Mortal: I Have a Portable Fairy Mansion

Is this too watery? Each exercise is explained in half a chapter. Once you get it, you won't be done practicing it, you'll still have to do this and that.

I'm really impressed. It's almost 100 chapters and I haven't even started cultivating yet.

After reading Chapter 14, I feel that I have given face to the protagonist, Ni Ma, what kind of Jiba is written?

It's very frustrating and annoying to read. The author doesn't know what he's thinking. He keeps hesitating over and over again... Oh, I can't find the words to describe it. It's just uncomfortable to read. I haven't felt this uncomfortable when reading other books. I feel like I'm holding a breath in my chest. The more I read, the more uncomfortable I feel.

This kind of trash man is really unwatchable as the protagonist. He has a cowardly and selfish personality and is a loser.

The story of the new journey with Han Lao Mo Na is well written. People's hearts change treacherously. It's hard to change your sincerity, let alone a mortal who puts people on the table.

The writing is really ugly, or you can gain Han Li's favor and then lead him to sneak attack on Master Jinguang. He must have some skills and maybe even a full set of Qigong. After all, it is impossible not to think about your future if you come from a foundation-building family. It will be embarrassing if your descendants have spiritual roots but no skills. Moreover, Qigong is cheap and the full set of Five Elements Qigong only costs a few spiritual stones. If you don't have the skills, let Han Li take him to Xiuxianfang City and let him purchase the Five Elements skills. If you don't have spiritual roots, just live in the mortal world and wait for death.

I was persuaded to quit in the first 10 chapters. It was so pretentious.

This book has nothing to do with the Immortal Mansion. The first few pictures of the Immortal Mansion are just to trick people into coming in. The word Immortal Mansion is not mentioned at all in the later chapters. The title is deceiving.

I have read more than 10 chapters, no matter the priority, I can't walk well, and I am thinking about the water, which is also very poisonous... Today, when I enter primary school, I am thinking about whether to go to Tsinghua University or Peking University, study artificial intelligence, or engage in nuclear fusion! ! !