
Taiyi
by The Mountains And Rivers Outside The Fog
About This Novel
They laid jade on the immortal thrones and burned incense in Taiyi Palace. ... The two universes collided and swallowed each other. At the critical moment of victory or defeat, Ye Jiangchuan came here. After traveling here, he can often come to an ever-changing tavern. This tavern seems to have endless forms, sometimes it is an ancient oriental wine shop, sometimes it is a modern urban bar, sometimes it is a future mechanical tavern... Knights, dwarves, evil ghosts, mechanical life... Ye Jiangchuan has seen many passers-by of different life forms here, until that day, he met an old man holding a green cow! Miracle Cards, Chaos Tao Chess. Secret treasures, bloodlines, supernatural powers, adventures... When these were placed in front of him at his fingertips, Ye Jiangchuan understood that everything was different!
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Official(283)Scraped 22d ago
just passing by
Friends who are reading, listen to me. If you are a grumpy man, please don't come in! Since every book is on the list, it means that some people like to read it. If you don't like to read this style, please don't hurt it. Different types of books, the same type but different main lines, different stories, different writing styles, have advantages and disadvantages, and no one is the best. Even among the great writers, there will be one or two who don't like to read their books. So don't use these reasons to hurt the author. Some people like to see it, some don't, and if you don't like it, you can delete it. It's not like I'm going to say this, right? We are all people who have gone to school. Don't act like a shrew every day, just press a button on the Internet. I haven't made a few long comments, and my expressions are a bit messy, so I'll give it a try.
come on! Would love to see a more complete book. !
I have been following Wu Da's books for a long time and I like this style very much. Although this book is indeed a little inferior to previous ones, I still have to say, come on! A book about foggy weather requires a very long preparation. Progress is also slower. But it is also the one closest to life and the most reflective of reality. And it also shows the world structure of a world. Some book friends are talking about emotional lines. The survival rule of Gaowu Dimension is to respect the strong. In this world environment, most people respect and like to rely on the strong. So, I don't think there is any problem. Dialogue aspect. . . Still the same. . . Brief and occasionally awkward (ignore it). Leave a lot of room for your own imagination. Many book friends say this book is poisonous. Well, there are many poisonous places, but there are many things in real life that are even more poisonous than this. Sometimes, reality is so helpless. Different people have different experiences and feelings. The most important thing is to pay attention to details in foggy books. Although sometimes even Wu Da himself forgets about this pitfall, in most cases, it plays a more critical role in the later stage. I hope the fog will clear up! Don't let this book be a mess! ! ! It's really sad that it didn't end well! ! ! [Emot=default,10/]
The protagonist is poisonous, Goldfinger is poisonous, the protagonist is poisonous by pretending to be a fool, the protagonist is poisonous by not pretending to be a fool, the protagonist's skills are also poisonous, none of the characters are not poisonous, the plot is not very good, and there is nothing left.
Poison book
The author also wants to promote kindness to parents, friendship to brothers and sisters, etc., But also adds a poisonous point every few chapters. The writing is incomprehensible. Sometimes it is inconsistent, and sometimes it is poisonous and gives people a headache. Release a wave of poison every few chapters
There are always some things that we can't guess. You don't have to believe in its existence, but you absolutely cannot deny other people's belief in him. We can only say that everyone has their own ideas, don't you want to go? Trying to destroy other people's beliefs may have negative consequences.
come on
┏┛┻━━━┛┻┓ ┃|||||||┃ ┃ ━ ┃ ┃ ┳┛ ┗┳ ┃ ┃ ┃ ┃ ┻ ┃ ┃ ┃ ┗━┓ ┏━┛ ┃ History ┃ ┃ Poetry ┃ ┃ of ┃ ┃ pet ┃ ┃ ┗━━━┓ ┃Experience is with me ┣┓ ┃Special pets for attacking buildings ┃ ┗┓┓┏━┳┓┏┛ ┃┫┫ ┃┫┫ ┗┻┛ ┗┻┛
Too embarrassing
What does it mean to keep chanting slogans to hypnotize yourself? The protagonist is too holy. I haven't encountered such a protagonist in a long time. Do you want to change this book into a game plot? Come out and shout a slogan together when nothing happens. Say it yourself. I can't help it. If someone else uses it, don't use it if you feel it is tainted. If you say half of it yourself and then feel tainted, you can do this plot three times. 🐮! The slogan he shouted during the sect assessment was really 6. Take a screenshot and feel it for yourself. The slogan was repeated more than 30 times in just a few dozen chapters.
After reading a few chapters, the protagonist has been a fool for a long time, and he really looks like a fool.
The author repeatedly emphasizes that the protagonist is a big fool, which is indeed wise. The protagonist is not stupid, it is stupid. To be honest, if it were not for the existence of the protagonist's halo in the article, I don't know where he would have died.
Love line
When I read the emotional lines you wrote, I wanted to hit people. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, you still have to write them. Even if you write them, people can't understand them. Why are you doing this in vain?
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Official(283)Scraped 22d ago
just passing by
