The Ultimate Clone of One Piece
by Yongpan
About This Novel
The new book "This Gunslinger is Too Strong" has been released, a pirate fanfic, please support it, thank you! Ivan traveled through time and accidentally learned the art of shadow clone. And he traveled through time and became Ace's brother? An unexpected opportunity led him to become a marine. With peerless talent and the strongest character, Ivan holds a red sword and looks toward the future! Maybe the world will change because of me! Now that you're here, let's give it a try!
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Official(446)Scraped 1mo ago
The protagonist's righteous and awe-inspiring look makes me want to laugh
After working on it for a long time, you still have to accept the harem, and the protagonist has the potential of a virgin bitch. In order to save someone, you have to try to change the trajectory of the world. What exactly did you change? Have you conquered many beauties? In addition, the protagonist gives people the feeling of a diaosi who has counterattacked, but the fact that diaosi is still a diaosi after counterattack is really vividly reflected. The first 20 to 30% is okay, but the later it gets, the more annoying it gets. I've basically gone through all the protagonists in One Piece, and I don't want to say anything. Finally, the pace of the novel is too slow. The protagonist can even fight against generals. He is only eleven or twelve years old. Will the protagonist be underage when the whole book is finished? Starting to push your limits at the age of three or four, wouldn't it affect the growth of people in the pirate world even if their physical fitness is so outrageous?
Chakra
Chakra! How to use ninjutsu without chakra
My new book "One Piece: The Dharma God Has Something to Say" has been uploaded, please support me, thank you!
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
The world view has gone astray
The author's understanding of pirates is obviously biased by the perspective of the protagonist of the original anime. There are only a very small number of pirates who advocate free adventure. 90% Of pirates are scum and trash. You can't deny this.
It was Duan You who raised his paw. . . . .
The author's paper fruit is very 6, think about Naruto's little blue and 6
A reminder to those who read the book
This book is poisonous. It's written in such a mess that it's okay at first but it's almost impossible to look straight at it later. Don't waste your book money.
There is a bit of a problem in the first chapter. Since it is a cheap monitor, it is a bit strange that the protagonist, who is not a rich man, smashes the monitor after seeing an unpleasant plot. . .
Hahahahahaha I laughed. I don't know anything about Ace's surname. Hahaha who told you that Ace's surname is Monchi? Guapi, I laughed to death.
I fell into a cliche from the beginning.
I can't stand it anymore after seeing the second chapter. It's another ideological theme of being timid and making some decisions against your will for fear of losing the "prophetic" advantage of not changing the plot. This kind of routine is all bad, okay? If I read further, I can only abandon the book if I really don't like it.
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Official(446)Scraped 1mo ago
The protagonist's righteous and awe-inspiring look makes me want to laugh
After working on it for a long time, you still have to accept the harem, and the protagonist has the potential of a virgin bitch. In order to save someone, you have to try to change the trajectory of the world. What exactly did you change? Have you conquered many beauties? In addition, the protagonist gives people the feeling of a diaosi who has counterattacked, but the fact that diaosi is still a diaosi after counterattack is really vividly reflected. The first 20 to 30% is okay, but the later it gets, the more annoying it gets. I've basically gone through all the protagonists in One Piece, and I don't want to say anything. Finally, the pace of the novel is too slow. The protagonist can even fight against generals. He is only eleven or twelve years old. Will the protagonist be underage when the whole book is finished? Starting to push your limits at the age of three or four, wouldn't it affect the growth of people in the pirate world even if their physical fitness is so outrageous?
Chakra
Chakra! How to use ninjutsu without chakra
My new book "One Piece: The Dharma God Has Something to Say" has been uploaded, please support me, thank you!
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
The world view has gone astray
The author's understanding of pirates is obviously biased by the perspective of the protagonist of the original anime. There are only a very small number of pirates who advocate free adventure. 90% Of pirates are scum and trash. You can't deny this.
It was Duan You who raised his paw. . . . .
The author's paper fruit is very 6, think about Naruto's little blue and 6
A reminder to those who read the book
This book is poisonous. It's written in such a mess that it's okay at first but it's almost impossible to look straight at it later. Don't waste your book money.
There is a bit of a problem in the first chapter. Since it is a cheap monitor, it is a bit strange that the protagonist, who is not a rich man, smashes the monitor after seeing an unpleasant plot. . .
Hahahahahaha I laughed. I don't know anything about Ace's surname. Hahaha who told you that Ace's surname is Monchi? Guapi, I laughed to death.
I fell into a cliche from the beginning.
I can't stand it anymore after seeing the second chapter. It's another ideological theme of being timid and making some decisions against your will for fear of losing the "prophetic" advantage of not changing the plot. This kind of routine is all bad, okay? If I read further, I can only abandon the book if I really don't like it.
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Has potential
It's a pretty good pirate novel with a lot of imagination.
It is a pirate novel that I really like. The content is light-hearted, the plot is reasonable, and there are not so many bloody plots. It is very good.
There is an extra brother of Ace in One Piece, and he can also use the technique of multiple shadow clones! Watch One Piece's stormy transformation.
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