One Piece: Sword Immortal from Another World
About This Novel
A modern person first traveled to the world of cultivation and then to the world of pirates. The Four Plumbing Brothers? The new number one swordsman? On how a generation of swordsmen can conquer the world!
What Readers Think
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Official(16)Scraped 20d ago
A bit poisonous
When I traveled to Pirates for the second time, why didn't I think of practicing cultivation and protecting myself first? If I have to find someone, I don't even know how he died.
The early stage is too long. You write too much like this. It's too wordy and I don't have the desire to read on.
About the sword
Personally, I think that many of the descriptions are quite to my liking, and I hope the author can work harder (ง•̀_•́)ง
There are too many unreasonable places
My writing skills are very immature and I feel very naive.
Thank you for your support
I have tried to correct some of the readers' problems, but most of the bad points are difficult to correct... I can only explain them in the subsequent plot. For example, the protagonist, the swordsman, is unqualified, too weak, etc. After all, my original intention was not to write an invincible novel. A real swordsman could probably go sideways in One Piece. So I will make the protagonist realize his shortcomings in the subsequent plot, and then work hard to become a real swordsman! -- (The score of the first book does not need to be very good. You can say whatever you want. As long as it is not nonsense, I will try to correct it. Thank you for your support.)
I really can't stand it anymore, it's so disgusting
Well written
Keep up the good work, I believe I will write better
Didn't you have some skills during your first time travel? Why can't you do anything in the pirate world?
Didn't you have some skills during your first time travel? Why can't you do anything in the pirate world?
Can't stand it
Fan fiction has always emphasized that the plot is the beginning of its failure, and good themes are written into garbage.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(16)Scraped 20d ago
A bit poisonous
When I traveled to Pirates for the second time, why didn't I think of practicing cultivation and protecting myself first? If I have to find someone, I don't even know how he died.
The early stage is too long. You write too much like this. It's too wordy and I don't have the desire to read on.
About the sword
Personally, I think that many of the descriptions are quite to my liking, and I hope the author can work harder (ง•̀_•́)ง
There are too many unreasonable places
My writing skills are very immature and I feel very naive.
Thank you for your support
I have tried to correct some of the readers' problems, but most of the bad points are difficult to correct... I can only explain them in the subsequent plot. For example, the protagonist, the swordsman, is unqualified, too weak, etc. After all, my original intention was not to write an invincible novel. A real swordsman could probably go sideways in One Piece. So I will make the protagonist realize his shortcomings in the subsequent plot, and then work hard to become a real swordsman! -- (The score of the first book does not need to be very good. You can say whatever you want. As long as it is not nonsense, I will try to correct it. Thank you for your support.)
I really can't stand it anymore, it's so disgusting
Well written
Keep up the good work, I believe I will write better
Didn't you have some skills during your first time travel? Why can't you do anything in the pirate world?
Didn't you have some skills during your first time travel? Why can't you do anything in the pirate world?
Can't stand it
Fan fiction has always emphasized that the plot is the beginning of its failure, and good themes are written into garbage.
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