Naruto: Master Hinata Destroys the Ninja World
About This Novel
The new book "Beginning with Uchiha" has been released. Welcome to collect, read and give advice~ ------ ★Konoha News Summary★ "The aggressive Hyuga Muneki troops may be trapped in a tight siege, and the frontline commander stated that they will do their best to save them." "Under the guidance of Lord Hokage, the heroic Konoha ninja foiled the enemy's conspiracy" "Jōnin Muneki defeated the enemy one after another, and the Hokage preached that peace in a generation is coming" "The arrogant representative of the extreme martial arts faction, Hyuga Muneki, attempts to challenge the order of the Ninja Village, and the Hokage declares that he will bring order to the chaos" "The fighting faction gathered without permission regardless of the safety of the Fire Nation, and His Excellency the Fire Nation's Daimyo expressed condemnation" "The Daimyo's legitimate son ascends the throne?" Where does the one-village-one-country system go from here? Today the Hokage led his troops to leave the village to put down the rebellion" "The respected, beloved, and supreme new Hokage Lord Soki Hyuga arrives in his loyal Konoha"
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Official(12)Scraped 7d ago
The writing is okay, but the timeline is wrong.
You wrote that Matt Dai was born in Konoha for 13 years. Konoha is now 38 years old, so he is 25 years old. It stands to reason that Matt Dai's son Kai is about the same age as Hatake Kakashi. In other words, Kai has been born now, and Dai is only fifteen years old. What do you think? He is 25 years old.
The last book was all about finance, but this one is just like this, it's really boring. I deleted the people in the original work and stopped writing it. Let's just read Diaomao?
So why start setting up a grumpy persona? It's not some hot-blooded pig's feet! Traveling to Naruto, splitting up the Hinata family, and going to the battlefield, normal people know that they need a LYB character to survive! The whole grumpy character is just for time travel? Didn't you consider the conflict with the character design of the subsequent article? People who read the book felt disconnected and just abandoned it? So there is no point in writing about time travel in a whole chapter, but can we just go over it in one sentence? Is it because of the word count? The word count is already low even before we start, how can we still do it in the follow-up?
The introduction has nothing to do with the main text, or it can be said to have no connection at all. I originally wanted to see if the protagonist could open the reincarnation eye, but I didn't go to the moon until the end of the last chapter, when the world was peaceful. The early war and the subsequent plot of developing the company are not interesting. Madara and Black Zetsu were both dealt with in advance. Asura was resurrected in Jiraiya, and then he was confused under the protagonist's new order. I always felt like I had seen a similar plot somewhere.
I still haven't figured it out yet
Matt Dai was born in the thirteenth year of Konoha. Shouldn't the thirty-eighth year of Konoha be 25? How did the 25-year-old Dai become one year younger than the 16-year-old protagonist?
Rubbish
Grinding and chirping, should I kill or not? I am a coward.
What ✓ eight
Whatever the writing is, it's just a mess, and it insults people's intelligence. Idiot.
It's a brainless and cool article. It was really fun when I read it. But after reading it, it's really boring when I think about it.
In Naruto, the Hyuga clan has a small perspective on the battlefield. In order to pretend to be pitiful, the author said that the protagonist is not as good as five detonating charms. What a fucking pretense! After hearing this, the Kiri ninja wanted Ao to commit suicide, and the Thunder ninja regretted letting his own ninja steal the clan's family in Konoha! Also, the original novel didn't try to trick people into transferring Hyuga's bloodline. I was also drunk! You really can't look at this world with your brain or think about it, otherwise you'll commit suicide!
Author, how do you deal with the caged bird when you separate? Purify?
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Official(12)Scraped 7d ago
The writing is okay, but the timeline is wrong.
You wrote that Matt Dai was born in Konoha for 13 years. Konoha is now 38 years old, so he is 25 years old. It stands to reason that Matt Dai's son Kai is about the same age as Hatake Kakashi. In other words, Kai has been born now, and Dai is only fifteen years old. What do you think? He is 25 years old.
The last book was all about finance, but this one is just like this, it's really boring. I deleted the people in the original work and stopped writing it. Let's just read Diaomao?
So why start setting up a grumpy persona? It's not some hot-blooded pig's feet! Traveling to Naruto, splitting up the Hinata family, and going to the battlefield, normal people know that they need a LYB character to survive! The whole grumpy character is just for time travel? Didn't you consider the conflict with the character design of the subsequent article? People who read the book felt disconnected and just abandoned it? So there is no point in writing about time travel in a whole chapter, but can we just go over it in one sentence? Is it because of the word count? The word count is already low even before we start, how can we still do it in the follow-up?
The introduction has nothing to do with the main text, or it can be said to have no connection at all. I originally wanted to see if the protagonist could open the reincarnation eye, but I didn't go to the moon until the end of the last chapter, when the world was peaceful. The early war and the subsequent plot of developing the company are not interesting. Madara and Black Zetsu were both dealt with in advance. Asura was resurrected in Jiraiya, and then he was confused under the protagonist's new order. I always felt like I had seen a similar plot somewhere.
I still haven't figured it out yet
Matt Dai was born in the thirteenth year of Konoha. Shouldn't the thirty-eighth year of Konoha be 25? How did the 25-year-old Dai become one year younger than the 16-year-old protagonist?
Rubbish
Grinding and chirping, should I kill or not? I am a coward.
What ✓ eight
Whatever the writing is, it's just a mess, and it insults people's intelligence. Idiot.
It's a brainless and cool article. It was really fun when I read it. But after reading it, it's really boring when I think about it.
In Naruto, the Hyuga clan has a small perspective on the battlefield. In order to pretend to be pitiful, the author said that the protagonist is not as good as five detonating charms. What a fucking pretense! After hearing this, the Kiri ninja wanted Ao to commit suicide, and the Thunder ninja regretted letting his own ninja steal the clan's family in Konoha! Also, the original novel didn't try to trick people into transferring Hyuga's bloodline. I was also drunk! You really can't look at this world with your brain or think about it, otherwise you'll commit suicide!
Author, how do you deal with the caged bird when you separate? Purify?
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