Immortal Cultivator Lord Wuhai Immortal King
by Tan Ming
About This Novel
Chen Shou was reborn as the son-in-law whom he thought he was destined to be. But she didn't want to become the replacement for the female cultivator's family, the Ye family, to lead the mission. Sea of Mist Fairy City, a new territory opened up by the human race on the Sea of Mist. Filled with corrosive netherworld mist, humans, monsters, and monster birds can only survive with the help of mutated moon spirit plants in the world of immortality in the sea of fog. Area setting: The initial state of the Moon Palace Small World is roughly equivalent to digging up South Australia and turning it into a paradise. The Sea of Fog Cultivation World covers half the total area of Blue Star. The territory of the human race and demon race in the true spirit world has a total area of 108 blue stars. The total area of the entire true spirit world is ten thousand times larger than the territory of the human race and the demon race!
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Official(10)Scraped 17d ago
Anyway, every time there is a golden finger about the world of elixirs for inducing birth, the elixirs are worthless. The elixirs for qi training last for decades or hundreds of years, and the golden elixirs start to last for more than a thousand years. There are no means of inducing birth. Those techniques of accumulating spirits, pulling out seedlings to encourage growth, spring breeze and rain techniques, etc. Are all gone. The elixirs are just like wild ones. Anyway, after one year, this kind of immortality world only deserves to be extinct.
There are too many accidents. Why does the protagonist always encounter all kinds of accidents? If the author doesn't target the protagonist, he will die.
A troubled person is always wandering. Is he smart or stupid?
The plot is very good, but the content is very poor. If you write like this, the author will definitely be disappointed. If you write well, why not send it to me and I will give you some advice12
I stopped reading. It's not that the content is not set well, but that it's hard to read. I feel like the context doesn't make sense. The writing is not smooth in one sentence. The setting is good.
It's just a matter of chasing after people to feed them. A pig can become an immortal by feeding it like this. Why don't you just become an immortal directly?
As I write, I become more and more like a mortal.
The power system has completely collapsed
The golden finger is opened too big, and the void can transfer materials, inject energy, etc. Without any sound. Let's put it this way. As long as the protagonist wants to do anything, this golden finger can basically achieve it. Then the power system completely collapses. During the Qi refining period, you can use the golden finger to control the treasures, formations, etc. Refined by the Nascent Soul from a distance. It's so unbelievable.
Updates are so slow. You'll be on the street in less than half a year
I don't know if I'm a new author, but I can only give you some encouragement.
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Official(10)Scraped 17d ago
Anyway, every time there is a golden finger about the world of elixirs for inducing birth, the elixirs are worthless. The elixirs for qi training last for decades or hundreds of years, and the golden elixirs start to last for more than a thousand years. There are no means of inducing birth. Those techniques of accumulating spirits, pulling out seedlings to encourage growth, spring breeze and rain techniques, etc. Are all gone. The elixirs are just like wild ones. Anyway, after one year, this kind of immortality world only deserves to be extinct.
There are too many accidents. Why does the protagonist always encounter all kinds of accidents? If the author doesn't target the protagonist, he will die.
A troubled person is always wandering. Is he smart or stupid?
The plot is very good, but the content is very poor. If you write like this, the author will definitely be disappointed. If you write well, why not send it to me and I will give you some advice12
I stopped reading. It's not that the content is not set well, but that it's hard to read. I feel like the context doesn't make sense. The writing is not smooth in one sentence. The setting is good.
It's just a matter of chasing after people to feed them. A pig can become an immortal by feeding it like this. Why don't you just become an immortal directly?
As I write, I become more and more like a mortal.
The power system has completely collapsed
The golden finger is opened too big, and the void can transfer materials, inject energy, etc. Without any sound. Let's put it this way. As long as the protagonist wants to do anything, this golden finger can basically achieve it. Then the power system completely collapses. During the Qi refining period, you can use the golden finger to control the treasures, formations, etc. Refined by the Nascent Soul from a distance. It's so unbelievable.
Updates are so slow. You'll be on the street in less than half a year
I don't know if I'm a new author, but I can only give you some encouragement.
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