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Report the last two people in your QQ, those who are the same are lovers.

If God could give you a chance to start over, would you choose a handsome face, a hundred points in every exam, or endless money to spend? Please choose.

Although I haven't finished reading it, I can't help but say a few words. The first point is the issue of strength. In Fairy Tail, the protagonist's strength is unclear. Although he is a wind dragon slayer, he uses a sword and doesn't use much dragon slayer magic. He only practiced swordsmanship for 3 years and can be compared with the SS magician. Although this inevitably has the power of the protagonist's aura, it is too ridiculous. The author also recognized this problem, so he tempered his will in the second world. The second point is the emotional issue. To be honest, I have read many harem novels, and this one can be described as an emotional novel. Take Naixiang, who can be said to be a supporting actress. She got her in a month, which is very strong. I originally thought she was one of the heroines, and I also like Naoxiang's character. There was an agreement when I left. Why did you just save me when I came back after 3 years? Caixiang seems to have been deliberately arranged. Just because her father said it was not safe to be with you, she immediately dumped her, and she had the nerve to say that she was lovelorn. She even hugged the lady she got from the bar and walked through the door in front of her. Have you ever thought about how Naixiang has spent these three years? When the protagonist left, Naixiang thought to herself, 'Maybe I will never love again. ' It can be seen that she likes the protagonist very much. After reading this paragraph in Chapter 60, "Lu Yu directly interrupted Laixiang. "Of course those are just words to coax an ignorant girl! Do you think this is true? "Lu Yu seemed to have thought of something terrible. He looked at Laixiang in surprise. But maybe even Lu Yu didn't realize it. The moment he said these words, he trembled for a moment." It felt very poisonous. Is this how you treat your first love? ? ? Forget about dumping him and finding another one, well, I don't expect the protagonist's emotional intelligence anymore. Emotional intelligence is a trap. The third point is the structural problem of the article. There are many inconsistencies in it, which makes me feel awkward while reading. There are also too many "buts", which makes people can't help but skip chapters. I always feel that something is missing. In a word, I hope the author can correct what he saw. Give me some benefits. (To prevent being sprayed) [Funny]

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Alas, in fact, the reason why I dumped Kanlai was to pursue my senior sister in an open and aboveboard manner. She said it was for the sake of Kanlai's safety, but she acted like she was only thinking about Kanlai. I just want to say that it's really disgusting.

Don't ask why, it's just so willful! ! !

No matter how the writing style is, the paragraphs between the author's words are too long. It's not sometimes three to four hundred words in one paragraph, but it's like this in every chapter. You will be scorned for doing this. For readers who are confused about the word count, consider dividing sentences into more paragraphs. I believe that no one will read it now that they are already in "high school", and it is still a one-paragraph-finished composition written in the third grade of elementary school. I hope you will consider it!

Why do you want to hurt Xiang Lai? It's so bloody. Even if you want to protect her, you should tell her directly instead of hurting her with bloody deception.

Why are there no less than ten buts in one chapter but but buts? I'm going to collapse.

I saw Fairy Tail, so I decided to take a look