From the Carp Who Sent His Son to the Immortal Official in Heaven

Why do I want to complain about this novel? Just look at the name and you will know that you will become an immortal official in the future.

The protagonist of the world of cultivating immortals and practicing the incense and fire method. The mascot of giving birth to children is the little carp. He does practical things and strives for success until he becomes famous. His colleagues are forced to form a group to target him. A fairy tale about farming and management, it has a perfect score of five stars, and it can currently be given four stars. A game planner in his previous life brought the GM cheating device in the Xianxia game he developed to a world of cultivation where immortality and Shinto coexist. There are glitches, but there are no big glitches. The cheat code function needs to be tried one by one again. What about the protagonist's identity? The child delivery clerks enlightened by Heaven are sent to the local system of the underworld to take charge of reproductive health care in the countryside. There is a backstage, but it is too far away. The grassroots colleagues, except for the Stove Lord, are not in the same system as him, and they have to share the incense of the local city god. The situation is not up to you. Only by working hard and achieving great results can the backstage of Heaven remember me, little carp! The slow-burning style of farming novels requires you to advance one level at a time, build small temples and fairy mountains yourself, and slowly accumulate resources. As long as others don't pick the peaches, it is quite interesting to watch the protagonist develop. In the early stage, the protagonist has little influence, and most of the time he fights alone. It is understandable that he can only practice immortality to increase his personal strength. I hope there will be more content about Shinto officialdom in the following article. After all, Shinto emphasizes the power of faith. Take incense and keep one safe. The struggle of conflicting beliefs is even more interesting.

The latest update is about an idiot who runs a school at the foot of a mountain. I don't know if he is a carp god, but he even catches carps that have become refined and roasted. And deliberately caused a conflict

If the protagonist has a modifier, can't he be allowed to generate a cheat code that conceals his secret? Taking an artifact in exchange for a chance to leave his name in the fairy book, and it is useless, the protagonist runs over to lick someone like a licking dog, saying that they are right. I really can't figure out why I'm so grateful for this, and why I can't control it. If I stay with you, it will always become a disaster. Cultivation as an immortal relies on fighting, fighting with people, heaven and earth. Now that you don't want to accumulate knowledge for yourself, do you have to wait until a disaster is imminent to do this? Furthermore, a rubbish position in charge of midwifery is certainly not a rubbish job as a midwife. It is rubbish in the protagonist's current position and the current world. He doesn't want to jump in other directions and is still doing midwifery here. How long do you have to spend in this world before you can go to heaven? And you are only at the ninth level now. A ninth-level little piece of garbage. It seems that you really have no enthusiasm.

The front part is good, but the back part is bad. The main character is majoring in water. God has created an illusion. What kind of image do you want? It doesn't fit at all.

Let me talk about my thoughts after watching the game. The early stage was wonderful, just before Qinglianjun died (I don't know why she suddenly died, and there was a section that was inexplicable). Regardless of the system, power, and plug-ins, they were all very good and very harmonious. If the quality continued, I could stay up all night watching it. Let's talk about discord: 1. Lord Qinglian is dead and the great road is manifested. You have the greatest benefit. In addition to the external world, the self-created method of cultivating Taoism has a big impact. 2. The one that was agreed upon increases the mana by 100 points, and the mana limit can be broken through in one use. I thought to myself that this is okay. This novel is not rigid in tradition, at least it is not stuck in levels. I didn't expect that the next realm needs to meet the requirements to break through. The breakthrough of Yin Shen requires the 3rd level of Xuan Guang to reach, and each subsequent level is There are requirements to break through. I feel that this is still a traditional novel, which is disappointing. I think it would be interesting if these 100 points of mana can be used to a great extent, such as the limit of mana. Using these 100 points to break through to the next level and completing the previously unfinished requirements from a high position is better than leaving it alone when it is useless. 3. The protagonist's plug-in is not closely related to the leader. In addition to increasing incense and indirectly increasing talents, it seems to have little to do with the protagonist. Those geniuses have completely become someone else's. Apart from giving a little feedback, they have nothing to do with the protagonist. It is a waste and the protagonist He is still a good banker, but the resources and population behind him are stuck. He said that I understand people. We have two systems. People have their own difficulties. What should we do? Find the big boss behind the scenes, Golden Boy. If anything happens, you will find others. Why are you so shameless! 4. The protagonist's path to immortality has always been in the clouds. His backers are not like his backers, and his direct lineage is not like his direct lineage. If he has any problems, he goes to the golden boy. His own cultivation of immortality is just a mess. His skills are rubbish, his magical powers are not good, and he doesn't know the way forward. What kind of avenue should he rely on? Monument Comprehension, as written before, there is no follow-up to Yuanling Mountain, the Taoist hero only grabs things from the protagonist when he needs them, there is no follow-up to Qinglianjun even after he died, and there is no follow-up on Kung Fu, so there are so many pitfalls. That's it. I don't want to write more. I still have a lot of things to talk about. I don't have time.

This part of Dragon Girl is really poisonous, and it feels like the rhythm is broken in an instant. I used kindness to save the baby spirit, and at least I can control the situation. The protagonist and the dragon girl have never met each other, and the child is not his. It's crazy. They took over so smoothly. It's a sudden intellect

I feel like the biggest bug is that these experts will have some ideas after seeing the effects of cheating. There is no explanation at all in the book.

It's a pity, the front is okay, but the writing at the back is too 💩

It doesn't look good at the back. It was already too bad to begin with, but in the end, Taozu came to recruit his disciples.