Han's Immortal Road

Will you change the bad points raised by others? When I read the comments, you were shamelessly making up things. You can use things that are not your own strength in the competition, but others cannot use them. You are the younger brother compared to the Qingyun Sect, and you are not as good as the younger brother. As a result, the Qingyun Sect doesn't even have a second-level talisman. Your parents are so powerful. They give you one, and directly let you throw the talisman, and throw it to the second place alive. People form pills and don't give second-level talismans to their disciples. It's hard for you to even build a foundation, and you get a lot of second-level talismans. Your elders are really awesome. Actually, most of the sects lost in comparison with the increased items outside. You guys are really awesome.

I wrote it during the Qi training period, Chapter 79, normal. I wrote 320 chapters during the foundation building period. Is this normal? Completed the early stage of Yuanying, the protagonist of the book

The family's perfect cultivation novel is worth collecting.

It's hard for a new book to get ahead. It's hard to get through it, but it's hard to get through it. Come on

This book is a flow of ordinary people cultivating immortals. The protagonist relies on the spiritual water of the Taiyi Pot to refine elixirs, and when fighting, he relies on releasing monsters. The protagonist does not practice skills, but takes drugs for daily practice. The protagonist not only has mediocre qualifications, but also has an average IQ. He does not know how to exchange sides, and the whole clan relies on the use of magic detectors. There is no plot logic setting at all, that is, everyone develops and everyone practices carefully. The most unreasonable thing in the book is the source and use of spiritual stones. You will be given 10,000 today, 20,000 tomorrow, 30,000 the day after tomorrow, and an income of 4,000 the day after tomorrow. If you read it carefully, you will find that where does the protagonist get so much money to buy spiritual medicine? He only makes 500 pills per bottle, and sells 200 bottles for 10,000. After deducting the price of the elixir, he only earns 10,000 for at least 400 bottles. 400 Bottles of medicine are equal to 4,000 pills. He only made 100 pills after practicing Wuling Pills for three months. That is to say, it takes at least several years of practice to make 10,000 spirit stones. However, the protagonist uses money and water privately.

One of you is too fast and the other is too slow. I instantly felt that what I said was the most reasonable, and it must be reasonable, not too slow, not too fast, a very normal speed setting. [Emot=default,21/]

The most poisonous thing is that the protagonist, with so many cheats, cannot compare with others in the clan no matter how he practices, and will be overtaken. Most of the treasures I see when searching for treasures are useful to the people in the tribe, while other people's treasure hunting is for their own use. Just ask what is the use of this protagonist? It's not that a multi-protagonist novel doesn't need to be written from several perspectives. I came here to see the protagonist Han Changming, not to see Han Debiao, Han Benfu, Han Zhangxiang, Han Benshuo and a bunch of other people. Why does the author like to switch to their perspectives so much. It is so difficult to obtain the Golden Core Nascent Soul, but in the end, as long as the protagonist knows him, he can travel everywhere. It is so far away that no one in the clan will die. Family Mortal Literature allows you to write invincible literature. Also, every time the protagonist goes out, he will definitely encounter someone who is being hunted. There is an 80% chance that there will be a girl, and 100% of them will be everyone. When the protagonist goes out, he will definitely meet a girl. She has a strong background and is taken care of by others. If you want to write about a harem, you can write about it. It's not too disgusting to do this. I brought so many auxiliary people to practice, but it turned out that the all-powerful person in the clan who formed the elixir later than the protagonist outdid the protagonist. I don't understand why the protagonist spends so much money and goes around changing things every day to contribute to the clan. Can he die if he practices more? There is also Zhongtian Continent. The protagonist is written as if he wants to be stupid. It is so bad if someone else is used to write it.

What English letters are used to represent Chinese novels? If you are not Chinese, write English novels, and discard them decisively when you see the letters. This kind of operation is nondescript and awkward.

I really can't stand it. The letters in the novel about cultivating immortals can be separated by asterisks, but they have to be separated by asterisks, right? If it really doesn't work, why not change it to a name with the same sound? You have to work on letters. Are you the heir to the British Empire?

Personally, I prefer family stories about cultivating immortals. This book has a reasonable logical outline and no major poisonous points. The details are well described and the plot is well-reasoned. There are no skipped chapters in the book. There are only a few flaws in the first hundred chapters. If you like to read about farming and management, it is worth reading for book lovers who like to read about farming and managing. (Can the author update twice a day? It's really difficult to update once a day. If you are busy with real life and career, I'll apologize if I say more).