Trick World Investigator

When you see a woman, you have to have sex between men and women, and there is nothing in the harem. But except for the tacit understanding between the masterminds, which is a bit coincidental, the rest is confusing. Originally, Yu and Tao looked very distinctive, but they had to be forced to be good to the male protagonist within a few days. It was very fake and too deliberate. . Travelers don't travel. Travel, take a leisurely stroll. It is virtue to be unfazed by honor and disgrace, to be free and easy. But going up the pole to scold me doesn't feel like swimming at all, it's too deliberate. The arrangement of the plot is also too deliberate. Why does the girl who plots the plot have to meet the male protagonist? Yu Fei had to miss the chance to become the Purple Dragon Guard and go to cure the epidemic. No matter how many letters the male protagonist wrote, he had to go in the end. Then there would definitely be a conflict. He also had to use his brain to confront his friend, who would then let him go. It cannot be said that there is anything wrong with the plot being arranged one by one, after all, novels are like this. However, there is no trace of a tourist at all. Zhuangzi traveled freely, riding the wind and feeling contented. But the protagonist is not carefree, uncomfortable, and has no sense of complacency. Rather than speaking of Zhuangzi's style, the protagonist's behavior has a passionate flavor of martial arts and fantasy. The idea of ​​​​the book is very good, but it is a pity that you, the author, did not write it out.

From being a trickster at the beginning, he almost became a martial artist later on.

The plot is cliche, it's outrageous for a woman to like the protagonist

To be honest, the plot of this book is indeed good, and the entire world view setting is very novel, but this is also one of the biggest failures of this book. The plot progresses too fast, and readers need to be quick to accept these new titles and monastic systems. Many parts of this article are not written in a popular way (to put it bluntly, readers are used to novices, and their general literacy level is not high enough), which leads to the article not being popular. The second point is because the plot progresses too fast. No matter what kind of article, it needs a refreshing point. To be honest, I didn't find any refreshing point in this article after reading it. The monster-fighting and upgrading article is not exciting at all. There is no puzzle to solve. The emotional scene is so abrupt and hazy. The author is busy writing, and the readers are not happy to read it. The protagonist is always being abused, which makes it frustrating. There will definitely not be many readers.

I kept reading and reading, and the whole article was too tight. It looks tired and not interesting.

Realm profession seems to be too strenuous. I wish I could write it more simply.