Recruit Immortals

I hope there will be a book version that can be listened to

I've read a lot of novels, and this is the crappiest one I've ever read. The word count error doesn't count, and the plot doesn't fit in. It's really rubbish.

The plot is okay, but there are a lot of typos

It's a mess, full of typos, and long-winded.

I hope you will be cautious and rigorous when publishing the second part! Write the context better! For example, you can connect from the previous chapter to the next one! Book continues above...! So

The content is lively and interesting, with soul and artistic sense. I hope there will be fewer typos and a human voice will read it aloud. I also hope there won't be some inexplicable mismatches in some chapters.

Except for a lot of typos and occasionally a few chapters that don't match up, everything else is pretty good. To read it, I became a member because I have been interested in yin and yang since I was a child. Unfortunately, I am a girl and my yang energy is relatively weak in reality. There is no one to teach me if I want to learn.

I hope there will be a second part. When I read this novel, I found the plot behind it to be quite interesting and touching. I felt that the ending was also better, as it was open-ended.

I hope there will be a second part. Even though it's messy sometimes, it's still very good.

Very good. There are just a lot of typos. The plot is also very thoughtful