking down on you, do you have the writing power? Don't end up with it.
There is also a true dragon bloodline. You actually told me that the third level true dragon bloodline can only reach the golden elixir. This damn true dragon bloodline is not even comparable to the dragon. You should say that you have dragon bloodline but the proportion is not high. In other novels, the true dragon has no problem with its authority. You can't even give a golden elixir here. What kind of ghost bloodline is there? And where did you see the bloodline obstruction is so serious? After all, the true spirit bloodline can only be hindered after at least becoming an immortal, right?
🐷Jiao Chun zz
Tianhu starts the game and must invest all his resources to win Golden Finger. There is no blood feud, and we are not poor for three generations. Play one☝️
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Official(35)Scraped 20d ago
This prehistoric one looks a bit nondescript. Should it be called the low prehistoric one? Should it be my innate aura? Why is it all spiritual energy? The innate spiritual energy slowly disappears, shouldn't it be after a few catastrophes?
Low profile
The low-profile Honghuang is too low-profile. The ferocious beast is comparable to Nascent Soul? Also classical cultivation...
There are also many novels about this little eunuch
I cultivated a lonely place in the ancient times, and the spiritual energy all over the street. Even the protagonist's place with no shit is several times more than the current world. After staying for so long, he is still at the eighth level of Qi training. Is this world full of geniuses? Why can everyone practice spiritual energy?
At first I thought this novel was good, I might as well read it, but as I went on it became less interesting and I was speechless.
Realm correspondence is a failure. Using the name of the realm of cultivation to correspond to the prehistoric realm is not like comparing an ant to an elephant. The sense of fragmentation is too strong. I would rather use a messy name to represent the realm of your main world than use the name of the realm of cultivation.
The protagonist exchanged magic skills with Lin Suxin. After chatting for a few days, the two fell in love... From the beginning, they expressed that they only thought about cultivation and would not fall in love. As a result... There is another flaw. The protagonist's spiritual power in the prehistoric era is dozens of times that of the real world, and the time ratio is 10 times. Plus there are various spiritual fruits that can enhance a realm. It is equivalent to thousands of times the speed of people in the real world, so here comes the problem. In more than half a year, Lin Suxin has reached perfection from the 7th to the 10th level of Qi training, and the protagonist has also reached perfection from the 6th level to the 10th level of Qi training. 90% Of the protagonist's cultivation is improved by spiritual fruits, while Lin Suxin only cultivates all by herself. Equivalently, Lin Suxin's cultivation speed is about 100,000 times that of the protagonist. The protagonist's spiritual root qualifications are equivalent to double spiritual roots, right? Lin Suxin only has heavenly spiritual roots. How can the gap be so big? Even if the Heavenly Spiritual Root is compared to the 5th Spiritual Root, the gap is only a hundred times. Real
abstract
The Son of the Transformation God is too abstract, I won't read it later, and the utilization rate of Honghuang is too low. My evaluation is that the NT protagonist has no operation at all, so I can't copy the comments. Chapter 150 is only the second level of foundation building. I know I want to write it. There are tenth-level and eleventh-level quasi-sages and saints in the next nine-level Da Luo. After all, there are still five or six hundred chapters. I am not looking down on you, do you have the writing power? Don't end up with it.
There is also a true dragon bloodline. You actually told me that the third level true dragon bloodline can only reach the golden elixir. This damn true dragon bloodline is not even comparable to the dragon. You should say that you have dragon bloodline but the proportion is not high. In other novels, the true dragon has no problem with its authority. You can't even give a golden elixir here. What kind of ghost bloodline is there? And where did you see the bloodline obstruction is so serious? After all, the true spirit bloodline can only be hindered after at least becoming an immortal, right?
🐷Jiao Chun zz
Tianhu starts the game and must invest all his resources to win Golden Finger. There is no blood feud, and we are not poor for three generations. Play one☝️













