My Monastic Life
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My name is Huang Jingyang, and I am born in the 1990s. Accidentally, I planted a Tao seed in myself. As I grew older, the Tao took root in my body. The sun, moon and stars, water, fire, wind and thunder, the world is cold and cold, the world is warm and cold, the world is endless, and there are thousands of ways to enter the dream fairyland. The fairyland turns out to be a point of no return [Monastic Life Discussion Group 195588151] [Subscription to VIP Group: 452996399 requires verification]
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Official(101)Scraped 20d ago
Works by junior high school students
The first few pictures are good, the text is written very carefully, but the later it gets more and more sloppy. QQ Reading has free time for newbies. I just happened to read some of the VIP part, and I mainly found these problems: 1. There are too many typos, including white characters. This is a big taboo for writers. If you don't know, you can search it on Baidu, but you can't make mistakes because words are the foundation of the expression of the work; 2. In terms of describing the plot of the incident, the most basic popular science must be followed. For example, snakes cannot turn around in caves that are similar in size to their body, which will cause problems in the storyline; 3. The general environment is not set clearly: Oracle, seal script, traditional Chinese, and simplified characters span a long time, thousands of years, but the protagonist only takes a few years to study it thoroughly? It's impossible to achieve orderly inheritance, it's a matter of time. In terms of space: since there is evil, there will be good. The setting of society is very embarrassing. Just like the Bajiaofeng incident, the national level will never let it go. Taking a step back, since there is Tianyin Sect, there will be organizations that correspond to it. This is necessary for the general environment; The author always talks about how hard it is to write code, and life is not easy. If you write sincerely and others deliberately belittle you, that is an attack on you, which is wrong; but if you really write unsatisfactory, can't you let others comment? No comment on this. Writing is not easy. Now that you have already written, why not write more responsibly and seriously? If you really read it as a cool article, who would think about other things?
eunuch book
What I wrote above is still fascinating, and the emotional descriptions are very delicate. I don't know why the author just boiled the water in the middle period! Bad grades? The writing at the end is terrible, and it jumps straight from the middle. The ending was poorly told.
This book was okay early on, but. Just like that leisurely life, how did it change in the later stages?
good book
Although I didn't watch the end, it was really good to watch. However, there are two or three typos in some chapters.
Not good-looking
It starts to look good. It's ugly in the back. . At a certain age, children learn to like people. I still like my teacher. . Feeling so perverted
Disgusting first person
After seeing Teacher Lin appear, I can't stand it anymore.
It's so rubbish to lead people into the secret realm later. Why do you have to accept so many apprentices at such a young age to make up the word count? Your speech is becoming more and more verbose.
Don't be a taoist. Just go in. You can either write about the innocent heart of a child. In the end, the author is still a pervert who always wants to have some romance. You can have a wife instead of your grandfather when you are 7 years old. You look at the standard Dragon King's face and set up a character for yourself. He saves his wife and is not afraid of his grandfather. The villain is also stupid. There is no way that the Dragon King can cast his wisdom halo.
The first person is not called a novel, it is called a diary.
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Official(101)Scraped 20d ago
Works by junior high school students
The first few pictures are good, the text is written very carefully, but the later it gets more and more sloppy. QQ Reading has free time for newbies. I just happened to read some of the VIP part, and I mainly found these problems: 1. There are too many typos, including white characters. This is a big taboo for writers. If you don't know, you can search it on Baidu, but you can't make mistakes because words are the foundation of the expression of the work; 2. In terms of describing the plot of the incident, the most basic popular science must be followed. For example, snakes cannot turn around in caves that are similar in size to their body, which will cause problems in the storyline; 3. The general environment is not set clearly: Oracle, seal script, traditional Chinese, and simplified characters span a long time, thousands of years, but the protagonist only takes a few years to study it thoroughly? It's impossible to achieve orderly inheritance, it's a matter of time. In terms of space: since there is evil, there will be good. The setting of society is very embarrassing. Just like the Bajiaofeng incident, the national level will never let it go. Taking a step back, since there is Tianyin Sect, there will be organizations that correspond to it. This is necessary for the general environment; The author always talks about how hard it is to write code, and life is not easy. If you write sincerely and others deliberately belittle you, that is an attack on you, which is wrong; but if you really write unsatisfactory, can't you let others comment? No comment on this. Writing is not easy. Now that you have already written, why not write more responsibly and seriously? If you really read it as a cool article, who would think about other things?
eunuch book
What I wrote above is still fascinating, and the emotional descriptions are very delicate. I don't know why the author just boiled the water in the middle period! Bad grades? The writing at the end is terrible, and it jumps straight from the middle. The ending was poorly told.
This book was okay early on, but. Just like that leisurely life, how did it change in the later stages?
good book
Although I didn't watch the end, it was really good to watch. However, there are two or three typos in some chapters.
Not good-looking
It starts to look good. It's ugly in the back. . At a certain age, children learn to like people. I still like my teacher. . Feeling so perverted
Disgusting first person
After seeing Teacher Lin appear, I can't stand it anymore.
It's so rubbish to lead people into the secret realm later. Why do you have to accept so many apprentices at such a young age to make up the word count? Your speech is becoming more and more verbose.
Don't be a taoist. Just go in. You can either write about the innocent heart of a child. In the end, the author is still a pervert who always wants to have some romance. You can have a wife instead of your grandfather when you are 7 years old. You look at the standard Dragon King's face and set up a character for yourself. He saves his wife and is not afraid of his grandfather. The villain is also stupid. There is no way that the Dragon King can cast his wisdom halo.
The first person is not called a novel, it is called a diary.
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In my mind, Brother Fishing 1's Taoist Trilogy is not about stallion. Five star review
Rating Grain- The idea is very good. It is written in the first person. The protagonist touches the door of monasticism as a child due to an unexpected encounter. He continues to make progress in daily life and slowly advances on the path of monasticism. It has a very light and natural feeling, no hostility, no sense of oppression driven by conspiracy, and it looks very comfortable. In the early stage, the protagonist is still young and is mainly bound by family ties, teachers, etc. Depending on the author's intention, he will probably write about breaking away from the worldly ties step by step and completely embarking on the path of cultivation. I hope that I can write better and better in the future, and write a real fairy tale, instead of a fairy tale that kills people. Rating: Liangcao - good creativity, daily life as a monastic -
Rating: 7.0 A pseudo-autobiographical cultivation memoir type. There are relatively few works on this subject, and even fewer have appeared in the past two years. The writing is nothing more than what adventures the protagonist encountered as a child in a remote mountain village in the Age of Dharma, and then began to understand the Tao, and then gradually grew up, enlightened, practiced, and then gradually started to contact the cultivation circle, and then the entire world experienced major changes or major conspiracies. When writing about this kind of subject matter, it is very important to have a bland style of writing at the beginning, and the audience will not be less if it is written, because there is a shortage of books for readers who like this subject matter. But the author must have some ideas of his own, or at least be able to bluff people, and he cannot adopt a nonsense style of cultivation, fantasy, and nonsense. It must be extended from traditional culture so that readers will like it. However, at the same time, in the later period of this kind of novels, it is very easy to fall into the old path of great changes in the world and the great conspiracy of the universe, and lose the bland and deep fairy spirit of the previous ones. This book is currently about food and grass, with some local elements mixed in. Hope not collapse
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