
Cultivation of Immortality: Start from the Yin Weapon Altar
About This Novel
If you have good fortune and iron money, you can build an altar of Yin Bing Dharma. Cultivating immortality and becoming a Taoist is where everything begins!
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Official(86)Scraped 2d ago
All are brushes
I originally thought that the five-star reviews were a benefit, but in fact they were all negative reviews, and after looking at them for a while, they were not good. Firstly, the way the story is written, secondly, the character of the protagonist is unpleasant, and the novel is written with a modern mentality (it was good to write this way in the past few years, but it is stupid to write this kind of thing now). Thirdly, I originally thought that the author had written several novels, and the writing style could be improved, but in fact there is no change at all, and it has even regressed. The fourth storyline is so stupid. You came from the countryside to become a disciple, so you could just go and ask for an interview, but you still have to beat around the bush to become an apprentice after Chapter 18. The author wrote the following text without reading the previous text. I wrote that Master Wang lived in the inner courtyard. I wrote it again later. To sum it up, it is just a short article with quite a lot of poisonous points. It really does not suit the author's identity, having written so many novels.
The plot is very dragging, and there is no sense of advancing the main plot at all. The author is mostly talking to himself.
The five-star ones are all trustworthy, and they are written like a running account.
I really can't stand it anymore. I treat the readers as if they were Japanese. In the first ten chapters, what I eat makes my blood and qi rise to three or four hundred kilograms. In the following chapters, I practice Taoism and my blood rises to seven or eight hundred kilograms. In the end, I can't even pick up a knife that weighs ten kilograms. Did I grow up eating Xiang yesterday?
Che Zhuluan talks too much and repeats one thing over and over again. I can't stand it any more. I'll give it 5 stars for the sake of the few books I've read before.
What you read in this book is nothing like pig's feet or chicken feathers, and what you write about pig's feet is incompetent.
The protagonist is just a cheating little brat who is too lazy to eat and wants to be fed to his mouth. However, the author has made him the protagonist.
Well
I haven't read much, and overall I feel that there is some procrastination. I feel that one small thing will be talked about more, of course, it is okay, and it is not particularly procrastinating. Maybe it is not procrastinating in the front, but there may be some in the back, but I don't see it. And about the inconsistency, I think it still makes sense, as far as fine fingers are concerned. , I always said that the Three-legged Jade Toad is the golden finger of the protagonist, but later it was changed to the Three-legged Golden Toad. I don't know if the author used AI to write it or something. I don't think it is written by AI, but this golden finger problem is inconsistent. It feels stupid to read the book. You just wrote so many chapters, and you just eat the book. What kind of memory do you have?
I don't understand why the protagonist actually says he is afraid of this kind of public opinion. Isn't it true that the winner is the king and the loser is the bandit? If I win, there will naturally be great scholars who will argue for me. Just like the protagonist in the Daxin Dynasty, the winner will naturally beautify history.
The plot and setting are okay, but Che Zuluan talks nonsense? I don't know how many people have been persuaded to quit by doing this for free chapters. Editor 2: I saw it when I was reading through the replies today. I came back and stepped on the guy who poured water into the book. It was all in vain.
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Community(0)
Official(86)Scraped 2d ago
All are brushes
I originally thought that the five-star reviews were a benefit, but in fact they were all negative reviews, and after looking at them for a while, they were not good. Firstly, the way the story is written, secondly, the character of the protagonist is unpleasant, and the novel is written with a modern mentality (it was good to write this way in the past few years, but it is stupid to write this kind of thing now). Thirdly, I originally thought that the author had written several novels, and the writing style could be improved, but in fact there is no change at all, and it has even regressed. The fourth storyline is so stupid. You came from the countryside to become a disciple, so you could just go and ask for an interview, but you still have to beat around the bush to become an apprentice after Chapter 18. The author wrote the following text without reading the previous text. I wrote that Master Wang lived in the inner courtyard. I wrote it again later. To sum it up, it is just a short article with quite a lot of poisonous points. It really does not suit the author's identity, having written so many novels.
The plot is very dragging, and there is no sense of advancing the main plot at all. The author is mostly talking to himself.
The five-star ones are all trustworthy, and they are written like a running account.
I really can't stand it anymore. I treat the readers as if they were Japanese. In the first ten chapters, what I eat makes my blood and qi rise to three or four hundred kilograms. In the following chapters, I practice Taoism and my blood rises to seven or eight hundred kilograms. In the end, I can't even pick up a knife that weighs ten kilograms. Did I grow up eating Xiang yesterday?
Che Zhuluan talks too much and repeats one thing over and over again. I can't stand it any more. I'll give it 5 stars for the sake of the few books I've read before.
What you read in this book is nothing like pig's feet or chicken feathers, and what you write about pig's feet is incompetent.
The protagonist is just a cheating little brat who is too lazy to eat and wants to be fed to his mouth. However, the author has made him the protagonist.
Well
I haven't read much, and overall I feel that there is some procrastination. I feel that one small thing will be talked about more, of course, it is okay, and it is not particularly procrastinating. Maybe it is not procrastinating in the front, but there may be some in the back, but I don't see it. And about the inconsistency, I think it still makes sense, as far as fine fingers are concerned. , I always said that the Three-legged Jade Toad is the golden finger of the protagonist, but later it was changed to the Three-legged Golden Toad. I don't know if the author used AI to write it or something. I don't think it is written by AI, but this golden finger problem is inconsistent. It feels stupid to read the book. You just wrote so many chapters, and you just eat the book. What kind of memory do you have?
I don't understand why the protagonist actually says he is afraid of this kind of public opinion. Isn't it true that the winner is the king and the loser is the bandit? If I win, there will naturally be great scholars who will argue for me. Just like the protagonist in the Daxin Dynasty, the winner will naturally beautify history.
The plot and setting are okay, but Che Zuluan talks nonsense? I don't know how many people have been persuaded to quit by doing this for free chapters. Editor 2: I saw it when I was reading through the replies today. I came back and stepped on the guy who poured water into the book. It was all in vain.









