
The Elf Master Starts with the Big Eater
by Seeking Dreams For The First Time
About This Novel
Me (you): Dad, buy me a Charmander... Dad: Son, this is the egg of the Charmander you want... A month later, I (you) looked at the 'Blue Fat Man' who kept eating and cried without tears... This is the story of a legendary elf master, starting from 'making milk powder money' for a certain big eater... (PS: third-person perspective) (Q group established: 585124491)
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Official(15)Scraped 11d ago
Well
I think it's a bit stupid to call the elf's name in a battle. After you say a few words about "Little Kirby", the opponent directly kills you with a flame fist. Is it useful? Whoever goes first has the most advantage, right?
It's good, but the updates are too slow, and I reject Kati Dog. Just one dog in the team is enough
Have some doubts
The little Kirby can only change into a circle, hit, roll and bite? ? The 3 punches I bought before can be used as snacks, but overall they are still very good. I just want to stop them from rolling around and biting them.
The main character is a bit stupid.
He had a hard time raising a little Kirby. Is he thinking too much about raising other elves?
The protagonist loses
It's still hard to accept. I know the author doesn't want to write according to the formula, but I can still bear it if you put the protagonist in a foreign country. I lost the competition, my quasi-magic is gone, and I'm drunk.
To be honest, writing about foreign countries makes people a little uncomfortable.
I don't know if it's good or not. Anyway, your writing has kicked me out because of foreign power. It gives me a headache just to look at those John, Mike, and whatnot. Goodbye
Can you see the protagonist's elf a little faster?
Can you give us some spoilers about what kind of elf the protagonist has in the early stage?
Sure enough, I still need to fatten up. Why.
Not so good
The plot is not attractive, and the communication between people is not handled well (no big problem, but it does give people a feeling that nothing is better than having). The protagonist's perspective is the perspective of the author, which makes people feel a little uncomfortable. He knows everything about what other books you have written. Let's write a biography, but there is no big problem, and there is nothing interesting. The introduction of the book is more attractive than the book, so be it.
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Community(0)
Official(15)Scraped 11d ago
Well
I think it's a bit stupid to call the elf's name in a battle. After you say a few words about "Little Kirby", the opponent directly kills you with a flame fist. Is it useful? Whoever goes first has the most advantage, right?
It's good, but the updates are too slow, and I reject Kati Dog. Just one dog in the team is enough
Have some doubts
The little Kirby can only change into a circle, hit, roll and bite? ? The 3 punches I bought before can be used as snacks, but overall they are still very good. I just want to stop them from rolling around and biting them.
The main character is a bit stupid.
He had a hard time raising a little Kirby. Is he thinking too much about raising other elves?
The protagonist loses
It's still hard to accept. I know the author doesn't want to write according to the formula, but I can still bear it if you put the protagonist in a foreign country. I lost the competition, my quasi-magic is gone, and I'm drunk.
To be honest, writing about foreign countries makes people a little uncomfortable.
I don't know if it's good or not. Anyway, your writing has kicked me out because of foreign power. It gives me a headache just to look at those John, Mike, and whatnot. Goodbye
Can you see the protagonist's elf a little faster?
Can you give us some spoilers about what kind of elf the protagonist has in the early stage?
Sure enough, I still need to fatten up. Why.
Not so good
The plot is not attractive, and the communication between people is not handled well (no big problem, but it does give people a feeling that nothing is better than having). The protagonist's perspective is the perspective of the author, which makes people feel a little uncomfortable. He knows everything about what other books you have written. Let's write a biography, but there is no big problem, and there is nothing interesting. The introduction of the book is more attractive than the book, so be it.
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Me: Dad, buy me a Charmander... Dad: Damn, this is the egg you want for Charmander... A month later, I looked at the 'fat blue man' who kept eating and wanted to cry without tears... This is the story of a legendary elf master who started by 'earning milk powder money' for a certain big eater...















