Mysterious Recovery: Starting from the Mysterious Post Office

Samsung, Mr. Qin actually directly pointed out that the protagonist is not from this world, I can only say 666.

Write well, be less emotional, and don't be too intellectual.

I feel like the protagonist's stuff is quite biased toward Nezha. It's a pity that there is no baby Li

Very good. The more I read, the better it gets. The fanfic is pretty well written, but the updates are too slow. Come on.

As an author, how come the protagonist relies entirely on luck to control the evil ghosts? He faints when he encounters the ghosts, and when he wakes up, luck helps him get everything done. Couldn't it be done by someone else?

The protagonist's experience does not have the urgency of the ghost's resurrection, and he can properly participate in the main plot, otherwise the "Prophet" plot would not be useless.

Hey, it's a mechanical application, it's not silky smooth, I just deliver the letter, and it took me a long time to become an employee first. I haven't read the original work, but it's nothing. After reading the original work, I felt very tired when I read this.

You are a mature author. You should have your own ideas. Don't write everything based on Yang Jian's experience. Yang Jian became a master ghost hunter for money. You also learned to build a safe house. Yang Jian built a safe house for his family and friends. Why did you build a safe house? Do you have any family or friends who traveled through time? Even if it belongs to the original owner, you don't care, so why bother! Moreover, Yang Jian didn't have the idea of ​​building a safe house in the early stage. He has been working hard to revive the ghost. How do you feel like you have lost the watermelon and picked up the sesame seeds?

It was well written before, but the protagonist has no emotions. I felt something was wrong with the driver. Shouldn't he listen to what he says if he has no feelings, and then the protagonist won't say anything back? Why are you two still chatting? I don't know if it's because of the word count or what. There are also ghost hands and ghost flowers. How they are connected, I really don't know. Is it foreshadowing? I collected a ghost flower for no reason. You said ghost nails are colorful, and I can accept that. This ghost flower

If the author sets the protagonist to have no fear, it will be a failure. He is in a cold sweat, collapses to the ground, and is constantly talking about dying. These are all characteristics of fear. It is better to delete the settings of no fear. Later, you can write more freely. When writing novels, never give the protagonist weird settings that will trap the author. If you want to write some thrilling content, you will easily encounter these settings. So I still suggest that the author delete the setting of the protagonist who has no fear and sadness, so that readers can see the thrilling writing. The author himself writes better