Swordsman, is My Golden Finger an Evil God?
About This Novel
Reborn in a family of hereditary viscounts, as the second young master without inheritance rights, Broughton thought that his life would be easy and comfortable, and he could live a peaceful life, without any thought of competing for power with his elder brother. However, there are monsters and resentful spirits in this world. There is even an evil god awakening to bring about the end. The seven gods who created the world have already given up on mankind and left this world, and the end will eventually come. The good news is, the day he came of age he discovered he had a golden finger. The bad news is that his golden finger seems to be an evil god as well?
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Official(4)Scraped 7d ago
The story is still interesting, the logic is smooth, and the characterization is good, but the main point is that the protagonist is a person who suddenly inherited the time-travel memory when he was young, but the author shows that the protagonist is still a local child (a bit like a sensitive high school student), and in order to expand the story, the protagonist knows too little about local common sense. Even if he inherits the memory, he is still a native. I don't know, but I don't know if this is a bit too much.
It's okay, but it's not a high-quality product. Don't listen to the reviews.
The protagonist is a coward who has modern memory and wants to lie down. Moreover, the author portrays him as not very smart. God is all in his head. He is afraid of this and that. He has no IQ at all. Does he still have the power of prayer and no belief? Does he really have modern memory? The more I read, the more I look like an aborigine, so why don't you just not write about modern memories? It would make the protagonist look stupid.
The protagonist is lawful and kind, the author's writing is very good, the characters have distinct personalities, it is a rare masterpiece
The worldview setting is good, but the writing is a bit slow.
As the title says, after talking about the features, let's talk about the shortcomings. A very important point for a slow-burning book is to create a sense of reality, the logic of the characters' behavior, and the foreshadowing of the plot development. These are the top priorities, and a slow-burning book needs to be carefully crafted. This book is still too lacking. The shaping of some of the main characters and the development of the main plot in the early stage are too deliberate, and it seems to be a drama at a glance. There are no big problems in the overall shaping and the overall plot. However, you are a slow writer, and the key details in it interrupt the immersive experience. It immediately makes people feel that the text is long, the development is slow, and the characters are thin. The specific details need to be experienced by book lovers. I was attracted by the background setting, but the artificial carving of some prominent and deliberate sections was too obvious, and I couldn't stand it before it was put on the shelves.
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Community(0)
Official(4)Scraped 7d ago
The story is still interesting, the logic is smooth, and the characterization is good, but the main point is that the protagonist is a person who suddenly inherited the time-travel memory when he was young, but the author shows that the protagonist is still a local child (a bit like a sensitive high school student), and in order to expand the story, the protagonist knows too little about local common sense. Even if he inherits the memory, he is still a native. I don't know, but I don't know if this is a bit too much.
It's okay, but it's not a high-quality product. Don't listen to the reviews.
The protagonist is a coward who has modern memory and wants to lie down. Moreover, the author portrays him as not very smart. God is all in his head. He is afraid of this and that. He has no IQ at all. Does he still have the power of prayer and no belief? Does he really have modern memory? The more I read, the more I look like an aborigine, so why don't you just not write about modern memories? It would make the protagonist look stupid.
The protagonist is lawful and kind, the author's writing is very good, the characters have distinct personalities, it is a rare masterpiece
The worldview setting is good, but the writing is a bit slow.
As the title says, after talking about the features, let's talk about the shortcomings. A very important point for a slow-burning book is to create a sense of reality, the logic of the characters' behavior, and the foreshadowing of the plot development. These are the top priorities, and a slow-burning book needs to be carefully crafted. This book is still too lacking. The shaping of some of the main characters and the development of the main plot in the early stage are too deliberate, and it seems to be a drama at a glance. There are no big problems in the overall shaping and the overall plot. However, you are a slow writer, and the key details in it interrupt the immersive experience. It immediately makes people feel that the text is long, the development is slow, and the characters are thin. The specific details need to be experienced by book lovers. I was attracted by the background setting, but the artificial carving of some prominent and deliberate sections was too obvious, and I couldn't stand it before it was put on the shelves.
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