
Xuanmen is Not Authentic
by Sad, Sad
About This Novel
For people in the world to practice cultivation, the physical body must be perfect to replenish the soul, and then the Yin Shen will come out of the body to capture the essence of heaven and earth. Wang abandoned his practice and started directly from leaving the body... So he could receive the essence of heaven and earth at the beginning of his practice. All kinds of methods in the world: after learning them, mastering them, changing them, their shapes will change. At that time when the emperor was praying for immortality, there were three great conquests that ruined the people's livelihood. Wang abandoned his bow and entered the world, started in the army, and began his journey of spiritual practice in the wild.
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Like to pretend
The protagonist always likes to pretend, and he still pretends to himself. It doesn't matter whether the characters in the novel can understand the protagonist's pretending. The author must let the readers understand and spend a lot of space to explain to the readers how to pretend. Metaphorically "Good! (Although this review is only one word, it has rigorous grammar, neat wording, clever structure, catchy words, and is concise and comprehensive. It shows the reviewer's solid writing skills, easy-to-handle writing skills and ingenious creative ability. It is admirable. In addition, the ending with an exclamation point is really the finishing touch)" Just like this, talking to yourself to explain
The cooperation between Ran Jiao and Wang Qi was really good. Facing the powerful formation, Wang Qi found a breakthrough and pointed out the direction to Ran Jiao. Ran Jiao trusted him unconditionally and they only escaped after fighting together.
It's the end of the month
I was surprised to find that I haven't posted any comments in my message area this month, so I quickly posted a message to get some work done.
I'll come
The brother below may have been poisoned and unresponsive. I have 10 years of experience in trying drugs to help you guys try this book and give me feedback.
A few words from old readers
I am an old reader of the author's last book. The author's new book is also very good. The style is suitable for my taste, but the update speed is still very slow.
press
It has been more than a hundred chapters and I haven't started formal practice yet. It's just a book of basic exercises plus some miscellaneous spells. There are just over 600 chapters in total. Are you pressing too hard?
Give some advice
You are a soldier, and you go to practice immortality. After you become an immortal, don't you know that even emperors want to live forever? You have told all the information in the mountain. The emperor is not planning to attack the mountain gate. You are not really powerful. Also, you are in a very good state and have a good sense of hierarchy. You can justify yourself. Come on.
Always dealing with evil things gives people a spooky feeling. In fact, I am disgusted with such novels, but it's just that there is a shortage of books! Can't the author write that kind of upright plot? Although there is good wherever there is evil, isn't it bad that you always write about the dark side like this? What exactly are you trying to express?
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Official(46)Scraped 20d ago
Like to pretend
The protagonist always likes to pretend, and he still pretends to himself. It doesn't matter whether the characters in the novel can understand the protagonist's pretending. The author must let the readers understand and spend a lot of space to explain to the readers how to pretend. Metaphorically "Good! (Although this review is only one word, it has rigorous grammar, neat wording, clever structure, catchy words, and is concise and comprehensive. It shows the reviewer's solid writing skills, easy-to-handle writing skills and ingenious creative ability. It is admirable. In addition, the ending with an exclamation point is really the finishing touch)" Just like this, talking to yourself to explain
The cooperation between Ran Jiao and Wang Qi was really good. Facing the powerful formation, Wang Qi found a breakthrough and pointed out the direction to Ran Jiao. Ran Jiao trusted him unconditionally and they only escaped after fighting together.
It's the end of the month
I was surprised to find that I haven't posted any comments in my message area this month, so I quickly posted a message to get some work done.
I'll come
The brother below may have been poisoned and unresponsive. I have 10 years of experience in trying drugs to help you guys try this book and give me feedback.
A few words from old readers
I am an old reader of the author's last book. The author's new book is also very good. The style is suitable for my taste, but the update speed is still very slow.
press
It has been more than a hundred chapters and I haven't started formal practice yet. It's just a book of basic exercises plus some miscellaneous spells. There are just over 600 chapters in total. Are you pressing too hard?
Give some advice
You are a soldier, and you go to practice immortality. After you become an immortal, don't you know that even emperors want to live forever? You have told all the information in the mountain. The emperor is not planning to attack the mountain gate. You are not really powerful. Also, you are in a very good state and have a good sense of hierarchy. You can justify yourself. Come on.
Always dealing with evil things gives people a spooky feeling. In fact, I am disgusted with such novels, but it's just that there is a shortage of books! Can't the author write that kind of upright plot? Although there is good wherever there is evil, isn't it bad that you always write about the dark side like this? What exactly are you trying to express?
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Recommend ⭐⭐⭐, a pretty good book. I picked it up again. I don't know how I gave up in the first place... Could it be too positive energy? It shouldn't be




[Jun complains·Read new books] [Column has been reviewed] [Reading progress] Chapter 203 (serialized) [Jun style label] Type keywords: Xianxia; time travel; upgrade flow; Keywords in the content: slow-warming type; standard fantasy worldview (based on the Western Han Dynasty); committing to the official system to get promoted; single female protagonist dog food story, mixed doubles between husband and wife; Character keywords: Genius flow; funny protagonist character; cultivation relies on talent and IQ, and fighting relies on brute force; lawful good camp; many bonds. [Excerpts from columns and short comments] The fifth-level author is worried and worried. He has completed this work with a total of 3.7 Million words to his name. As expected of an old author, he has no pressure to save manuscripts. Since it was put on the shelves on June 25, an average of five chapters have been updated every day, which is simply outrageous. This book has a strong personal characteristic of the author, which is specifically reflected in the use of a large number of confessional third-person narratives in the writing to express self-complaints. When this description technique is used in the candy-making plot, the emotional description of both men and women is quite delicate and vivid, and the effect is extraordinary. However, for general plots, it is easy to "claim the title", squeezing the reader's right to independent interpretation, and thus causing the reader to feel bored. In short, this characteristic writing method has its advantages and disadvantages. Fortunately, the application effect of this book is much better than that of the old book: I spent two days to read through the author's old book "Sword Sect Side Gate". To be honest, the writing is very average, and it is the kind that would be lost to everyone under normal circumstances. One of the reasons is that the middle and later stages are basically the protagonist talking to himself, and it becomes more and more like describing the author's heart rather than the character's heart that the reader wants. Naturally, it is difficult to keep up with the author's brainwaves. The author himself is also very outrageous. According to his own words, he has actually practiced some so-called "gong techniques" and feels that they are very effective. This is probably the source of this kind of psychological description... The writing power of the new book has been optimized a lot. First of all, the new book inherits the core selling point of the old book of "cultivating with weird methods". For example, the protagonist Wang Qi in this book, as a super genius, can practice an ordinary water purification spell to have the effect of "holy light purification" to avoid evil, but only to ensure his safety during the march. He is able to wash his hands before eating and after using the toilet; the marching shield given to him by his boss is currently the only heat-resistant material, but is used by the protagonist to cook... Such plots as "such a good talent is used to feed dogs" create a very hilarious contrast and cuteness, successfully attracting readers. Another big selling point is dog food, which is also the key to changing the author's writing style from "repelling readers" to "attracting readers." (For complete comments, please go to my column)




This article is quite enjoyable to read, and the character of the protagonist makes me look forward to the future development of the story. Ha! I was recently searching for some fairy-cultivating articles to satisfy my appetite, and ended up finding a bunch of seedlings! Hehe, keep them all first!

















