Dou Po: Tiandao Merchant

To be honest, it's not common to see such poorly written novels. I almost vomited after reading the first few pictures. First of all, there were a lot of typos. Secondly, there was a big problem with the setting. You can add content to the fanfic, but you must not change the original setting. This is the most basic thing. Yaolao eighth grade alchemist? Can't you review the original work before writing the novel? The writing style can be said to be at the level of a primary school student's composition. In the end, what made me abandon the book was that the protagonist was a piece of trash. What good things could he give to Xiao Yan? Then I don't understand who the protagonist of this book is.

Author, can you write Xiao Yan to death?

Can you please give me a recommendation vote? Each of your votes can give the author a little motivation...

I'm just curious, why don't you kill Xiao Yan? Xiao Yan is a time traveler, and the protagonist is also a time traveler. It is said that anyone who goes against Xiao Yan will be targeted by the consciousness of the world and even be killed. But don't forget that Xiao Yan is not an aborigine of Dou Qi Continent, but a time traveler. If world consciousness can kill the people you write about, then the people you write about can also kill Xiao Yan. Even world consciousness can kill Xiao Yan, so it doesn't matter if you kill Xiao Yan. If Xiao Yan is the protagonist, don't forget who you are writing about!

I clicked randomly on the levels, and there were actually 9-star Dou Ling in a small town called Jiangjia. Moreover, the protagonist was injured by the fifth elder of the Jiali family's great fighting master in Wutan City. There are so many great fighting masters in the Jiali family? ? ? In the original book, the Xiao family only has four great fighting masters.

Saying goodbye is not pretty at all. If you have points, it is better to improve your cultivation. The protagonist is a businessman. Do businessmen understand? There's no benefit to you just giving people things. I'm really convinced.

I usually don't talk about the author because it's not easy, but what you wrote is too holy. Spending so many points on a woman is not as good as improving your own strength. What you wrote is already holy to the extreme.

Author, if you put it nicely, you call it the Holy Mother, but if you put it badly, you would call it a licking dog!

There are a lot of typos in every page. New books don't make me happy😕😕

Would it be better for a woman with legs like that not to be like that? It was light snow at first. I have never seen such a holy lady. As for doing that to women? Leng Lai's writing is not very good. The result is still so holy. Besides, the Holy Mother is not like you. You write better than me. But can you give that person away? What I said before is unreasonable.