Friends who are reading, listen to me. If you are a grumpy man, please don't come in! Since every book is on the list, it means that some people like to read it. If you don't like to read this style, please don't hurt it. Different types of books, the same type but different main lines, different stories, different writing styles, have advantages and disadvantages, and no one is the best. Even among the great writers, there will be one or two who don't like to read their books. So don't use these reasons to hurt the author. Some people like to see it, some don't, and if you don't like it, you can delete it. It's not like I'm going to say this, right? We are all people who have gone to school. Don't act like a shrew every day, just press a button on the Internet. I haven't made a few long comments, and my expressions are a bit messy, so I'll give it a try.
come on! Would love to see a more complete book. !
I have been following Wu Da's books for a long time and I like this style very much. Although this book is indeed a little inferior to previous ones, I still have to say, come on! A book about foggy weather requires a very long preparation. Progress is also slower. But it is also the one closest to life and the most reflective of reality. And it also shows the world structure of a world. Some book friends are talking about emotional lines. The survival rule of Gaowu Dimension is to respect the strong. In this world environment, most people respect and like to rely on the strong. So, I don't think there is any problem. Dialogue aspect. . . Still the same. . . Brief and occasionally awkward (ignore it). Leave a lot of room for your own imagination. Many book friends say this book is poisonous. Well, there are many poisonous places, but there are many things in real life that are even more poisonous than this. Sometimes, reality is so helpless. Different people have different experiences and feelings. The most important thing is to pay attention to details in foggy books. Although sometimes even Wu Da himself forgets about this pitfall, in most cases, it plays a more critical role in the later stage. I hope the fog will clear up! Don't let this book be a mess! ! ! It's really sad that it didn't end well! ! ! [Emot=default,10/]
The protagonist is poisonous, Goldfinger is poisonous, the protagonist is poisonous by pretending to be a fool, the protagonist is poisonous by not pretending to be a fool, the protagonist's skills are also poisonous, none of the characters are not poisonous, the plot is not very good, and there is nothing left.
Poison book
The author also wants to promote kindness to parents, friendship to brothers and sisters, etc., But also adds a poisonous point every few chapters. The writing is incomprehensible. Sometimes it is inconsistent, and sometimes it is poisonous and gives people a headache. Release a wave of poison every few chapters
There are always some things that we can't guess. You don't have to believe in its existence, but you absolutely cannot deny other people's belief in him. We can only say that everyone has their own ideas, don't you want to go? Trying to destroy other people's beliefs may have negative consequences.
come on
┏┛┻━━━┛┻┓ ┃|||||||┃ ┃ ━ ┃ ┃ ┳┛ ┗┳ ┃ ┃ ┃ ┃ ┻ ┃ ┃ ┃ ┗━┓ ┏━┛ ┃ History ┃ ┃ Poetry ┃ ┃ of ┃ ┃ pet ┃ ┃ ┗━━━┓ ┃Experience is with me ┣┓ ┃Special pets for attacking buildings ┃ ┗┓┓┏━┳┓┏┛ ┃┫┫ ┃┫┫ ┗┻┛ ┗┻┛
Too embarrassing
What does it mean to keep chanting slogans to hypnotize yourself? The protagonist is too holy. I haven't encountered such a protagonist in a long time. Do you want to change this book into a game plot? Come out and shout a slogan together when nothing happens. Say it yourself. I can't help it. If someone else uses it, don't use it if you feel it is tainted. If you say half of it yourself and then feel tainted, you can do this plot three times. 🐮! The slogan he shouted during the sect assessment was really 6. Take a screenshot and feel it for yourself. The slogan was repeated more than 30 times in just a few dozen chapters.
After reading a few chapters, the protagonist has been a fool for a long time, and he really looks like a fool.
The author repeatedly emphasizes that the protagonist is a big fool, which is indeed wise. The protagonist is not stupid, it is stupid. To be honest, if it were not for the existence of the protagonist's halo in the article, I don't know where he would have died.
Love line
When I read the emotional lines you wrote, I wanted to hit people. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, you still have to write them. Even if you write them, people can't understand them. Why are you doing this in vain?
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Traveling through the heavens, the setting is interesting, a magnificent world of immortals. The story is very logical and the characters' IQs are also online. And it looks better toward the back.




They laid jade on the immortal thrones and burned incense in Taiyi Palace. ... The two universes collided and swallowed each other. At the critical moment of victory or defeat, Ye Jiangchuan came here. After traveling here, he can often come to an ever-changing tavern. This tavern seems to have endless forms, sometimes it is an ancient oriental tavern, sometimes it is a modern urban bar, sometimes it is a future mechanical tavern... Knights, dwarves, evil spirits, mechanical beings... Ye Jiangchuan had seen many passers-by of different life forms here, until that day, he met an old man holding a green cow! Miracle Cards, Chaos Tao Chess. Secret treasures, bloodlines, supernatural powers, adventures... When these were placed in front of him at his fingertips, Ye Jiangchuan understood that everything was different!




The book is very good and beautiful. The writing style is very good and left a deep impression on the author. The characters are vividly drawn and well-drawn. There are slight flaws but the flaws are good. Overall, it is quite good-looking.




The book is very good and beautiful. The writing style is very good and left a deep impression on the author. The characters are vividly drawn and well-drawn. There are slight flaws but the flaws are good. Overall, it is quite good-looking.


















